Basic Information Full Elvish Name: Joycie’aseoi Ess’acajolataseoi Enn’alos Bos’quellaseia Caladwen Shortened Common Name: Joycie Ess’aca Caladwen Age: 78 Gender: Female Race: Central Altalar Sexuality: Homosexual Skill Information Total Points: 70 - Ring of Tal'Sieth Combat +23 Altalar Martial Skill ( +10 Altalar, +13 Points) +15 Stave Combat Skill ( +15 Points ) Knowledge +10 Historical Knowledge ( +10 Altalar ) +10 Magic Knowledge ( +10 Points ) +6 Linguistic Knowledge ( +6 Points ) Virtue +12 Metallurgy ( +12 Points ) +4 Literary Arts ( +4 Points ) Body +8 Athletic Training ( +8 Points ) Body Shape 34 + 8 * 2 = 50 Athletic Body Shape Low Body Fat Languages Modern Altalar - Native Language Common - Free Sulavey Elven - Learned Magical Knowledge Categories Sanguinology Info ( +5 ) Soullism Info ( +5 ) Visual Information Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Blonde Hair Style: Usually long and well taken cared of. Skin Color: Fair Clothing: Generally something she can easily fight in, yet nice looking. Height: 6’6 Personality and Abilities First Paragraph: Joycie is often perceived as calm, collected, and respectful. She’s often times giving others mutual respect and kindness, however her kind and calm attitude can change quickly. If someone doesn’t give her the respect she gives and wants, she can have quite the attitude. Overall, Joycie can be kind and collected, but can be a bit rude if she’s not happy with someone. People often perceive her as she is, kind, calm, but having an attitude when in a mood. Second Paragraph: Joycie is a pretty confident girl, and thinks she’s ready for whatever is ahead of her. She’s pretty confident of her own skills and abilities, and doesn’t really fear much. Joycie however, does have a few major fears such as not being caught weak and is terrified of vampires. She sees Vampires as a true evil but not by there choosing, as she knows the disease makes them a slave in there own mind. Thus, Joycie fears not having control of her own thoughts, feelings, actions, and pleasures, Well, overall scared of being a slave in her own mind. Third Paragraph: Joycie usually fully opens herself to friends and family due to her naturally being comfortable around them. Though, if she requires something from them, she’s usually pretty demanding. Though, only when they owe her something like a favor, etc. Most of the time, she treats them kindly, and is usually always there for them. Fourth Paragraph: Joycie’s morality often leans towards neutral, though leaning towards a Good Neutral. She often wants to do the right thing, but she understands not all situations need moral fixes. She’s ready to do harm for a variety of reasons, whether she’ll enjoy it or not. However, that doesn’t mean she wants to do harm, she wants to help people most of the time. Life Story ~Born July 23rd, 229 A.C in Windgarden, Daendroc~ {Infancy and Pre-Teen} Joycie was born July 23rd, 229 A.C in Windgarden, Daendroc. Her mother being Sana Caladwen, and her father being Farhan Caladwen, Joyce also had a twin sister named Anna Caladwen. Her infancy wasn’t very eventful and was rather calm. Her full elvish name being Joycie’aseoi Ess’acajolataseoi Enn’alos Bos’quellaseia Caladwen. As she got out of infancy, she always took fascination in smithing and blade work. Joycie Caladwen would begin to take lessons in the skills of the blacksmith around pre-teen age, as well as basics with average Stave weapons such as Atraves. {Teenage Years} As Joycie begins to enter her teenage years in elvish years, she'd begin to take interest in how to use the weapons, shields, and armor she learns to smith. Though, other than that, Joycie's teen years were very uneventful as well. She grew to be very religious in the Altalar version of Faith of Estel. Towards the end of her teen years when she's closer to adult hood, she began to believe in preserving Altalar race, culture, and faith, and preserving all of Nelfin kind. Of course, with a heavy emphasis on Altalar. She'd gain an Altalar girlfriend towards her final year of her {Adulthood} When Joycie became an adult at the age of thirty, she began her pilgrimage to the corners of the old Allorn Empire, and visit the shrines of the Altalar deities of the outer and inner courts. Once the year has passed, and her pilgrimage is over, she goes to the Shrine of Talea. Here she chooses Tal'Sieth as her patron deity, and meditates looking up from the waters to the mosaics. She gained the Ring of Talea for Tal'Sieth. She began training in a variety of Altalar weapons, such as the Altalar Singing Bow, Altalar Glaive Sword, and more, while also learning how to forge them. Becoming pretty efficient with them by the time she's forty. She began to spend a lot of time in libraries, got jobs as blacksmiths and guardsmen. However, she began to put those skills for the good of Elvish kind by joining the military in northern Elvish states in Daendroc. This proved to be a mistake once the Elven War of 302 A.D came along. She was just barely managed to survive the first Battle of H'Rellen, however she suffered injuries that would take her a whole year to recover from. She quit the military to recover if it wasn't for being honorably discharged or by demand of her girlfriend, Na'retalae, moving into Madar Tellarna. However, not even a week after moving, the city came under a bloody siege. Fortunately, Joycie and her girlfriend managed to slip away in the chaos, though find themselves starving until they find a nearby village. She'd remain in that village for a year, healing from her wartime injuries. A year later after her injuries were fully healed, she'd move to the city of Hallonq and work as a blacksmith. Atleast until the Bone Horror Crisis came in 304 A.D. Joycie managed to get out of the city when the bone horrors attacked, but her girlfriend, Na'retalea, was killed by the Bone Horrors. Here, she came to the Regalian Archipelago to get away from Daendroc, settling in Silbrae until in 306 A.D, at the age of 62, she moved to the Regalian Holy City. Here she'd work small jobs for a bit. Though, joined up with the guard before being fired after multiple arrests. She'd befriend and get hired by local Isldars, and pick up Isldarin Dialect. Her life would continue onward...
Skill Information: You still have 20 proficiency points left to spend if you do wish to add them. Add that Imperial Elven isn't her native tongue. You don't have enough Nelfin History to have Ancient Elven as a language. Remove it. Personality Information: The second paragraph isn't actually finished and stops mid-sentence.Life Story: Remove mention of Ancient Elven. Make the above edits and tag me once done! @xXKingDraugarXx
@Vegemiite I've added the 20 extra points to stuff, and switched Ancient Elven around and changed it to D'Ithanian. Finished the second paragraph also! All changes are done in the color of Gold.
There is still one mention of Ancient Elven near the end of the Life Story. Remove that and we can get this approved.
@Vegemiite I think I managed to find the last mentions of Ancient Elven in the life story, and removed it. If there's still a few mentions, let me know!
@LumosJared Changes Mostly changes to fit with current Altalar lore. Pretty much anything in the green was changed, let me know if there's any issues.
@LumosJared Along with the other changes, made changes to fit the new magic knowledge category stuff.
