Rejected Sheet Jamat Diawara

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  1. Tortellinis

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    ➤【 BASIC INFORMATION】
    Full Name: Jamat Diawara
    Age: Fifty-One
    Gender: Male
    Race: Songaskia
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Eye Color: Amber

    ➤【 CORE CONCEPT】

    Jamat, while raised to believe in the Shambala faith, has since abandoned any practice in the religion. He aligns himself with a few of the beliefs of the faith, but wouldn't acknowledge himself as a true worshipper.
    Jamat is a hedonistic, self-centered, over-the-top pirate who puts himself above all others in the world. He constantly seeks out thrill after thrill, regardless of how that might manifest.



    ➤【INVENTORY】
    x1 Silver flask filled with Qorijjian Auzar
    x1 Deck of cards
    x3 Red dice
    x1 Pack of garettes
    x1 Steel dagger
    x2 Brass knuckles
    x1 Assorted regals - anywhere between 15 and 40 on a regular day

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    ➤【 SKILL INFORMATION】
    Total Points to spend; 50 age points, 10 hobby points
    +15 Unarmed Combat
    +15 Spear Combat (10 points, 5 racial)
    +5 Bola Combat
    +3 Mixology Art
    +3 Horticulture Art
    +10 Sailing Art (5 Hobby Points, 5 Points)
    +5 Husbandry Art (Hobby Points)
    -Has a pet Capuchini named Momo.


    Point Buys:
    +3 Sleight of Hand Pack
    +3 Burglary Pack
    +3 Linguistics | Faraddi


    Physical Stat: 35 [20 + 15]

    Ability Information
    Roguery:
    Sleight of Hand Pack
    Burglary Pack

    Languages | 3
    Sofaal
    Common
    Faraddi



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    ➤【 VISUAL INFORMATION】

    Jamat's only 'abnormal' traits to note are the tattoos covering his body. Most are nautical in theme; prominently featuring a mermaid-and-anchor on his right shoulder, a kraken-and-compass sleeve on his left arm, and a scorpion on his right pec.

    Jamat's features embody the stereotype of a pirate, with his own flamboyant flair to it: his long, black dreadlocks decorated with all types of trinkets, the dark eyeshadow upon his dark skin, and his scruffy chin hair are dead giveaways. He wears a colorful seaman's garb, as well as all kinds of jewels above his muscular figure of six feet seven.


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    【 PERSONALITY】
    Character Alignment - Chaotic Neutral

    Personality Type - The Entrepreneur

    Religion- Shambala [3/10]

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    【 LIFE STORY】
    • Jamat is born on December 16, 257 AC in a coastal village within Saruhanna. Jamat, as an only child, often spent time with his father -- which included various aquatic activities such as sailing and spearfishing.
    • Jamat leaves his home towards the end of his teenage years after being recruited by a band of pirates.
    • After about a decade of sailing with the crew, Jamat departs from them to settle in one of the Essalonian kingdoms. He lives a similarly nomadic life here, moving from town to town as he gambles away what money he made pirating. After amassing a bounty for some shenanigans, Jamat is captured and ends up in a prison mine.
    • After six years in the mine, Jamat and a group of prisoners manage to escape. Jamat flees Essalonia, retreating to the coast of Saruhanna he once called home. He works in a less-adventurous job, and settles down with a woman who he'd eventually have a daughter with.
    • Jamat's short-lived domestic lifestyle ends as he falls back into his old habits. He befriends a Qadir named Khayri El-Amin during this slump, and decides to join him to pirate once again, in hopes of finding riches so that he might one day redeem himself to his daughter. Jamat and Khayri sail to the Regalian Archipelago in 308 AC in search of a crew.
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    Progression Talents
    2 Warrior (Forced)
    1 Admiral


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    @Nesstro Added to the life story clarifying how he acquired his pureteks.
     
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    Updated proficiencies to remove unused profs. Added Faraddi to languages, changes marked in red. @Nesstro
     
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    Swapped some profs around again, and tweaked the backstory. Added a sentence or two to the childhood, and changed around the timelines a bit. Changes marked in gold @Nesstro
     
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    @Nesstro Sorry to tag again but I JUST REALIZED that Songaskians get a +5 racial boost to spear combat, so I moved 5 points from spear combat to javelin combat.
     
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    @Tortellinis I'll be picking this up for review. Everything looks good, approved!
     
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    @Azas switched 5 points in spear combat to unarmed combat. Replaced element brand 1 with magic bolt 1.
     
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    @Azas updated app for the new template. Shifted some proficiencies around. Removed sorcery.
     
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    @Tortellinis Please make the following edits and tag me once complete:
    • I feel that there's too many points in combat, drop 5-10 from a weapon of your choice
    • Please condense the life story down to the new bullet point format. You can keep the longer version in a spoiler if you like
     
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    Done. Took 5 points from spear combat and put it into horticulture and mixology art.
     
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