Basic Information Full Name:Ishkar Morin Age:24 Gender:Male Race:Eronidas Inventory Excessive amount of Boar Jerky Sketch of family Medium sized silver flask with name scratched into it Skill Points 40 Prof Spent 10 Hobby Spent 10 Prof unused 20 Fist Combat(15+5 Eronidas) 10 Strength Training 10 Medical Training 10 Horticulture Art (Hobby Points) 10 Bodycare Training 5 Stave Combat Body Shape Physical Stat:60 (20 Fist+10 Str+5 Horti+5 Stave+20 Brawn Power 2) Strongman Body Shape Built Body Fat Languages Common Vasar (Mother tongue) Special Traits Skin Purge 1 Brawn Power 1 Brawn Power 2 Pure Body 2 Honed Skill 1 Home Upgrade 1 Light Mend 1 (Medical Train) Light Mend 2 (Medical Train) Great Force 1 (Strength Train) Gate Smash 1 (Strength Train) Visual Information Brown Eyes Black Hair Side Shaved Haircut Aqua Blue Skin Overalls with no shoes, very simple clothing 6’10” Spoiler: Expansion Visual Info Usually wears a large toothy smile on his face, constantly filled with an expression of joy, his body would be covered in scars from head to toe, various grooves and rises tattering his would be perfect skin, his nose mildly misshapen from years of neglect and fighting. He speaks with a southern draw, like an old ranch hand Personality Lawful Good ESFJ-A The Call of Vakgar and Makosh (5) Life Story Ishkar is born to two Eronidas parents born in their homeland, his mother,Isaline, a seamstress and his father, Nishfar, a farmhand. Isaline and Nishfar live most of their early life out on their farmstead living a humble life but, they carried a secret from their families, they could not produce a child, but as the years carried on and on they could not keep the questions of their family and friends off forever and instead of facing the trials for committing Ra’ah, Nishfar and Isaline retreated to Regalia, opting to begin their life anew, in a place where they could peacefully live out their days without the judgement of others. A fews years after moving to Regalia on one fateful day Nishfar was out tending to the farmland when a large bear, concealed by fields of wheat approached him from behind rushing forward and knocking the large man to his back, but this was Nishfar’s home and life he couldnt and just surrender the fight, for this was his great beast, the one Vakgar and Makosh wished for him to chase. Nishfar raised his sickle against the beast engaging in a battle that lasted for just a brief moment but, between the two was an eternity going blow for blow, slash for slash Nishfar eventually fell the beast standing triumphantly over the corpse. The weeks after continued life as usual, but soon carried great news, Isaline and Nishfar had been blessed, for Isaline was pregnant with a boy. Months later the child was born, a child named Ishkar, Ishkar was raised as a humble farmer, always taught to mind his manners and to work hard in order to get the life he deserves and to always cherish the blessing of Vakgar and Makosh, but Ishkar knew that the farming life could never be his destiny, for he had to find his own great beast, one to make his family and gods proud. Ishkar moved to the inner cities of Regalia at the age of 17, with a new purpose and journey in mind to claim the ranks of every fight pit he could come across, and to bring joy and good times to all he considered friends. Over time Ishkar became a skilled fist fighter earning his name in a few back alley bars and pits, but now he is on the first leg of his true journey to earn his name and slay his great beast.
Hello! This is a peer review, I am not massivecraft staff so feel free to disregard my advice if you wish. Let's get started! Please state how you came to this calculation. According to your proficiency points, it should look something like this: 20 Fist Combat + 10 Strength Training + 5 Horticulture Art = 35! State from where you got these last four abilities! It helps with accuracy and less confusion! Put this under a spoiler as "Visual Expansion" -- I think that's more of an optional aesthetic choice but it helps clean things up. What did he do in between his moving away and him staying with his parents? Maybe consider fleshing that bit out a little bit more! Your backstory looks good overall. Great app! I would suggest getting rid of the double-spacing in between the bullet points, I know that happens sometimes if you copy-paste from google docs.
Ah thank you on the Phys stat, I forgot to include the 5 points in Stave combat when doing the math, good catch. And I went ahead and updated all the other little details, tysm for the peer review :D
@NanoDragonz Hello, I've claimed this application for Review, and will get back to you in twenty four hours.
