Approved Sheet Illidari "dari" Ashlindour

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    ✯ Full Name: Skallagrimir Illivara Vladarri
    ➢ Middle Altalar ~ Skallagrimir Illivaria Vanorila Von Brandonn Vladarri Lannorvanna
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    Age: 149 {looks around 25}
    Gender: Female
    Birthday: April 3, 54 AC
    ✧ Zodiac: Aries
    Race: Fin'ullen Altalar
    Vampire Bloodline: Von Kerle
    Sexuality: Bisexual
    Preferred Weapon: Spear, Trident, Iron tipped whip
    Nicknames: Dari, Dariana, Illidara, Skalla, Vladari, Vlad, Illi, Skall, Skallag

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    ✵ ruby studded dagger with her initials {400 regals} ✵
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    ✵ pouch of 30 regals ✵
    ✵ iron whiskey flask {20 regals} ✵
    ✵ small vial of mundane blood {PRICELESS} ✵
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    Spear Combat: 12 {12 core}
    Rapier Combat: 5 {5 core}
    Medical Training: 10 {10 core}
    Linguistic Science: 9 {9 core}
    Schooling: 6 {6 core}
    Roguery: 3 {3 core}

    Husbandry Art: 5 {5 hobby}
    Sailing Art: 15 {5 hobby + 5 core + 5 racial}

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    "People don't arrive broken. They start with passion and yearning 'till something comes along and disabuses them of those notions."
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    Physical Stat: 25 {Racial Cap}
    {Spear Combat, Rapier Combat, Sailing Art}
    Athletic
    Low Body Fat

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    "I am a demanding creature."
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    Modern Altalar {learned from parents}
    Common {learned from parents}
    Kathar Altalar {learned from parents}
    Shalota {linguistic science}
    Sulvaley Altalar {linguistic science}
    D'Ithanie {linguistic science}

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    Servile Collar I -
    Servile Collar II - Afflicted Life I - Blood Feeding I - Blood Eyes II - Blood Curse I - Vampiric Form I - Cursed Soul I
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    Primal Horror I - Belliard Horror I - Super Self II - Super Self IV - Super Self V - Blood Dance I - Blood Dance II - Blood Dance III - Vampiric Familiar II - Power Howl I - Corvaic Will I
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    In Skallagrimir's vampiric form, she sprouts wings {she cant fly with them} that she can move but cannot aid her in combat, her hair lengthens and turns white. Skallagrimir resembles herself slightly when she changes. Her body shape also stays the same, keeping her athletic form, but she sprouts up to 7'0. She takes her true name, Skallagrimir Vladarr, giving off a more regal, proper, and militant personality.
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    Age Control I - Arken Sense I - Arcane Mastery I - Morrlond Gift I - Morrlond Gift II - Morrlond Gift III - Skin Purge I
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    Draconic Crown - Draconic Mantle - Draconic Gaze - Draconic Coronet
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    Light Mend I - Light Mend II
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    "I'm standing in the ashes of who I used to be."
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    Eye Color: Crimson {previously hazel}
    Hair Color: Black
    Hair Style: Long & draped over left shoulder
    Skin Color: Slightly tanned pale
    Clothing: Proper clothes in dark colors. Pants, jackets, and button up shirts.
    Height: 6'2

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    Vampiric Familiar: Ziselear

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    "She wears the smell of blood and death like perfume."
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    ESTP - The Entrepreneur
    "and all I loved, I loved alone."

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    Void Worship: 7/10 Herphalas || 6/10 Arken of Power
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    Bloodshed. Plain and simple. Her physical strength and prowess are her most important aspects within her life as she has spent all of her years cultivating it. Nothing makes her feel more alive than the power within her very being.
    Alcohol. This girl loves her some good spirits (alcoholic and dead alike). She loves the freeing feeling it gives her. It is her one and only break from the stress of the FIGHT. She enjoys rum and whiskey the most, stealing it from the Wraith frequently.
    The Beach. The beach is the perfect point where water meets land. She can train tirelessly on the sand and then go swimming afterwards to cool down. The beach is where she feels the most powerful in her Morrland Form.

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    Skalla absolutely despises weakness, especially in people she knows are capable. She knows that it is and excuse. Honor and courage are very real ideals. She tries to instill them into people when she can, even if she isn't the most honorable herself.
    Skalla hates frogs! The little slimy creatures are so vile!!! She won't even dissect them for her own medical research because she thinks they're gross, and they make her skin crawl. Their ribbits are annoyingly loud when she tries to camp or sleep outdoors, and she would be content if the gods wiped them from the face of existence.
    Stuffy clothing. She hates any clothing or item that can keep her from fighting or defending herself properly. If she were invited to any high class social events, she would dress accordingly but that doesn't mean she wouldn't be pulling at her collar or trying to readjust her dress the whole time.
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    Upon the third day of April Skallagrimir Illivaria Vanorila Von Brandonn Vladarri Lannorvanna was born.
    Under the shining light of the full moon, her mother called out her name as the seas roared cacophonously. Her first baby was born. The Vladarri line was to continue. She was doted on as a child, being the only one for years. Skallagrimir thrived under her mother's care and her father's instruction, being taught the superiority of the Altalar. Thus spawning a great hatred of all Ailor, mocking them and their attempts to recreate their once great empire.
    While she was younger, her mother taught her the art of healing. Her father was her test subject when he came home from duels or spars with his friends. When she would get scuffed up from rough housing, her mother would instruct her on how to patch herself up. Soon enough, Skallagrimir would travel with her to naval camps to help heal soliders.
    Her next siblings were born, and Skallagrimir took up the mantle of big sister. She taught them how to swim, how to fight, how to lead. Every inch of her was fierce, but there was something missing and everyone could tell. There was an insecurity that she didn't know she had. Something was missing that she hadn't missed.

    Before going into the navy, she attended Talant Ilha-Faial Academy and Regalian Ecological Academy. She graduated there and was ready to prove herself.
    It was time for her to follow her father into the navy once she made it into her late twenties. She slowly made her way up in rank from a lowly foot solider to an admiral. Skallagrimir commanded her own fleets, leading her troops to victory.
    After years of wars, she unknowingly killed one of her sisters in battle. Once the news reached her, it crushed her and she lost it. In her moment of weakness, she gets kidnapped by a small coven of Von Kerles. They swiftly turn her, realizing her potential as one of them. After her transformation, she joins them as they set up Courts of Crimson Blades around Aloria.
    Throughout the decades, she looses sight of her true self. The Void starts calling to her as the vampire mentality takes over completely. This begins her complete and utter devotion to Herphalas and her lust for power.
    She spent much of her time in Dorkarth, lording over slaves and mundanes - peoples she saw as less than her. Skalla took life with no remorse. She would lure people to their deaths, landing in ports and promising them a wonderful night on her ship - only for their bodies to be dumped in the bay by morning. Her physical prowess was something bards sung about and other warriors laughed about, mocking the general until she came around and handed their asses to them on a platter made of bone.
    Soon enough, she amassed a ship full of Von Kerle, going around Aloria and infecting and feeding where they saw fit. In later years, when they got too much to handle, she killed them and sailed to Regalia with disdain in her heart and the Void warping every one of her senses. She wouldn't have it any other way, now would she?

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    Mateo Alearretyn ~ Best friend
    "I said unholy, not blasphemous."

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    Karke Dene ~ Best friend & Cousin
    "No one would hurt you again, or i'd kill them."

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    Ailred ~ Close Friend
    "Things didn't go exactly as planned, but I'm not dead, so it's a win."

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    Mirabella Wymarc ~ Always her Desprincess
    I am selfish and cruel and extremely unreasonable, but I am your servant. You will always be my Desprincess.”

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    Evelyn Daephyra ~ Estranged friend
    "She has little innocent demons inside her eyes."

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    Xeniya Wyrann ~ Ex-Comrade
    "You were great once. My cousin ruined you."

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    Edwyrd Ashlindour ~ Son
    "The eldest son of my line. You are the light of my life."

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    Samael Ashlindour ~ Son
    "My baby boy, please never leave me again."

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    Milo Shinseki ~ Cousin
    "You have disgraced this family. Sometimes I wish we had never reunited."
     
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    Claimed for review.​
     
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    @fantuinn I had to change the app some because she was recently turned Sanguine. All information needed should be there, but just let me know if I'm missing anything.
     
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    @tinykenzie Forgot to add this to my sheet. Sincerest apologies for taking forever to get to it.
    • Place your likes and dislikes into a spoiler.
    • Specify where your ten free talent and hobby points have gone.
    • I can't find a city named Essal on the wiki. Do you mean somewhere in Essalonia? In which case, how would a Fin'ullen be in Essalonia?
    • Did Illidari inform her parents and family of how her sister died? If they mourned so much, did they actually forgive her?
     
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    @fantuinn No worries!
    Likes and dislikes fixed.
    Points specified.
    "Talant Ilha Faial is hailed as the greatest of the Fin’ullen states, also commonly named “The Wall of Morrlond” and “The Seaward Spear”. Talant Ilha Faial is home to seven massive naval armory cities, named Llevoa, Algassäi, Chellanna, Essaal, Manth, Orraal and Ylganaësse." - from the forums under Existing Altalar States.
    Fixed her life story surrounding the death of her sister to answer your questions.
     
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    @tinykenzie
    • Last set of edits based on proficiency. Ritualist Aesthetic also implies your chosen ability from the list of aesthetic abilities on the Ritualism page. "Exist Ritualism" doesn't really apply, it'd have to be in reference to a specific religion.
    • Please elaborate on how her religion impacted her life in the backstory. Why does she follow Estel specifically instead of a specific Pantheon member, where she would've gained a Blessing of Talea?
     
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    tinykenzie no mourners, no funerals

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    @fantuinn Got it. I just forgot a word I meant: Exist Lavvanya mutationism. My apologies.

    Secondly, I changed some things about her religion to worship a specific god from the pantheon and expanded upon it in her life story.
     
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    @tinykenzie It's come to my attention this character is a Vampire, which I didn't realize until looking through the edits. Vampires can't have Exist ritualism at all. Essentially remove the ritualist abilities, and you may re-add them should Illidari be cured.
     
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    @fantuinn I changed it to Draconic Mutationism. Her ritualist ability is one I've seen other vampires have with approved char apps. Should Dragon not be allowed either, I'll change it. I'm sorry for any confusion or miscommunication.
     
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    Ritualism is only allowed if the religion is Void and Vampire focused. It's however incredibly unlikely that a devout Pantheon follower would swap to void ritualism so quickly, especially when Vampires have a problem with religiosity in general, hence why I'm asking for a simple greyed out solution.
     
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    She followed it, but she's not completely devout. She follows void religion now because of her coven, The Anthanasia Scion. I can change that in her app if you need me to. I didn't know you were talking about the religion part, is all.
     
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    @fantuinn it's fixed. sorry for causing you any trouble.
     
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    Approved.​
     
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    @fantuinn -
    took out her ritualist abilities
    added points to linguistic science, sword combat, husbandry, stealth rogue etc.
    aged her up by 8 years
    general aesthetic changes to the app
     
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    @fantuinn sorry for the tag again. had to update her vampire abilities and such & all changes are in pink!
     
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    @fantuinn Last change to her char sheet for a long time. I aged her up significantly because I am going for ancient perms later this month and wanted to play her more accurately as I would if she were older, if that makes sense. I am very sorry for the inconvenience. She went from 49 to 148 and her whole back story got redone. Thank you for your time. All changes in dark red.
     
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    @fantuinn Profs redone and schooling added into backstory.
     
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    @fantuinn Ancient spec perm got approved so I added her new age and her document where appropriate.
     
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    @fantuinn Hello! I added Light Mend I & II to her abilities {Mundane one, ofc} because of her already having 10 in Med Science!
     
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