Li'yin Shanari Huo

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  1. Rose

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Li'yin Shanari Huo

    • Race: Sihai

    • Age: 26

    • Sex: Male

    • Sexuality: Bi

    • Eye Color: Jade Green
    Core Concept

    Li'yin has a strong fascination with outside cultures and a love of meeting new people spurred on by his pilgrimage to the west he continues to protect his adoptive home Regalia by keeping the peace with the State Metropolitan while also trying to hold onto his cultural identity and help grow his peoples community within the city. Li'yin is very dedicated to the Loong Virtue faith having been trained as a River Guard at a young age, he has managed to detach himself from many wordly desires though is prone to following his emotions when it comes to people


    Proficiency Information


    Points left: 1


    Strength: 3
    • Duelist pack
    • Battle flurry
    • Leaping charge
    Constitution: 3
    • Bruteforce Pack
    • Ironheart Pack
    • Earthenware Craft
    Wisdom: 5 (Artifice: Jadetech)
    • Affliction Wisdom
    • Dimenthist Wisdom
    • Medical pack
    • Communication pack
    • Tussling pack
      • Hair chem patent
      • Common patent
      • Servo golem patent
      • biotic patent
      • Appliance patent
      • Lifecreator patent
    Dexterity: 1
    • Disguise
    Magic: 0
    Charisma: 2
    • Empire Language Pack
    • State diplomat pack

    Abilities
    • State Metropolitan (when in uniform only)
      • Standard style baton
      • Extended style baton
      • Constable's belt
      • Constable's shield
      • Constable's stun-gun
    Languages

    • Common (Free)

    • Wai’lan (Parent)

    • Empire Language pack (Charisma)
    Appearance Information

    • A fairly average looking Sihai with a variety of tattoo’s across his slightly tanned body that he often discreetly hides under his clothes, he prides himself in maintaining his cleanliness. A lean, Athletic, and tall man at 6 foot 1 inch Li'yin often wears his medium length hair loose with two gold ring earrings and often in his constable uniform or clothing that he brought along with him from his homeland

    Life Story

    • Born in the Southern Kingdom of Huo-Chang as the third child in a wealthy high status clan with a strong military identity Li'yin is the current heir as their first son with high expectations from his family

    • With a need to prove himself to his family Li'yin was a prodigy with a blade and discovered a natural talent for primal sorcery, as he grew up he was taught various other skills befitting the future head of the clan

    • At age 12 Li'yin under the guidance of his dreams traveled to the Temple of Fire Branding where he started training to become a River Guard as well as learned to focus on the world around him

    • 11 years passed and Li'yin was again visited in his dreams where he was urged to travel west in order to learn how to hone his skills in fighting against the corrupting forces of magic. Living in Regalia Li'yin has served as an Iron Watch, Violet Guardsmen, and now as a Constable in order to bring peace and order to his newfound home
     
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    Hey there @Rose! Claiming this app for review. Expect a reply shortly.
     
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    Although you are not required to spend them, you have an additional 10 Hobby Points to invest across Arts Proficiencies as you wish.



    This is incredibly pious for a character. Please include a sentence or two justifying why they are quite so devoted to their faith.

    Make these edits in Purple and tag me when complete!
     
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    @Mollymock Thank you, edits made. I completely forgot about the extra 10 points haha
     
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    I've also changed my original culinary arts points to extra eastern blades points, (2 points from culinary to eastern blades)
     
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    @Mollymock Hey, I know its been like a week, but Ra'nin got infected so I updated his character sheet. Need's re-reviewed please ^-^
     
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    Forgot to add I made all the edits in green
     
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    @Mollymock Heyo, edits to Ra'nin since he got cured Edits made in Whatever this colour is <3
     
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    @Mollymock updated the prof, added some new story, and fixed his ritualism ^-^
     
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    @Mollymock Updated prof and backstory a bit to fit new system. Changes made in Red. (btw never got any messages about my guard char so I'm assuming I'm still in)
     
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    @Mollymock Ra'nin's been reinfected, changes made in Orange
     
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    @Mollymock Updated to new format, redid some prof points, finally took my sorcery skill 3 and just generally redid the app
     
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    @Caelamus Sheet re-write for the Sihai update, the core character is the same but his lore got revamped as the old was reliant on outdated lore
     
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    @Caelamus Updated for the new prof system and mostly just formatting changes for the rest
     
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    Ok. Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus another skill edit to keep up with racial changes
     
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