Humaira: The Golden Rose

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  1. Aurelian30k

    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Humaira Sofia-Antinarica Reinard di Civita
      • Countirh Elector of Civita
      • Champion of the Dubois Joust
    • Race: Ailor of Dressolini decent
    • Age: 35
    • Sex: Female
    • Gender: Fluid
    • Eye Color: Azure blue
    Core Concept
    • Devout Evintarian Unionist, once venerating Elia as guidance for their actions, of the last year instead taking Ness as a true patron and committed to living a life by her example after witnessing her mercy and glory.
    • Militaristic by knighthood, critical by upbringing, extravagant by attitude . The Dressolini considering the tenets of faith as guiding for actions. Keeping a open mind for the occult but also seeing the need for regulation and education as the path for making their place in the Empire. To prevent reactive violence from both schools of thought regarding the subject.
    Proficiency Information
    Strength: 7 [Seizing Destiny]

    • Unarmed Pack
    • Blades Pack
    • Large Blades Pack
    • Axe Pack
    • Polearm Pack
    • Blunt Pack
    • Flexible Weapon Pack

    Constitution: 6
    • Light Shielding Pack
    • Heavy Shielding Pack
    • Resilience Pack
    • Physique Pack
    • Bruteforce Pack
    • Metallurgy Craft Pack

    Wisdom: 0

    Dexterity: 0

    Magic: 0

    Charisma: 1
    • Empire Linguist Pack
    Languages
    • Dressalo (Parental)
    • Common (Free)
    • Empire Linguist Pack

    Appearance Information

    Art
    • Standing 190cm tall with a ever sculpted muscle mass, Humaira holds themself presentable and neatly kept with maroon coloured hair in long form dreadlocks dangling with bands and jewellery intertwined through out them. Their body a canvas for tattoos taking from unionist imagery.
    Life Story
    • Born a bastard in the year 275 under the eclipse of the fifth of January to the drunkard of the Reinards and the socialite of the Bellavias. Gifted their father's name by the promise of steel.
    • Left fatherless by the whims of the roads and unexpecting by way of circumstance, she followed the path of many a relative in similar situations, enlisted to the life of a page under the Viridian Order. Skilled as a Shieldmaiden and the courtly conduces being the focus of education.
    • Knighted, they returned to her homeland, taking patrons with the priesthood and Viscounts of the great city-states. living through though many sieges and brutality. Taking respite in Civita to oversee the family trade and gain skills in it.
    • Becoming known for the gilted roses on her armour, she found herself contracted across the Empire, contracts serving s of the courts. This blooming into battle during the Anahera Dictatorship.
    • Reconnecting with the kin of her father and with a contract lined up, she came to the City, experiencing since the Clicker Crisis, Sendreass War. Saw to the burning of Crookback and redeeming her soul for it and recently, adjusting to a life after the Vampire Occupation.




     
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    Hello! I'm claiming this application for review! Expect a response shortly!
     
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    Review incoming, duck and cover!
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  4. Aurelian30k

    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    Changed a point of theatre art into Puretek because of ic events
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @Rochelle_ Minor changes to the app, gave her more of a Burdigala infulance considering how I have played her and the absents of the culture in the lore when I made her. All the changes to her life story are in pink
     
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    Re-Approved!
     
  7. Aurelian30k

    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @Rochelle_ Slight changes with the combatupdate.I put three points into extra heavy and then agedher down.
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @Rochelle_ Sorry for the tag, just did another small switch of points
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @Rochelle_ Need a re-review, changed her heritage slightly to a be mixed culture and with the Hobby Point update I changed up her profs some, Changes are done in pink
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    In additon to this, I also updated her Life Story to reflect the removing of the Matrais Order from lore, using the Lionpelt in its place since it fit her character. Not going to @ you about it so you can enjoy you break.
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @Rochelle_ Moved 6 points out of Rettism with the verdict on Puretek coming out.
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @Caelamus Hi, I need a new reviewer since Roch has left staff.
     
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    @TheBioverse Had the character's birthday and with that moved her profs about and added some draconic mutations
     
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    @TheBioverse Giving the app a quick weapon update, asking fro Re-review since it's Blacksteel
     
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    @TheBioverse Not sure if it needs a full review, but added a sentenace to the end of her lifestory to include the School of Marshalry in her backstory. Done in Pink
     
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    @TheBioverse Updated her profs and her prefered weapon post the Kade Commission and Metal Updates. I took the General Tactics out as it wasn't that relevant to her character or rp and went unused.
     
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    @TheBioverse Just in case it flags as me editing, I've just added aesthetics to my app
     
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    Aurelian30k The Fashion Knight

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    @TheBioverse Made to fit the Ailor Update and House Linage. Aged her up because of such and edited her points accordingly. Left ten unspent to see where I can put them from rp.
     
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    @TheBioverse Slight update increased metallurgy by five points after a couple of weeks and mentoring. Adjusted the points accordingly and factored in the point cost update for linguistics and society knowledge.
     
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    #29 Aurelian30k, Aug 3, 2020
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    @TheBioverse need re-reviewd with the prof update, scrapped Modern Altalar as it was unused in rp with the rest speaking for itself.
     
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    @TheBioverse Don;t know if it goes under a full review, changed race to Farah'deen Ailor, aged her down and swtiched up profs due to it slightly too.
     
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    @TheBioverse Just some changes based on the Ailor update, reverted back and added the optional raical stuff
     
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    @TheBioverse Update time, character aged down. Finecraft removed and statecraft shifted into bodycare. With this too I brushed up the life story with the Knight Update as well as recent changes to family lore and on going events.
     
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    @TheBioverse Updated with metallurgy, added three points to the prof. 2 from Dagger and 1 free. Listed all the packs taken
     
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