Approved Sheet Hereth Gerrinvar

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  1. MyJhintuition

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    Basic Information
    The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list.Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list.
    • Full Name: Hereth Gerrinvar, Nickname The Mans Flytrap
    • Age: 53
    • Gender:Female
    • Race: Eronidas
    • Sexuality: Bi Sexual
    Inventory Information
    • A necklace of bone teeth
    • Various vials for alchemy
    • A satchel for her items.
    • A coinpurse
    • A spare dagger just incase.
    Skill Information


    Total Points: 50 Proficiency points, 10 hobby points.
    • Fist Combat(10points): 10Proficency spent
    • Shield combat(20 Points): 15 points spent, + 5 racial boost.
    • Strength training (10): 10 proficiency spent
    • Medical Training (10): 10 points spent
    • 10 Leatherwork art(10 points): 10 hobby points spent.
    • 5 Perception training(5 Points spent)
    Body Shape
    • Physical Stat: 60(10 from fist combat, 20 from shield combat, 10 from strength 20(From Erodinas Racial Capped at 60)
    • Ripped Body type
    • Low body fat
    • Her vampire form consists of a large composition of her body forming into dark purple, void corrupted vines sprouting from her back, and moving constantly(Though not prehensile) and all down her arms are void corrupted blooms. Aswell the vines will form a large thorn on the front, constantly jabbing towards(Yet never actually harming) Her prey, as if to intimidate them. Her mouth will constantly ooze a dark purple fluid, and the vines roots and base will be seen growing into her the longer she is in the form. Additionally when she shifts, her skull will split open, into a visage similar to a venus fly trap.
    Languages
    • Vasar(Parent Tongue)
    • Common
    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations

    Visual Information

    • Eye Color: Naturally Gray and blue, but possessing blood eyes now
    • Hair Color: (Black)
    • Hair Style: Tied up in a pony tail
    • Skin Color: A semi dark green shade.
    • Clothing: Casually she wears a cut off dress, to allow some mobility, but will wear armor mostly.
    • Height: 6'8"

    Personality


    Option Two: The Core List
    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Neutral evil, They will always pursue an evil goal due to their sanguinism, but will take the side of evil that offers the greatest benefit.
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • Commander Personality type.
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Hereth follows the Prideful scorn of the faith of the dark ancients.




    Life Story (Required)
    Hereth was born and raised in Daendroc, being born to two parents of her own kind. Being raised to be a strong and disciplined warrior, she pursued her goals, constantly straining herself to achieve strength, and constant effort was put into her talents. She would begin her training at a young age of 15, not wanting to dissapoint anyone, and wanting to uphold the image of her kin. Being strong, reliable, and respectable. She would defend any and all who asked for her help, for a right price. But she did not often ask much, she asked for just enough to help feed those who needed food, or clothe those who could not clothe themselves. All around in her early years, from 15 to thirty, she was a wonderful woman, with no intention of ever going down the path she is now.

    At the age of thirty one, she took a job going to guard a trade convoy, through a forested path, trying to help this group achieve their trade route safely, as she had heard of a coven of vampires, residing within the forest, using it to hide and drag those who she swore to protect into. She took this as a personal mission, now deciding to help the merchants. And so she did. She moved on with them, blade at her side and shield in her hands. She would guide them about half way through, before the merchants and their guides heard rustling from the flora around them. Suddenly and without warning, the group was attacked by the sanguine she came out there to see, being ambushed from the tree lines she was not ready for the onslaught that occurred. Being tackled to the ground, and bitten, she was infected, however... she had no allies remaining, while she was able to wound and rid of the vampire on her, all she could do in that moment was flee. The merchant caravan, and her fellow hired muscle, were either killed or taken into the woods.

    It was only three days after, she felt the turning complete, having gotten lost in the forest without her navigator, she could not find a way to a curer before too late... and she rushed to find her feed, looking for a hunter, anything! And one she found, she found and descended upon a hunter, feeding on them quickly, and achieved full vampirism, the mindset kicking in. She saw her family as only useless cattle, and decided to leave them, in search for the holy city of Regalia, on the road she found herbs and other useful fauna of which she turned into alchemical concoctions to aide her. Eventually she got to Regalia, she wished to find refuge there, finding a new place to call home. This, results in where she is now.
     
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    Antimreoir Forza dei Male Staff Member Lore1

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    A good looking application, however;
    The stacking of Alchemy, Wyrden Vampirism and Eronidas Racials doesn't sit well with me, please reduce your investment in Alchemy OR your combative proficiencies. Right now your kit feels like it's trying to cover too many niches. Also, please justify this high investment in Alchemy in your life story, it is hardly mentioned, yet your character has mastered the skill.
    Make these changes and tag me and we'll get you approved!
     
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    @Antimreoir changed proficiency to more fit the main niche of the protector by cutting alchemy down for strength and fist
     
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    Antimreoir Forza dei Male Staff Member Lore1

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    I would like you to further lower your Fist Combat, whilst this is an improvement, it is still far too stacked in the direction of combat.
     
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    @Antimreoir changes complete lowered fist to 10 and changes its points into perception and upped alchemy just a little
     
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    Antimreoir Forza dei Male Staff Member Lore1

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    Please take the points back out of Alchemy, once again. If I may make a recommendation, Medical Training fits very well with the supportive niche of Wyrden Vampires.
     
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    @Antimreoir Changed all of alchemy over to medical, I do agree with that being actually a better option I just didn't really look into it proper on my end! Thank you for that suggestion, all changes are complete I believe.
     
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