Haqet Full Name: Haqet Ta’khara Race/Culture: Feka Asha - Teledden and Asha Age: 24 Gender: Female Occult: Archon - Unique Core Concept Haqet is a nomadic fighter who focuses on trying to perfect every aspect of themselves through copious amounts of work, proving that no matter how you were born, you have as much of a chance as anyone. They value strength and simplicity in themselves and the people around them. Their endless desire to know and understand all around them has lead to severe consequences - for better or worse - and acquiring unique and powerful magic which constantly fights with itself in their soul. Appearance Information Haqet is a 5’6 Feka-Asha, built up with a toned and athletic build and a vaguely feminine face. Their hair is brown and long, worn often in all kinds of high pony tails to keep it from their face, matching much of the fur along their body. Feline ears poke up atop their head and their tail often hangs down behind them and moves around to reflect their mood, ending in a lighter coloured and fluffy tip, reminiscent of a lion. Their arms and legs are covered in fur and animalistic from the elbows and knees down respectively, sporting much more feline, digitgrade legs and feet. Proficiency Information Combat Style - Warrior Strength: 5 Technique Parry Diving Tackle Concussive Blow Dismount Weapon throw - Free Pack Gut Punch Constitution: 4 Rebound Breather Bulwark Debuff Endurance Wisdom: 0 Tech Resist - Asha Legacy Dexterity: 3 Cutthroat Dodge Cutthroat Flank Cutthroat Evasion Magic: 2 - Void and Dragon Magic Resist Magic Smog Charisma: 0 Faith: 0 Racial Mechanics Legacy of Return Legacy of Dragons Archon Mechanics Phantom Mechanics Languages Common Ibeth (Asha) - Birth Language Modern Altalar - Birth Language Life Story / Plot Hooks Haqet grew up as a nomad in the Ithanian desert, the Paysec Wastes, and moved around frequently as a child. They spent much of their time meeting people and training themselves to become physically stronger and able to fight due to being particularly small and overlooked as a Feka, meaning any other Paysec wanderers may have met them. Haqet worked as a mercenary whilst a young adult and frequently fought Kathar and Allorn agents around the region, until their company’s ship was sank by Dread Empire magics. Other mercenaries in the area may have heard of them or met them before. Haqet was a very prolific and sudden Vampire, responsible for a great deal of chaos across the world. If you were a Vampire or Void Worshipper from Carrhen, the North, Anglia (or anyone from these regions) you likely heard of the 'Ravenlord' and their lust for chaos and power. Haqet cares much about their Ashal heritage and their people’s lost culture and wishes that they could be accepted by their own kind fully, yet understand that their magical nature and conflicting disposition is hard to accept. Regardless, they care much about uncovering the eradicated and hidden history of the Asha. Haqet vehemently believes in individual freedom and choice of the mundane and regular, but finds their view challenged frequently as they are forced to bend for the magical or occult. They stand against Allorn slavery, and eagerly speak out against the rest of the world’s own slaving practices.
Heya. I have made a list of changes and additions to be made. Nothing character changing as this character is fine. simply some formatting issues to address. Please add what type of Feka Asha they are, as in, what other race they are mixed within the race section. Feka Asha have the entire full Asha Race ability list on the Asha page on the wiki. So please put down the racial traits this race has. Even if you just say "Full Asha Racial abilities." Where did wall climb three come from? I see no sorcery points and Feka asha takes their racial powers from the Asha parent. Please remove this. Also Asha are unable to learn magic or sorcery bar the use of clockwork. Though that would be iffy for an Asha. You have put in defining features and marked it N/A even though this is not in the actual application template. I have noticed you have not made any mention of your characters childhood or teen years nor have you stated how they acquired their skills in connection to their proficiency points, please put in how and when they learnt these skills. Here is the Application Template. https://forums.massivecraft.com/threads/character-applications-template.54735/ Please follow this and also read the notes within to properly fill it out. Do all of these and your app will be approved. @Transistor
@Woodwork I updated my sheet with vampire abilities and apperance! Edit: Haqet also received the Twiceborn ritual, letting them utilise two bloodlines at once. They utilise the Wyrden bloodline as well as the von Kerle bloodline now!
@Transistor Approved, though you should probably move the character's abilities under skill information and clarify they're twiceblessed with Wyrden.
@Woodwork @Caelamus (not sure who to ping, sorry) I shifted some points around on my app to better reflect Haqet's background now that I have a better understanding of the proficiency system, as well as Progression related talents with the new update (marked changed fields in blue). Edit: also filled in the new parts i forgot to do woops should be fine now
@fantuinn Updated Magic and Specials in line with hte new Spell Point buy packs. Also swapped out Disguise Pack for Embargo Pack.
@WingedJade updated stuff with new custom kit things (when i update it in the future to reflect new stat changes and abilities i am not going to ping u) also swapped embargo for spray and pray
Raid Sheet Strength 6 Bruiser Slam Bruiser Feint Bruiser Tackle Concussive Strike Diving Tackle Weapon Throw Constiution 4 Rebound Debuff Endurance Rage Counter Interception Magic 4 Technique Parry Radiant Shield Sinistral Leap Sinistral Corrode
