Garth Of Norrlan

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  1. BeashSlap

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    Update!
    • Light re-work to place Garth into the Älgträffar Discipline of Skagger, just changed a few words.
    • Complete re-write of personality paragraphs. They were a year old, and did not fit what he's molded into now.
    Setting to 'Needs Reviewer' as the previous reviewer is now not lore staff.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    Update!
    • With the update of the School of Skaggers, the backstory has included The Burning of the North, and elevation to Grand-Master of the Order.
    • Proficiency points have been moved around due to the new Frontline Combat introduced.
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    Updates!
    • Updated to the new personality format.
    • Aged down to 30.
    • New aesthetics, why not.
    Tagging @Caelamus for re-review.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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    Updates!
    • New Proficiency Rewrite update.
     
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    BeashSlap The Watcher

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    Previously claimed Lore Staff is no longer Lore Staff.
     
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  13. BeashSlap

    BeashSlap The Watcher

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    Update
    • Updated Proficiencies, more collected.
    • Updated Personality to the 3 bullet points.
    • Updated Backstory, as the previous was done in 2018, and the current now serves to properly build character.
    Currently lack a reviewer.
     
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    OkaDoka Bottomless Pit Supervisor Staff Member Lore3

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    Claimed.
    Expect a review today or tomorrow.
     
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    Update
    • Added Drahl Lineage - Throatcapswald War Owl Companion.
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    OkaDoka Bottomless Pit Supervisor Staff Member Lore3

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    BeashSlap The Watcher

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    U P D A T E - The new proficiency set up is here. I'm a bit late to the game.

    - I have decided to dedicate his points in a pure warfare-orientation. Since the character's creation, he's been almost always used in combat scenarios, so I figured to set his proficiencies accordingly. He grew up a soldier, worked himself into a command role, and now developed into a capable leader.
    - I have decided to remove any mention of the School of Skagger from his life story. He is no Skagger. I don't want to play him as something he's not. He's a practical, gritty Northman. As a result, his life story is partially reworked.
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    U P D A T E

    - New proficiencies to fit the current update.
    - Adjusted backstory slightly to mention schools, nothing more.

    @OkaDoka
     
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    OkaDoka Bottomless Pit Supervisor Staff Member Lore3

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    @BeashSlap Set your application to Needs Reviewer, trying not to do char apps anymore. o>
     
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  22. Azas

    Azas lofi sihai

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    Claiming this for review, expect a follow up shortly.
     
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    Azas lofi sihai

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    @BeashSlap Only one note, tag me once completed.
    • Age doesn't match up with date of birth, please amend to match. Current year is 309
     
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    Fixed!
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    Name Change | Garth Rodsvar.
     
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    U P D A T E

    - Updated to new format,
    - Updated Proficiencies,
    - Added new Ailor Racials.

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    Azas lofi sihai

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    Please condense the life story to the bullet point format in the template. Feel free to keep the longer version in a spoiler
     
  28. BeashSlap

    BeashSlap The Watcher

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    Hello. These changes were originally done just before exam time, and as a result this page and response fell into the cracks. I have shortened his life story and adjusted to the new Ailor racial update.
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    App looks great! Love the cold aesthetic, and it was super clean and easy to review.

    APPROVED
     
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    BeashSlap The Watcher

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    @Yurs Hello, I would like to have this sheet reviewed in case intrusive thoughts win.
     
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    he (possibly) back
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Supremium

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