Approved Sheet Gabrielle Odiane

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    "You are Gabrielle fucking Typhonus.
    You are impeccable, and capable of such insane heights
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    Full Name: Gabrielle Odiane
    ✮ Nicknames: Gabi, 'Elle'
    ✮ Previously: Gabrielle von Falkenreich, Gabrielle Typhonus
    Race: Stateland Ailor
    ✮ Culture: Wirtem

    Age: Twenty-Three
    ✮ Birthday: June 13th, 286 AC
    ✮ Zodiac: Gemini

    Gender: Female
    ✮ Pronouns: She/Her
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Eye Color: Dark Green

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    ✮ Religious Beliefs:
    Gabrielle is a semi-devout Dogmatic Unionist. Her faith seems to waver with time, but she eventually gains it back and looks to the religion for guidance. She has chosen God Emperor Allest and God Emperess Elia as her patrons, alongside the Everwatcher.

    ✮ Character Concept:
    A true Wirtem and Griffer graduate, Gabrielle takes pride in her culture. Although, she is a firm believer in woman empowerment.

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    “I'm searching for something that I can't reach.”
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    50 Age Points || 10 Hobby Points

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    (20) Heavy Ranged Combat
    ✮ Among her training at the School of Griffer, Gabrielle took the Huntress Path and began training with her given "Griff" Hunting Bow. After the past six years in the school, the young Falkenreich has become quite good at welding the weapon.

    (6) Roguery
    ✮ Explanation TBD, but she's got it.

    (5) Rapier Combat
    ✮ A secondary among her choice of weapons, and sometimes used as a hobby for fencing.

    (3) Linguistics
    ✮ Taught alongside her original languages along with common in school, Gabrielle caught onto the languages quickly and became fluent in them with no time. These assist her with communicating to others, impressing people, or listening in on conversations that are wanted to be unheard.

    (1) Dagger Combat
    ✮ A concealed dagger on her leg. Just for, last minute decisions, if you would.

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    (10) Perception Training (5 Age Points + 5 Racial Boost)
    ✮ During her training, Gabrielle has learned to pick up things that seem abnormal, or movements in terms of combat.

    (10) Husbandry Art (5 Age Points +5 Hobby)
    ✮ Her forever best friend, Aldo, a two year-old Calemberger Ardhund.
    ✮ Calus, her Heerstepper.

    (5) Dancing Art (+5 Hobby)
    ✮ Staying quick and balanced on her feet.
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    Physical Stat: (20 Heavy Ranged Combat + 5 Rapier Combat + 2.5 Dancing Art + 1 Dagger Combat) = 28.5
    Body Shape: Toned
    Body Fat: Low

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    Common (Free)
    Calem (Upbringing)
    Dressolini (Linguistics)

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    Drahl Lineage Abilities
    Battle Sense I
    Spirit Familiar I - Tsarr Cat called by the name of Fritzi.
    Honed Skill III

    Heavy Ranged Combat Abilities
    Heavy Shot
    Knocking Shot
    Marking Shot
    Bow Slam

    Roguery Abilities
    Wall Climb 3
    Rogue Gift 4


    Perception Abilities
    [Counter] Rogue Gift 1
    [Counter] Rogue Gift 2
    [Counter] Rogue Gift 3
    [Counter] Rogue Gift 4
    [Counter] Rogue Gift 5
    [Counter] Guard Forgery Pack
    [Counter] Goverment Forgery Pack

    Von Kerle Abilities
    Servile Collar 1
    Servile Collar 2
    Afflicted Life 1
    Blood Feeding 1
    Blood Eyes 2
    Blood Curse 1
    Vampiric Form 1
    Cursed Soul 1


    Bloodline Kit
    Primal Horror 1
    Belliard Horror 1
    Super Self 2
    Super Self 4
    Super Self 5
    Blood Dance 1
    Blood Dance 2
    Blood Dance 3
    Vampiric Familiar 2
    Power Howl 1
    Corvaic Will 1
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    “I thought he lied when he said take my time to dream.”
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    Eye Color: Emerald Green
    Hair Color: Raven Black
    Hair Style: Normally styled up in some way, and rarely ever down.
    Skin Color: Fair
    Clothing: Varies between dresses and Griffer styled outfits.
    Height: 5 feet, 8 inches. (172.79 cm)

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    “Learn to love what burns, and gather courage to return.”
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    A small child wails in the clinical area within an estate in Calemberg.

    Born to Albrecht and Josephine Typhonus in the summer of 286 AC, Gabrielle Typhonus was the youngest of three siblings. Ahead of her, her older brothers Reginald and Reimar paved a road of expectations for the girl. While living within the many estates and places the Typhonus’ owned, life was as smooth as could be for her early years. In terms of what she was striving to be, her biggest inspiration was Reginald by far. The two, though years and years apart, were very close. Her childhood with him did not last very long as he was sent off to schooling around the age of 10, and into war at age 11 (She does not remember any of this, but trusts what Reginald says, so). Reimar on the other hand, was distant growing up with Gabrielle. He was very quiet and reserved, which is almost the complete opposite as the young girl. To keep herself from being on her lonesome, she was gifted a Calemberger Ardhund, which she named Aldo.

    Schooling was something that came somewhat easily to Gabrielle. The best tutors a child could ask for were at her fingertips. She was educated and sent off to the Regalian Ecological Academy between the ages of twelve and fifteen. By the age of sixteen, when her education had come to a standstill, she decided to consult her parentals about becoming a Griffer student. Somewhat wary of the sheltered girl’s fighting capabilities they decided no the first time around. With the help of her brothers, the trio eventually convinced them to send her off. Accompanied by her cousin Cecille, the two began their path and enrollment into the academy. Gabrielle ultimately decided that she would do much better down the Hunter’s Path rather than the Duelist, and the plan was set from there on out. Thus began the six years of training.

    Gabrielle did not possess the same amount of combat prowess as her brothers did. It was blatantly obvious. She put in hours into training with her weapon, slowly beginning to show various amounts of improvement, but still slightly behind the other girls. It wasn’t easy, but Gabrielle’s longing to make her family proud was the only thing that pushed her forward besides Cecille’s encouragement. By her third year in the academy, she had easily become one of the best sharpshooters in their class. Graduation came quickly, and she contributed an extra year to working with the younger girls after her. Cecille departed to Regalia, leaving Gabrielle to Calemberg with the rest of their family.

    Not soon after, in the rise of her brother Reimar’s house, ‘House Falkenreich’ she was invited to join along. She left that evening, and made the trek to Regalia. She was no longer Gabrielle Typhonus, but Gabrielle von Falkenreich.

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    Reginald Typhonus (Brother) [@nath_n] [Music Theme]
    "I'll make you proud."
    "Maybe you are not as 'good' as I thought you were.."
    "I'll follow you to whatever end. You protect me. Thank you, brother."

    Reimar of Calemberg (Brother) [@ChapterDeath] [Music Theme]

    "No. You are just as terrifying as I thought you were. But maybe now, even.. worse."
    "My thanks for saving me from Reginald, but now what?"
    "Part of me is terrified of you, but the other half? I'm not so sure."

    Brielle Cadieux (Friend) [@Gabigailll]
    "After the falling of my noble house, I haven't seen you. I hope you are alright."

    Rian du Saulleve (Friend) [@BeaneyBaby]
    "I suppose we're both in the same situation, hm? Come find me sometime, please."

    Erwin Braunschweiger (Undecided) [@BeetrootSalad]
    "Time to find out why my brothers kept you alive."

    Elkhazel (Close Friend/Ex-Palest) [@Trepidity]

    "I need you more now than I have ever before."

    Theresia Kaeppler (Friend??) [@FeralGayWalnut]
    "I wish I could be as brave as you are."

    Samille (Acquaintance) [@Dachuur]
    "You are very intelligent. Do not lose that aspect of yourself."

    Cecille Howlester (Cousin) [@Messtro]
    "Griffers have to stay together."

    Klaus von Falkenreich/Typhonus (Cousin) [@Battlebrawn]

    "We only spoke a handful of times once I came to Regalia. I wish you the best, though."
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    @Caelamus Hola.

    I changed the (5 Talent Points) to (5 Age Points) and the Honed Skill III to Racial Boost.
    + 10 Pathfinding
    + 3 Schooling
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    If anything else needs done let me know!
     
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    @Caelamus

    Hi! Bringing back Gabrielle. Here's the changelog.
    • Infected with the Von Kerle bloodline. All abilites put on the sheet in red.
    • Perception Update: All ability counters added in red.
    • Name has reverted to Gabrielle Typhonus rather than Gabrielle von Falkenreich with the fall of the noble house.
     
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    AYO that time. Here's the changelog.
    • Removed Pathfinding Art
    • Removed Fist Combat
    • Dropped one lingustic language
    • Added Roguery
    • Added Heavy Ranged Combat
    All of these edits are made in blue, and the abilities have been updated accordingly!
     
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    Ok approved.
     
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    I am claiming this character application for staff review!
    I notice you've got the character under re-review. What was changed that needs a look-over?
     
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    I’m currently working on finalizing points!! I’ll @ you once I am done reworking her if that’s alright. :)
    I moved it so it wasn’t seen as approved and used on accident for my actual points, or to seem like I was sneaking my points around since I am still making things okay.
     
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    Sure! Feel free to give me a bump once you've finished these changes. Thanks for letting me know.
     
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    @Volaie YoOoooo

    POINTS FIXED :)

    Also fixed the Language to Calem instead of New Regalian, and adjusted Phsyical Stat Accordingly.
     
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    Volaie the absolute coolest Staff Member Lore2

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    Hello! Sorry for the late reply.
    STAFF REVIEW
    • First off, you'd probably want to remove the 'THIS APPLICATION IS CURRENTLY UNDER CONSTRUCTION' from your top row.
    • Your characters last name is not able to be used. Typhonus is DM owned now along with Falkenreich being fallen. Please create a new surname for your character, as you cannot use either.
    • You have 2 extra Core Points, if you want to plug those in anywhere.
    Please make these changes in another color and tag me when finished. If you have any questions, feel free to tag me on this thread.
     
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    Am I still allowed to use Typhonus/Falkenreich in my “Previously:” and in backstory? Or does that need to completely disappear as well? @Volaie
     
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    Please have it all disappear. You can keep the overall gist of your Life-Story, all you need is to have both Typhonus and Falkenreich removed from the application.
     
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    @Volaie Hey!!
    - Name Removed. She now goes by Gabrielle Odiane.
    - Consulted Billy in the interest of mine and nath_n's character (Reginald). The backstory stuff is allowed to stay, but I am, like you said, not allowed to use the name in game and/or on the application as its name.
    - Marked the 2 unused points as unused.
    - Cleaned up the Backstory.
    All up to you now! :)
     
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    Perfect!
    APPROVED.
     
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