Played Character Finnidh Blárach

Discussion in 'Character Sheets' started by Wexford, Apr 21, 2021.

  1. Wexford

    Wexford

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2016
    Messages:
    34
    Likes Received:
    1


    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]

    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]

    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]
    Full Name: Finnidh Eanraig Mac Atherdin Uí Blárach
    ﹥ Nickname: Fin, Eanraig
    Race: Ailor
    ﹥ Culture: Gallovian
    Age: 24
    ﹥ Date of Birth: 2nd June 286 AC
    Gender: Man
    Sexuality: Bisexual
    Eye Color: Blue​

    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•


    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]

    Concept: True to his highlander heritage, Finnidh stands in opposition to compromising on any of his beliefs, not for his fellow peers, nor for the Emperor. Being a skilled shipmaster, he is often found in the employment of various Regalian fleets as an admiral.

    Religion: Having been raised to worship the Celik Old Gods, Finnidh has never once thought to stray, continuing to honour these gods via frequent offerings.

    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]
    Proficiency Points: 14 (5 Remaining)
    ﹥ STR: 2
    ↠ Hunter Pack
    ↠ Diver Pack
    ﹥ CON:
    1
    ↠ Resilience Pack
    ﹥ WIS:
    0
    ﹥ DEX: 3
    ↠ Blunt-Tip Pack
    ↠ Trickery Pack
    ↠ Rushdown Pack
    ﹥ MAG:
    0
    ﹥ CHA: 3
    ↠ State Leadership Pack
    ↠ State Agitator Pack
    ↠ North Linguist Pack
    Abilities
    ﹥Concussive Strike
    ﹥Swimming Expert
    ﹥Knocking Shot
    ﹥Dirty Fighter
    ﹥Spray and Pray
    ﹥Shield Cover
    ﹥Battle Command
    ﹥Forced Aggro


    Languages
    ﹥ Common
    (Free)
    ﹥ Gallwech (Native)
    ﹥ Skodje (NL Pack)
    ﹥ Calem (NL Pack)
    ﹥ Anglian (NL Pack)
    ﹥ Breizh (NL Pack)
    ﹥ Aontaithe (NL Pack)
    ﹥ Barrudh (NL Pack)​

    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]

    Standing at 6”2’, Finnidh boasts a stocky figure, and rugged ginger hair. To no surprise, he can often be seen dressed in plaid patterns and walking stick in hand, despite having no accessibility requirements for such an aide.
    •----•----•----•----•----•----••●••----•----•----•----•----•----•

    [​IMG]
    Childhood: Finnidh was one of four born to Edina and Eddair Blárach on the 3rd March 286 AC in his family’s ancestral seat of Atherdin. He was a difficult and independent child, and held a natural affinity with the sea - Though he enjoys his time alone, he has always looked up to his three siblings, most notably Natharia, the oldest.

    Adolescence: Much of his teenage years were spent with his father as he was lectured on the importance of providing for the family in line with Gallovian customs. Finnidh would be accompanied on many a hunt, gaining valuable experience in the tracking and trapping of wild beasts.

    Early Adulthood: Early into adulthood, he was encouraged to enrol in naval school, owing to his exceptional navigational skills, and his love for the sea. Finnidh first decided to settle for a brief time in the Holy City when his family became ennobled, honouring his commitment to provide for the family in their time of need. However, it was not long before he once again set off to chase his passion of ruling the sea.

    Regalia: Now with his curiosity satisfied, and a deep yearning to return to the Capital, Finnidh once again returns to City life in hopes that he may act as an ambassador to the Emperor for the Gallovian people.​
     

    Attached Files:

    • Powerful Powerful x 3
    • Cuddles! Cuddles! x 1
    • Winner Winner x 1
    • Friendly Friendly x 1
    #1 Wexford, Apr 21, 2021
    Last edited: Feb 1, 2023
  2. Magivore

    Magivore No Rest For The Wicked

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2013
    Messages:
    1,479
    Likes Received:
    4,284
    I hereby claim this application.
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
  3. Magivore

    Magivore No Rest For The Wicked

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2013
    Messages:
    1,479
    Likes Received:
    4,284
    Hi there! Just before I can get you approved, we have one thing we need to fix. Send me an alert by tagging me when you complete this change!

    These are contradictory. Chaotic Neutral characters do not follow rules and are not particularly restrained by morality, instead being driven by personal desire. Lawful Evil characters adhere to a set of rules and decide to forego morality entirely. Please pick one or the other, and after reading your character, I feel that perhaps Lawful Neutral to Lawful Neutral will better fulfill this character's personality, or have his personality better reflect Chaotic Neutral.
     
    • Constructive Constructive x 1
  4. Wexford

    Wexford

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2016
    Messages:
    34
    Likes Received:
    1
    @Magivore Fixed!
     
  5. Magivore

    Magivore No Rest For The Wicked

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2013
    Messages:
    1,479
    Likes Received:
    4,284
    Oh whoops I meant to say Lawful Evil and Lawful Neutral. I didn't proofread my own response as you can probably tell, but this works too, APPROVED.
     
  6. Wexford

    Wexford

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2016
    Messages:
    34
    Likes Received:
    1
    @Magivore

    Touched up some things:
    • Added portrait and better page dividers
    • Added Brewing and Winemaking Art
    • Added a paragraph (4th paragraph) to the life story to add to the skill change
     
    • Winner Winner x 1
  7. Antimreoir

    Antimreoir Refugee

    Joined:
    Jun 26, 2018
    Messages:
    856
    Likes Received:
    41
    Hello! I will be taking this application for review going forward, please tag me regarding changes or edits. @Wexford.

    That being said, everything appears to be in order. Reapproved.
     
    • Cuddles! Cuddles! x 1
  8. Wexford

    Wexford

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2016
    Messages:
    34
    Likes Received:
    1
    Complete and fundamental overhaul @Lore
     
  9. ChapterDeath

    ChapterDeath Roof that speaks Vampire Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    May 20, 2018
    Messages:
    1,155
    Likes Received:
    59
  10. ChapterDeath

    ChapterDeath Roof that speaks Vampire Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    May 20, 2018
    Messages:
    1,155
    Likes Received:
    59
    Approved, @tag me for re-review when you invest the other points, if you do.
     
    • Powerful Powerful x 1

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice