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Character Information
Full Name: Feyno Näul (How to say: Vero Raul)
Heritage / Culture: Sihndar - Dragonkin
Age: 23
Gender / Pronouns: Male He/Him
Religion: Draconism
Occult: Belialus Godborn - Demon Kindred
Character Occupation: Traveller
Appearance Information
Eye Color: (Covered by a bandana)
Skin Color: #cfb3a5
Hair: #f1efee
Height: 5'9
Body Type: Fit, but not extreme muscles.
Additional Features: Right eye is corrupted with the scarring being blackish blueish, along with being born with albinism.
Skill Information
Hobbies and Talents: Stargazing, Nature walks
Languages: Altalar, Common
Backstory/Plothooks:

• Born in Drowda, a land scarred by the Cataclysm and plagued by constant Demon invasions.
• A Sihndar warrior with a strong martial heritage, trained in traditional combat using a bow to defend against Demons.
• Feyno is also a Belialus Godborn, born through Divine Countenance, with his divine parentage linking him to Belialus, a Demon Lord of the Abyss who embraces Unionism.
• Feyno is not driven solely by vengeance. His connection to Belialus encourages him to seek a deeper, metaphysical evolution of the world through the merging of Demons and magic.
• Enjoys stargazing and nature walks in his moments of respite, reflecting on his dual identity as both a Sihndar and a Godborn.
• Struggles with loyalty to the Sihndar, who view his divine connection with suspicion, and his belief in Belialus' vision.
• Feyno's status as a Godborn makes him a controversial figure among the Sihndar, who are suspicious of his Demon-blooded heritage.
• His loyalty to Belialus and the principles of the Evintarian Schism puts him at odds with traditional Sihndar beliefs.
• A faction within the Sihndar may call for his exile or even elimination, viewing his divine connection as a threat to their battle against Demons.
• Some within the Sihndar see Feyno as a bridge between two worlds—the Sihndar and Belialus' teachings.
• This faction believes his divine heritage could offer new ways to combat the Demon tide or even provide a different path to spiritual evolution.
• His choices will determine whether he remains loyal to the Sihndar or embraces his divine parentage to reshape the fight against the Demons.

Combat Proficiencies and Abilities
Attack Stat: Dexterity
Defense Stat: Constitution
[15/15 points spent]
Proficiency Points:
Strength: 0
Constitution: 4
Shield Taunt
Shield Phalanx
Shield Reversal
Shield Snare
Intelligence: 0
Wisdom: 0
Dexterity: 7
Deadeye Pinshot
Deadeye Drillshot
Deadeye Luckshot
Deadeye Doubletap
Deadeye Focus
Deadeye Quickshot
Deadeye Execute
Faith: 2
Paladin Stance
Paladin Bulwark
Magic: 2
Protocol Coding (Free Pack)
Protocol Gateway
Protocol Eject
Charisma: 0