Evil Tower For Chronikatr

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Rate it 1-10
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The big floaty orb thing doesn't look too lore friendly.
2.
Just doesn't even look menacing...
 
I really don't know how to make the eye thing look better, I tried a lot of different things it just gets worse.
 
I really don't know how to make the eye thing look better, I tried a lot of different things it just gets worse.
Try using red stained clay mixed with red wool, brick, and nether rack/brick. Then add in some orange and gold for the eye. That would be my suggestion. You will also need to scale the building to be much taller than what you have, for to get the level of detail in the eye, it will have to be fairly large. Furthermore, I suggest that you don't even try to replicate a tower from an already existing movie, create your own! It will be more fun and it will look better as it won't be constantly compared to another, better version.
 
Also make it taller, and wider, and with spikes. If you can do what I am imagining in my head no one would argue that it would be a 10.
 
So your telling me to take down the eye and make the tower taller, with more spikes?


Exactly.

Well it's more complicated than that, but evil towers are more menacing if they are taller and spikier, it's a well know fact among us evil tower enthusiasts.8-)
 
This looks like something people would build in classic minecraft, The tower to big gross orb of lava isn't very proportional either. 1.5/10
 
1 For the sunset 1 For the Snow Mountain 1 For the lava 1 For the curiousity this has given me when it's being griefted 1 For the Massivecraft ResourcePack 1 For the gravel Road = 6
-1 cus my Hands hurt while typing this and it's late
= 5
 
4 honestly the location brings down the rating im giving.
 
Yeeah, okay this was just the start of something very big I'm building, I plan on making that whole actual tower with the lava and all, up against the mountain as soon as I get unbanned from massive. :D
 
I say at a 1.
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Not only does the tower depend somewhat on what Beowwulf said, but location, location, location. If this was placed near the top of a Volcano, that would be cooler. Let alone, the biome's condition also says "I look sexy" or it says "i r profeshunal". The bits of Cobble could be removed, even that little thing is quite visually disturbing, let alone the eye is too large for the rest of the build.
Also, you need to note that Texture pack also affects how it could look. I have two example builds, I spent about 5 minutes to build each one,

This one looks okay, because it blends within the background, and it has an appropriate texture pack. 2013-09-02_13.08.09.png

Now this one doesn't look as well with a different pack, does it? [See bottom]

This is one no matter the pack, doesn't look good at all because of location and style. 2013-09-02_13.15.52.png


Location, style, texture, Time. Take time in your builds, too! A good 5 spare minutes on a build can make it change from poo to new!
 

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1: this is does not look evil
2: Not much skill was put into this project
I honestly rate this at a 2
 
Are you trying to tell me Chronikatr is Mordor in Massive or....?
 
1.5. But seriously, get rid of the overly tanned testicle. And if you can, try running a nicer texture pack, you'll feel better for it.
 
I think you thought the eye itself would get you good ratings, but the eye is to big and to square for it to work. Like people have said make it bigger it will let you expand on the details that will give you the feel of an evil tower.
 
It has very strange proportions, and the fact that it is surrounded by tall mountains undermines the intimidating value of it. (not that it had a whole lot to begin with, tbh :/ )

I am going to rate it 3/10 simply because I have seen worse builds, though frankly if I were the leader of Chronikatr (or any evil faction, for that matter), I would not allow you to build this in the faction lands.
 
1 It's quite sad... I would go lower but I cant see the detail within the base.