Approved Sheet Erick Von Eisner

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  1. whypr

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    • Full Name | Erick Wilhelm von Eisner.
    • Age | 30.
      • Birthday | November 17th, 279 AC.
    • Gender | Male.
    • Race | Ailor.
      • Lineage | Lexxon.
      • Culture | Calderliga.
    • Sexuality | Heterosexual.
    • Preferred Weapon(s) | Longsword.
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    Proficiency Allocation (50 Points, 10 Hobby, 1 Unspent).

    • Core Group
      • Sword Combat | 5 (+5 Points).
    • Talent Group
      • Perception Training | 10 (+10 Points).
    • Hobby Group
      • Theatre Art | 15 (+10 Hobby Points, +5 Racial Boost).
      • Sailing Art | 10 (+10 Points).
    • Linguistics
      • Ithanian Language | 3 (+3 Points).
      • Anglian Language | 3 (+3 Points).
      • Daendroque Language | 3 (+3 Points).
      • Etosian Language | 3 (+3 Points).
      • Velheim Language | 3 (+3 Points).
    • Schooling
      • Diplomacy - Collegiate d’Évraux | 3 (+3 Points).
      • Statesman - Regalian Statesman Academy | 3 (+3 Points).
      • Finance - Narlas College for Commerce | 3 (+3 Points).
    Body Shape
    • Body Stat | 17.5 (5 Sword Combat + 5 Sailing Art + 7.5 Theatre Art).
    • Body Shape | Athletic.
    • Body Fat | Average Body Fat.
    Languages
    • Common | Educated.
    • Alt Regalisch | Native Language.
    • d’Ithanie | Educated through Linguistics.
    • Anglisch | Educated through Linguistics.
    • Daendroquin | Educated through Linguistics.
    • Etos | Educated through Linguistics.
    • Skodje | Educated through Linguistics.
    • Old Ceardian | Free through Linguistics.
    Special Traits
    • Lexxon Lineage
      • Shrewd Insight I - (Control Power)
      • Keen Mind I - (Trigger Passive)
      • Mind Wall I - (Toggle Passive)
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    • Eye Color | Forest green.
    • Hair Color | Chestnut brown.
    • Hair Style | Extremely well-kept and pushed up.
    • Skin Color | Well tanned.
    • Clothing | Calderligan fashion, Hanse style.
    • Height | 6’2 ~ 188 centimeters.
      • Weight | 186 pounds ~ 84.4 kilograms.
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    • Character Alignment | Lawful Neutral.
      • A man built on the foundation of understanding authority, Erick trusts wholeheartedly in the ideals and leadership of the Regalian Empire.
    • Character Personality Type | ESTJ - The Executive.
      • Though Erick is often found buried in his work, he is a strong administrator, leader, and conversationalist. He spends vast amounts of time studying individuals, situations, diplomacy, economics, and more- all in the effort to better himself and his business.
    • Character's Religion | Unionism (7/10).
      • Erick was thrust into Unionism from a young age- practicing heavily throughout his life. He believes the Spirit to be a source of his success in life.
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    Birth and Childhood
    • Erick Wilhelm von Eisner was born on November 17th, 279 AC into House von Eisner, and thus thrust into a chaotic and struggling business. He was the second-born to Otto von Eisner in the Calderliga Union. Throughout his early childhood, Erick spent his time exploring the port of the city- and even aboard ships alongside his father. While he was far from capable of understanding the ins and outs of mercantilism, he was being groomed from a young age to work economics.
    • The Handel von Eisner, the business of the House, was in a state of chaos and struggle- and the man responsible for said disaster was Erick’s father; a man far from capable of leading an entire House and company. From as young as six, Erick was brought along the many trade missions that his father, Otto, went on in order to instill the art of business in the boy.

    Adolescence and Young Adulthood

    • Despite all this talk of business and work, Erick still had great amounts of freedom in his youth. While his family was not known for creating militaristic individuals or combatants, many of the children were educated in the art of the sword. He spent a good number of years learning swordsmanship from tutors within the Calderliga Union and practiced the skill as he traveled around the Archipelago.
    • As early as thirteen, Erick was sent to a number of schools to prepare him for adulthood. First, he was sent to Ithania and the Collegiate d’Évraux, spending some years learning the art of diplomacy with foreign and domestic leadership. From there- the Holy City, and to the Regalian Statesman Academy for the ins and outs of managing an administration.
    • Now nearing the end of his adolescence, Erick returned to the Calderliga Union and the home of the House, taking the final year of his young adulthood around the Handel once again. Throughout this period of adolescence, Erick began to truly grow devout in his practice of Unionism. He had been introduced to the religion long ago at birth with his family, but his belief in the Spirit became strong during this period.

    Adulthood and Present

    • Now twenty years old, Erick was whisked away to the Narlas College of Commerce in Dragenthal, graduating with flying colors around 302 AC. He was considered fully educated now, returning for good to take up the patriarchy of House von Eisner.
    • Erick began instantly on reforming the poor agreements that his father had found himself roped into- cleaning up first whatever debt was owed to other trade businesses and the Calderligan Hanse. It took him a grand couple of years to clean up the problems within the business, though with time and extraordinary effort it was handled.
    • For many years Erick worked on building the family and its business, throwing himself into his own idealistic view for the future. Throughout this period, he found himself constantly traveling and building relationships; accompanied frequently by his kin. Erick traveled throughout the Regalian Archipelago and beyond, building up some form of reputation and legitimizing his business. As he traveled, Erick spent time learning the languages of many foreign cultures to fare better in discussions outside of Calderliga.
    • As of recently, Erick and the leaders of the Handel von Eisner decided upon relocating the center of their business to the Holy City itself, believing that the city had the most opportunity to grow and reach aristocracy. Soon after, the house entered the Regalian nobility.
     
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    @whypr Apologies for the delay! Here is your review:

    No issues I could find! Approved!
     
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  4. whypr

    whypr bradberry!

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    @Lizmun After playing the character for some time, I've edited the application to better reflect how Erick has been played. These were my changes.
    • Aged down from 34 to 30.
    • Lowered Sword Combat from 10 to 5.
    • Added Etos and Skodje through Linguistics.
    • Some minor backstory changes to reflect current events and proficiency changes.
     
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    @whypr Looks good, still approved
     
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