Basic Information Erdane Trafleur Age: 30 Gender: Male Race: Bolven Ailor Breizh Sexuality: Find out IC Preferred Weapon: Spear/Shield Skill Information 34/34 Core + 10 Talent + 10 Hobby Points Core +16 Spear Combat (+16 Points) +10 Two Handed Blunt Combat (+5 Racial Boost +5 Points) +5 Unarmed Combat (Points) +4 Shielding Combat (+4 Points) Talent +5 Brass Instruments (+5 Talent) +5 Stealth Training (+5 Talent) Hobby +10 Glass Arts (+5 Hobby +5 Points) +5 Writing Arts (+5 Hobby) Body Shape Physical Stat: 35 Physical Stat Muscularity: Toned Body Fats: Low body Fat Languages Common - Learned - Free Picaron - Parental Angilan - Parental Special Traits / Mutations Bolven Racial Abilities Body Morph I Super Self I When used Erdane gains steaming skin, an orange like glow, and blazing orange eyes. Super Self III Visual Information Eye Color: A soft blue Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Messy and Short Skin Color: White Clothing: Oranjen Armor Height: 6”5’ Personality and Abilities Option Two: The Core List Choose your Character Alignment True Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type Advocate INFJ Choose your Character's Religion Unionism 7/10 Life Story Erdane was born to his father Erdair and mother Sussanne in the city of Trafleur. He lived a peaceful childhood learning from his father and mother about Breizh folklore and the Spirit. Erdane took lessons early on in the trumpet and was somewhat decent for a child. At the age of seven he was sent off to the Thousand Blade Monastery to become a squire for the Oranjen Order. Erdane worked hard learning basic combat and taking the code to heart as he was squired under a member of the order. He started by honing his skill with spears and shields. In his early teens he took up glass work and writing as an outlet for his creative needs, even taking a few commissions to replace various churches' windows to raise funds for his order. His writing consisted of tales famous Briezh folklore, things he had heard by mouth compacted into ink. During all this time Erdane was given more responsibility around the Monastery be it assisting younger squires in their training, or assisting in tasks that he had not been aloud to do before, Erdane would enjoy this as he saw some strands of himself in the other newer squires. Years passed and the youth would reach the age to become a men at arm, however instead of venturing out right away Erdane decided to stay at the Monastery to train other squires and hone his own skills for a few more years. This would involve learning and mastering a new weapon the war sledge, while not quite as proficient in the sledge it still gave him a new fighting style to use to help train other Oranjen in sparring. Erdane would reach the age of thirty and desire to put more of his training to work, at this point in his life he had mostly been a teacher to the other squires. Erdane set his mind in stone and took up his spear and formally took leave from the Monastery to go to the Holy City, where he thought would be best with it's melting pot of religions and cultures.
Howdy, here's my review! @Malir_Bromtor Basic Information All good here!Skill Information All good here!Special Traits All good here!Visual Information All good here!Personality All good here!Life Story Your life story seems to be incredibly short for a 29 year old character, I'd recommend you expand a little further on what sorts of training Erdane went through at the monastery, as well as his personal motivations, hobbies and things he did on the side whilst he was learning. As it is, the Life Story seems fairly empty. Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
