Artwork by @MonMarty Character Theme by Hiroyuki SawanoBasic Information Full Name: Elros Aliases: Elros Alarick Typhonus, Elros Grauwald, Elros of Turent Age: 25 Gender: Male Race: Ailor (Olean Imperial) Sexuality: Heterosexual Preferred Weapon(s): Sword and Dagger Lord ~ His Dagger. Wrought in Blacksteel, this was a gift from Louis Delmotte given just before their first foray to the Kathar Front. Hunter ~ A Broad Sword. Wrought in Nightsilver, this was given as payment by the Kathar Sovereign in exchange for his services. He will occasionally wield it in both hands, or with a Staff. King ~ A Demishot Puretek with a small scope attached, in the possession of Elros. Inventory: Simple Backpack ~ Curved Blacksteel Throwing Daggers (A set of Five, from Ami'o). Lockpicks, Black Book, Sack of regals, and a Quill. Skill Information Proficiencies: 49/50, 10/10 Hobby Spoilers are below. Kindly do not look unless you are a Staff Reviewing. Spoiler Blade (25 of 50 Prof) +15 Dagger Combat (+5 Free Olean) +5 Greatsword Combat +5 Staff Combat +5 Perception Training +10 Pathfinding Art (10 Hobby) Mage (12 of 50 Prof) +3 Arken Knowledge +3 Artifact Knowledge +3 Arcane Mastery I +3 Elemental Control III Rogue (12 of 50 Prof) +3 Rogue Gift 4 +3 Rogue Gift 5 +3 Wall Climb 3 +3 Espionage Schooling (Regalian Informational Academy) Note. Elros is a secretive Acolyte and studying to become a Mage. He is limited in the full functionality of all his spells. (Ignore, not a part of Prof) +0 Rogue Gift 1 (Olean) +0 Rogue Gift 2 (Olean) +0 Skin Purge 1 (Olean) Languages: Astute Common New Regalian Anglian Visual Information Eye Color: Hazel. Hair Color: Dark Brown with a Ginger Beard Hair Style: A short undercut hairstyle with a thicker beard and mustache. Skin Color: Pale White. Clothing: A plain outfit with light noble accents. Height: 5'8. Body Type: Elros Typhonus has a Ripped build, with Low Body Fat. Personality and Abilities Choose your Character Alignment Neutral Evil Choose your Character Personality Type The Commander ENTJ-T Choose your Character's Religion Unionism 3/10 Artwork by @BeetrootSalad Life Story (WIP) Spoiler 282 AC: Elros was raised in Turent, calling the local orphanage his home. He never knew his parents. A hooded man raised young Elros, moving him from house to house at a very young age. Beyond these frequent moves, the first thing Elros recalls is the hooded man leaving and not returning. Poor Elros turned to the streets and lived as a young beggar. He always felt eyes on the back of his head, as he begged, conned, and stole what food he could. Further, a young Elros always saw the richer folks in Turent walk by him every day, and while the faces occasionally changed, the colors of their clothing did not. He felt a vile hatred for such, and even as a youth felt rebellion was needed to remind these fancy people what it felt like to be powerless. He often found himself organizing the poorer children in Turent, trying to get them to work together to steal and keep well fed through their larcenous means. 293 AC: At age 11 he expertly snuck up on a Turall Blade in an attempt to pick their pocket, thinking he'd get some payback on these wealthy elitists. Rather than arrest or kill the boy, this Blade ordered him to run alongside him. If he made it all the way around the city's walls, he would adopt the lad. Elros ran, and completed it once with struggle. The Blade ordered him to make the run several more times, until hours later, the boy collapsed. He was brought into the School of Turall, and trained from thereon. 302 AC Elros makes many friends in Turall, including Garret Ames and Lucas de Escabano, on their occasional visits. He specializes in Command styled fighting with fellow Turall, most at ease when working with larger groups of people. Elros hears of some wars sparking up in the Empire and seeks to keep himself informed about it all. He begins to write and make speeches to the woe of his classmates, who often chastised him for distracting from his blade work. 303 AC: Elros trains in Turall towards Blade status for several years. Towards his 21st birthday, he takes a chance visit to Regalia as a small break and ends up trapped for the Lo Occupation. He fights in the Battle of Rothburg and participates in the Diets to determine the New Government. After a brief run on the Old State Council, Elros is named Financial Reichsrat. He eventually quits, instead focusing on his Turall Blade training, having picked up a few techniques from Lucas de Escrebano and other Turalls in the city. 305 AC: Elros is sent back to Regalia for a few specific missions on behalf of the School of Turall. These are somewhat private, but he is known to have frequently worked with certain state officials on matters of intelligence. So Elros returns to Regalia, and after many years of adventures, and falling in battle at the end of the Clicker Crisis, he is slowly nursed back to health, returning just as the Sanguine Crisis ends. 309 AC: Elros is in Regalia, after many adventures. He seeks to continue his studying. ~ Elros
@LumosJared Body Stat calculation is slightly off. Total would be 36, not 30, but of course you can keep his body build/shape below the cap as you see fit. Otherwise, everything looks fine.
Here's my review: I've counted 54/50 core points. I'd recommend the following: Labeling Hobby Points where applicable (because I can't tell where you've designated your 10 points here) For the Olean lineage boost, you have to put 10 points in order to get the free five. So if you're after Dagger Combat, it should be +15 Dagger Combat (+5 Olean Lineage Boost) Remove the other potential Olean lineage boosts because they're confusing for me to differentiate from the other proficiencies listed Do this and give me another tag when you're done @LumosJared
