Elrick Sun-eater Character App

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  1. ThatMateStarlord

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    Basic Information


    Name: Elrick Sun-Eater
    Age: 24

    Gender: Male

    Race: Ailor [Bolven]

    Sexuality: Straight

    Preferred Weapon: Axe


    Skill information


    15 One-handed Axe [spending points]


    5 Frontline command[spending points]


    5 Sailing [Hobby points]

    10 strength [racial boost, hobby points]


    10 Siege Command [Talent points]


    3 sorcery [Ice] [spending points]


    Total Points: [10 hobby + 10 talent + 24 age + 5 default. 6 leftovers for character improvement later on.]

    Special Traits:

    Sorcery: elemental

    Spells: Primal design as asthetic, Elemental Branding as spell.





    Body Shape

    Physical Stat: 35 [10 Bolven Hardy Constitution + 5 sailing (5 * 0.5) + 15 one-handed axe + 10 strength training = 37.5 stat, limited to 35.

    Body Shape:Muscular

    Body Fat: Built


    Languages:

    Common

    Skodje[Childhood]


    Visual Information

    Eye Color:Blue

    Hair Color:Dirty blonde

    Hair Style:Flat Ponytail

    Skin Color: Pale

    Clothing:Ivory Mercenary Outfit / Fur and chainmail

    Height:6’6 (6’9 Bolven Survival mode)






    Personality:


    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral


    Personality type: ENFJ (The Protagonist)


    Religion: Old gods (Handrin is his patreon) (3/10)


    Life Story


    Early childhood: Born in western Velheim lands, His Father was a soldier stationed on a galley, his mother died at his childbirth. Growing up away from many parental figures due to his father being away half the time, Elrick grew a love for trouble, since he always seemed to get in it, like it was looking for him. Even though his father may have been away, it doesn't mean he taught him things, Elrick was taught at an early age to speak common, and skodje.Elrick´s father was the only true family to him, as he thinks. The rest of his family had not given any attention to Elrick as he grew up. Even though they could pay for his food and well being , they didn't. It's for that reason he hates his family, and grew away from ¨good¨ influence.


    Late childhood: Since he grew up away from any cities he grew a hardiness, he also grew a love for fighting, whether he won or lost. Among his friends he was looked upon as an outcast because he had no money.Due to his ¨position” as an outcast he has learned to understand people better, and at least try to help them through hard, although he isn't very good at it. It is at this time where he got his first lessons in sailing, and learned about the art of sieging from his father, he learned all about how to load cannons, how much gunpowder, and even as much as distance calculation, although he wasnt to interested in that. It was also from his father that he learned the basics of frontline command, due to his father being a former member of a velheim raiding company.


    Adolescence: He recalls a moment in his life where he tried to stop a group of thieves from stealing a horse, of course he didn't win, after that he came home with 6 broken bones. After this moment in his life, he had trained hard with axeman skills and has grown very skilled over the years. It is also during this time he learned basic ice magic skills

    From a mysterious man in a black robe, just down the road. It was form this Man that he learned sorcery, He trained for years to learn the art so he could better defend himself in velheim. He specically learned Ice magic due to its defensive nature. The mans name was Edsel, He was a lonely yanar man. He choose to pass on hes knowledge to elrick. The problem with Elrick is that he always tries to play what he thinks is a hero, or a good guy. Even though his standpoint is closer to being Neutral, chaotic neutral. It's this reason why he travels around the world after his father died. Elrick´s father died after spending too long in the cold while in his galley, none of his family went to Elrick´s father´s funeral, they also took part of the inheritance from his father as well, so he just got up and left. That's how Elrick ended up in Regalia.
     
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  2. Antimreoir

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    @ThatMateStarlord Hello there and welcome to Massivecraft! I'll be taking your character application for Aspirant Review; and will get a response to you shortly!
     
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    Here's my review! @ThatMateStarlord

    Basic Information
    Please make note of your chosen Ailor Lineage in your Race Information, these can be found on this page here! https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Ailor
    Skill Information
    Please mention the point pools that each of his skills come from, noting this in brackets after each of the point scores. For example;
    Elemental Sorcery (+3 Core Points)
    This just helps in keeping track of which points come from where!
    Please include a Physical Stat calculation in your Body Shape section explaining how you got that Physical Stat, it'd look something like this!

    15 Axe + 5 Shielding + 10 Bolven Ailor + (10x0.5) Sailing = 35 - Which is your cap for a Bolven Ailor!
    Special Traits
    Please add a Special Traits section after Skill Information and note your Sorcery Ability in here.
    Also! Elemental Branding can be used for any element you need that's listed, not only ice.
    Visual Information
    All looks good here!
    Personality
    All looks good here!
    Life Story
    Please elaborate on how Elrick came to learn Sorcery, as such is impeccably difficult to learn on your own; perhaps he learned it with use of a book or a mentor?
    Can you elaborate on where Elrick learned Siege Command a bit more?

    Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
     
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    I just edited physical stat, and specified spending points in skill information.
     
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    All the changes you pointed out are highlighted in red.
     
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    @ThatMateStarlord Lovely! Thank you for the quick edits. I'm glad to mark this application as Approved!

    Once again, welcome to MassiveCraft! If you ever need a hand with anything feel free to reach out.
     
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    In blue is what I changed for the re reveiw.
     
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    Approved!
     
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    Thanks!
     

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