Preserved Sheet Ellieosia Muzchiviaz

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Ellie Muz
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Basic Information
  • Full Name: Ellieosia Muzchiviaz
    • 'Ellie Muz'
  • Age: 21
  • Gender: Female
  • Race: Human - Ailor - Etosian
  • Main Ambition: To work for high nobility.
  • Describe your character's position in Regalia.
    • Ellie has recently came to Regalia, hoping to create a place for entertainment purposes for the people of Regalia. She hopes to gain enough money to help her own expenses as well as with others that she meets and befriends. Being a rather spontaneous and outgoing person she is sure to attract a lot of attention throughout Regalia.
  • Describe your character's upbringing.
    • Ellie was born within a rather large and known town in Etosil on the 4th of April, then again it is its capital city of Etosil, that being Pavleona. She was born to a loving mother, Marriena Muzchiviaz and her stern father, Dezmieos Muzchiviaz. She was brought up in a traditional Etosil home, having succeed in being taught both to sing and dance. Quickly being brought into an entertainment family, constantly working as musicians, artist and dancers. Being the youngest in the family to five older siblings, both brothers and sisters, she strives constantly to be better or to impress her parents.
  • Describe any secondary ambitions your character may have.
    • One of her many small ambitions she has is to become successful in Regalia. As well as to earn enough money and to find an appropriate husband to make her family proud of her.

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Skill Information
  • School: School of Griffer
  • Level: Warrior
  • Source: Griffer Akademie in Achtermeer
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Visual Information
  • Eye Color: Sky blue
  • Hair Color: Red
  • Hair Style: Long and wavy
  • Skin Color: Tan with freckles
  • Clothing: A flowly and loose fitting dress
  • Height: 5'1
  • Body Build: Toned yet slightly skinny.
  • Weapon of Choice: Griff blade
  • Describe the Character's facial features.
    • Her eyes are actually quite wide and big looking at times, casting an innocent look over her features however, whenever she grins or smirks she gets this sudden change and has this alluring type features. Usually having a grin on her face whenever speaking with others. Her hair is usually a redish orange that shines in the light as well as her hair style sometimes changed on the day. Either having her hair down, in a braid, or in a ponytail. She has a visible widow's peak whenever her hair is up.
  • Describe the Character's body.
    • Being from the Etosian background, it causes her to be quite small and petite compared to other women she meets. However her weight mainly comes from her muscles that she has acquired over the years of training with dancing and such. Quite thin and well toned for a dancer, always having to be at a healthy weight, even as going as far as trying to be underweight to be perfect for dancing. She has quite the thin bone mass when one looks at her however her muscles make up for it.
  • Describe the Character's fashion appearance and accessories.
    • Ellie is usually found wearing bright colored clothing that usually makes her stand out more than most, as well as wearing less than appropriate clothing than one would think. Usually the color scheme is with the season, during autumn she wears amounts of orange, red, and brown hues while once it's spring she wears pinks, light blue, and white colors. However she is also fond of scarves, usually wrapped around her waist rather than her neck, bracelets usually a solacrux one as well as earrings and necklaces made from the same thing. However she will wear appropriate clothing when it is the colder months, usually found wearing regular dresses but also having her usual scarf wrapped around her middle.
  • Describe the character's voice.
    • She has a rather gentle toned voice, not being too high or too low for feminine standards luckily, kind of having a sing-songy way with there voice. Having been trained in singing as well when she was younger, this causes her to be aware of the pitch of her voice. Having a rather interesting accent at times, her ' t's ' not pronouncing sometimes. However her voice tends to get higher the more she lies which causes her to suck at lying. She also has learned several languages, well as many as she could with her spare time; Alt-Regalian, Theodora {Etosian}, Common, some Elvish.

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Personality and Abilities

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    • Whenever someone first meets Ellie they can see the peculiarity with her and how she acts while around strangers. She comes off as slightly standoffish with hints of sarcasm. Usually kept in good humor and willingness to joke around with new people. She can also be rather childish if she is in a good mood and can seem rather lax.
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    • Ellie may come off as confident in many ways but she can also be rather sad and depressing when she gets into detail about her past. However she hates to feel pity from others so she tends to shut herself away from that part of her. It does come up from time to time whenever she is in a bad mood or if she is rather intoxicated. But she can also be at peace with herself when she thinks about the calm and happy moments.
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    • When she gets to know someone and holds them close to her such as friends and family she can be rather sarcastic. She also can come off as rude and flirty towards them. And whenever she is in a good mood or slightly drunken state she can be rather bluntly honest and open towards people she knows. She tends to also get rather comfortable with those she likes and has an interest in as well as being more flirtatious.
  • Fourth Paragraph:
    • Whenever morality is involved with Ellie, more often than not she is usually neutral if it doesn't pertain to herself or people who are close to her. However if it is going to affect how she or those close to her she will tend to push towards the chaotic good spectrum. She usually does what she can to assist those she knows in any way that she can but if she doesn't know them she will leave them be.
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    • With religion she is a strict and devout Etosian Unionist and tends to follow the regular and more commonly known unionism views when it comes down to it. However she will always believe in the more Etosian way of it and tends to believe those who are not within the humanum do not need to be controlled but need to be guided in the ways that are right. She tends to also believe those of nelfin background, that as long as they are a unionist do not need to be guided like others do.
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Talents
  • Flexibility;
    • From training at a young age to be flexible enough to dance the way she does now, she is quite flexible now later on in life. Her flexibility really helps when she has to get into small or tight places, being able to bend herself to be a little more scrunched up than usual. She also tends to be able to bend in other ways that some can't also being able to pull off exotic dance moves because of it.
  • Describe any number of Character Quirks.
    • Some of the quirks she happens to have are quite small when they notice them. Ellie is constantly tapping to a rhythm either with her foot or with her hand. Another one happens to be running a hand through her hair when it is down when she is growing bored of things. She also tends to rock back and forth on her feet when she starts to get anxious or skittery when she hasn't gone out and done some sort of exercise that day.
  • Describe your character's skills.
    • One giant skill that many people instantly see in Ellie happen to be her dancing and singing abilities that she enjoys showing off. Always being one for attention she is constantly trying to improve her dancing and singing skills. She has many types of dancing skills which happen to be; Ballroom dancing, tango, exotic dancing, and belly dancing. But those are just some of the few that she has grasped upon, being more of the faster type dancer than the slow one.
Likes
  • Dancing -
    • Ellie enjoys dancing whenever she can, even as going as far as to get a job having to do with dancing. She enjoys doing it for fun and for people and entertainment purposes. She always enjoys moving and never staying still so this gives her a good opportunity to be active and doing something she likes.
  • Singing -
    • Having been trained to sing at a young age she enjoys it as a hobby that she does from time to time. She even enjoys singing with others and even teaching younger people to sing when they need a teacher to do so.
  • Flowers -
    • Sia has always had a love for flowers from a young age, considering her family practically made there living off of art and flowers. She knows how to take care of flowers and can even name some of the flowers that she recognizes with ease. Her favorite flower has to be tulips though, an easy way to her heart really.
  • Compliments -
    • Because of her arrogant nature she feeds off of compliments that she is given and even boosts her happiness. Then again most people enjoy compliments but she seems to enjoy them a whole lot more. Whenever she is given a compliment she always returns it in her own way.
Dislikes
  • The Sewers -
    • Ellie absolutely finds the sewers disgusting and a pigs place. She even goes as far as saying that she fears the sewers seeing as she is so weak and doesn't know how to fight like some others do. She tends to stray away from the sewer entrances that she does know about.
  • Staying still -
    • Either from some sort of disagreement within her body or if its a mental thing with her but she just hates to stay still. Perhaps its because that she gets anxious whenever she stands still for more than five minutes or what. She absolutely hates it and tries to keep herself moving all the time.
  • Messing Up -
    • Ellie is sometimes a perfectionist when it comes to certain things, and because of that she hates to mess up. Everything must be perfect seeing as she has worked so hard on to achieve ever since she was a young child. She is easily put into a sour mood when she messes up at times.
  • Mages -
    • From hearing so many negative things about magic as well as mages from others that she had talked to, she has grown a huge distaste for mages. She thinks of magic as cheating in a way and always takes opportunities to shut down anyone's idea of being a magic user.
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Relationships
Noice
  • Seraphina Eroth @WalnutNinja - "Old friend/mentor and drunk buddy." - An old friend whom she recently reconnected with after getting back from Calemburg.
  • Malcolm Cadaval @littleshep101 - "Flirting buddy, he's cute." - A recently acquired friend after coming to Regalia and rather interested in him after the last couple encounters they've had.
Anger
  • Valbrand Haagenvig - "Dirty northerner with an equally as dirty mouth." - After a rather toxic encounter with this man she tends to try and stay clear of him.
Meh
  • Raja Ahmad @Betel_ - "Interesting friend of a friend." - Only briefly met her but she seems fine and kind hearted.

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Life Story
0 - 7
Ellieosia was born into the commoner family known as the Muzchiviaz's, being the youngest and last born of her five other siblings. She easily became the baby of the family, even eventually getting various nicknames because of how short she is compared to others in the family. She had a relatively normal life compared to others who went through tragedies in their families while she did not, she had the opportunity to grow up in a loving home. Which she lived out to the best of her abilities and still does to this very day, but she did have several turning points throughout her life. Around the age of 6 she began to learn how to read and write in other languages besides common and Etosian. Along with her normal lessons that she had with languages and among other things, she quickly found herself becoming quite the dancer, or at least wanting to be.
7 - 14
Having been introduced to a young street dancer in the streets of Pavleona, she soon found her calling at the age of 7 when she began to dance with a young boy in the streets. She soon found herself begging her parents to let her learn how to dance while others within the family did painting, drawing, or singing. Granted it didn't take her parents long to give into her, she began to learn various arts of dancing until the age of 12 when she soon finds herself being taught how to belly dance. Seeing how her tutor danced, soon growing envious as well as a little nervous she quickly found herself trying to keep the body figure to be able to dance like her tutor did. Around the age of 14 she soon found herself quickly catching onto the ways of the dance as well as having a more shine to her than she did before. Seeing her sudden change, many of the boys that were of commoner heritage began to pay attention to her and she enjoyed the attention she got.
15 - 21
As a custom to her family's ways and to keep tradition with her mother's side in the family, she was sent to the school of griffer. She soon began to attend the Griffer Akademie in Achtermeer after she was shipped off to Calemburg. Around the age of 16, Ellie soon found herself in the arms of her first embrace of love. She had ended up falling for a young man who was around the age of 18 at the time. However he was soon ripped away from her after he was found out to be a thief, having only gotten a letter when he was in prison she soon detached herself from him seeing his life of crime. Young Ellie soon found herself getting rather good at the griffer fighting technique and continued to learn it as best she could until warrior level. Soon finding a passion with sing as well she quickly took a job at one of the entertainment places around the age of 18 until she was 21 from time to time to get extra money. Soon finding herself attracting all types of attention from various races, may it be nelfin, ailor, orc, or tigran. It was mainly for her beauty and exoticness that they were entrapped with her.
Recent Days
After finishing her last year within the school she soon decided to move back to her hometown in Etosil. She worked to continue her job of being a dancer and entertainer as best she could. However all good things must come to an end, a jealous and vicious ex-friend of Ellie's whom she went to the griffer school with, tracked her down and began to ruin her reputation. Luckily things were put to a close very quickly within a year however Ellie couldn't force herself to quit what she was doing. She went back to dancing and entertaining those that came to the place, but she also ended up leaving that job after nearly being assaulted by someone. Seeing the trouble with her job and seeing her stop her whole life passion, her family decided to move from Etosil to Regalia in hopes of finding better life there. Having been living there for a couple of months before the bone horrors appeared, her family soon realized that they did the right decision in moving to Regalia.
 
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Peer Review:

I'm hesitant on your choice of Body Type being Skinny while also being a Warrior in a combat school. My recommendation would be to change it to Toned as per the School's Wiki page recommends, but if you wish to leave it for a Staff Review that is fine.

For ease of review could you possible go back into your Personality and Abilities and make bold what you would consider the highlighting traits? Not pertinent, but useful, even for yourself.

I see nothing further, feel free to make the above changes and tag me once completed @Nesstro
 
I will make the appropriate changes when I get to a computer, thanks for the peer review!
 
For ease of review could you possible go back into your Personality and Abilities and make bold what you would consider the highlighting traits?@Nesstro
Funny because she did this on the google docs, just when you copy paste it, it doesn't keep the bold or colors lol
 
My sole review point is that the Life Story both makes a jump of several months and doesn't seem to properly explain her desire to serve High Nobility. Please add what she has been doing recently since the time of the move and perhaps make it more clear why she wishes to server High Nobility.

Tag me once the edits have been made in green @Nesstro
 
@HydraLana

So sorry I've been busy and actually forgot about the app but I will update this app later on today.
 
@Nesstro Any progress to report? I will need to reject this application otherwise.
 
@HydraLana

I have decided that I will not be pursuing this character anymore and you can go ahead and reject this application. So sorry about the lack of telling you sooner.