Played Character Ellahie Daevaar

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Sihn-Ellahie Daevaar
    • Heritage / Culture: Sihndar
    • Age: 40
    • Gender / Pronouns: Female, She/Her
    • Occult: N/A
    Core Concept
    Ellahie embodies the essence of a relentless and highly efficient demon slayer. Her disciplined and militaristic nature keeps her skills finely tuned and her weapon always ready, as she remains prepared for battle in any given moment. She initially may come across as distant to those unfamiliar with her, not quite blending in with the ordinary crowd. Her demeanor appearing blunt and serious, but as one gets to know her better, she gradually unveils her maternal nature. Regarding religion, Ellahie leans towards Estelley and worships Melca primarily.

    Appearance Information
    Ella stands at 6 feet flat, being a bit on the average side for a Sihndar. Her body sports a simple feminine form, being not too prominently hourglass nor overly flat. It resembles an athletic build but obviously with more muscular definition. Her skin is a dark purple with a somewhat reddish hue. Her hair is snow white and is wavy in texture. It reaches about mid-back when fully let down, though she tends to wear it higher up in a loose ponytail.

    Combat Style
    Warrior

    Hobbies and Talents
    Athletic Hobby

    Proficiencies

    • Strength: 7
      • Melee: Shrug Off, Knockback Sweep, Cheap Shot, Technique Parry, Concussive Blow, Diving Tackle, Weapon Throw (Free - Melee)
      • Athletic: Steady Body, Brawl Stampede (Free - Sihndar)
    • Constitution: 6
      • Shielding: Shield Wall, Shield Bunker, Shield Cover, Shield Slam, Shield Brace, Shield Block (Free - Shielding)
      • Training: Rage Counter
    • Intelligence: 1
      • Adapt: Wardrobe (Mundane)
    • Wisdom: 0
      • Chem: Hyperfocus (Free - Sihndar)
    • Dexterity: 0
      • N/A
    • Faith: 0
      • N/A
    • Magic: 0
      • N/A
    Languages
    Common (Free)
    Sinnayed (Native)

    Life Story / Plot Hooks
    Ellahie Daevaar was born to Veridan and Xana Daevaar on April 25th, 272 AC. She was born into a rather large family as Veridan had many partners due to the nature of the Lirranna region in Drowda. She grew rather close to one of her half-brothers at this time as they were around the same age. From a very young age she was taught how to defend herself and was thrown into a culture of combat.

    Much of her teens were spent training and occasionally going out to fight back the Drovv Spiders that attacked her Hold. She was rather ahead of her class, though followed closely by her half-brother who often lost his temper and was reckless at times. Their father during this time was busy in Regalia as he was sent as an ambassador to gain more aid for the Sihndar cause. Her mother wasn’t often around either as she led a rather large Mexner that consistently went out on missions. As a result of this she often felt responsible for her brother and took more of a maternal role in their relationship.

    As she reached adulthood, her father invited her and her brother to Regalia. Upon arriving she was amazed at how different Regalian culture was compared to Drowda’s. However, her sense of duty soon took over and she eventually joined a guard chapter. Serving alongside her father until his death at the hands of some Void Cultists in the city. His death rocked her, and she soon returned back to Drowda.

    She returned a few years later and caught up with her brother who she was surprised to find had been married. A Mexner had also formed in Regalia at this point and Ellahie decided to join. However, various circumstances led the Mexner to fall apart so she returned to Drowda to continue the fight with her family.

    Recently she has made the trip back to Regalia...
     
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    Review-

    • You need to make Ella of student level in one of the two schools of fighting that she is in.
    • High pain tolerance is not a trait of the Eso-Ajo school or Turall.
    • Why did her family leave the hold?
    • Did she reforge the weapon, or did she have it reforged? If so, she would need to be a smith.
    • You have to have more time in Turall. As previously mentioned one of the two has to be student level or lower.
    • How did the Bone Crisis Horror effect her ?
    • You need more definitive statements of how old she was throughout her life story.
    • Why did she leave Drowvda?
    • The Life Story needs to be more fleshed out.

    Tag me when you've made these edits.

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    @DrunkFailure Edits have been made.

    I apologize for the life story, I forgot to actually write it out fully but that should be fixed now. As for the High Pain Tolerance, I have changed that to Sharp Eyesight, and also decreased her level to student in Turall. Everything should be explained in her lifestory now.
     
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    Everything checks out except for her talent section still says that she's a warrior in both schools. Change that and tag me.
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    @DrunkFailure

    I dropped Turall, also changed a few things in her life story as well as her last name. Nothing major has changed. Don't know if this needs a re-review or not.
     
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    @DrunkFailure

    I decided to age Ella up and make her an expert in Esa-Ajo. All changes relating to that are in green.
     
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    @DrunkFailure

    Just changed her last name, nothing else. Added the reasoning to her lifestory.
     
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    In need of a new reviewer and re-review.
     
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    remember racial bonuses are not included in this factor in the physical statness.

    reapproved tho.
     
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    @Caelamus Did a minor edit to her points. Changed the 10 metallurgy to 10 shields and edited her life story in purple to account for this change.
     
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    @Caelamus I'm a triplet now. Just aged her up to 90, is all. Not sure if need reapproved.
     
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    @Caelamus As you probably already know I changed her archon to Destruction from Stalwartness. I updated her application accordingly. All changes in purple.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated her app to the new format, edited her lifestory, and rearranged some of her points. All changes in purple.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated her points, as well as everything included in the Sihndar update. I rewrote the last paragraph of her lifestory. Not sure if this warrants a re-review, so if not I was wondering if you could reinstate the Approved tag as it was lost when I edited the sheet. Changes in purple as per usual.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated the points in line with the new proficiency update. That is all.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated to be in line with the recent Sihndar changes. Edits are in purple, as per usual.
     
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    @Caelamus Not sure if re-review needed, but I updated her points in accordance with the new Hobby Points bonus.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated points to new format, and edited bits of her lifestory.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    Wow, what a blast from the past. Updated to current lore and proficiencies.
     
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    Updated to current lore and proficiencies.
     

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