Basic Information Full Name: Eirain Lupus Augustyn the Fifteenth Age: 17 Gender: Female Race: Regalisch (90%) Leutz-Vixe (10%) Main Ambition: Her only ambitions surround her family and it’s businesses. She has little care for herself, though she has hopes of marrying a man of higher nobility as to not sell her and her family short. Basic Information I plan on getting for her a title, due to her family having large amounts of land and properties, as well as two very acceptable businesses. Her move to Regalia came a few years after her elder bastard sister Fjola arrived, after receiving multiple letters from her. Visual Information (Main) Eye Color: Emerald Hair Color: Brown Hair Style: Near uncontrollable waves, usually neatly tucked in a bun. Reaches to her mid back. Skin Color: Very pale. Clothing: Different styles, most are Regalisch, and she occasionally wears Dressoli or Leutz-Vixe styles. Height: 5’3” Body Build: Femmefatale Weapon of Choice: Ithani Epee (Not usually equipped unless she is carrying her valuables. Visual Information A rather small and thin neck, accompanied by a diamond shaped face with an extremely soft jawline. Plump lips usually coated in a deep rose lipstick made of honey and wax. Smallish, hooded eyes with very long eyelashes. And very prominent cheek bones. A button nose with a hint of natural blush that gracefully rests on her cheeks. Very bold and thick eyebrows, usually caught in an ever-irritated expression, they are close to her eyes. Two dimples on each cheek. Her main expression is a rather bashful one. Her eyes low, or half lidded, and a koi smile. She rarely ever wears any makeup due to a certain someone saying she looked much better without her face caked. Though she occasionally indulges in a lipstick or light eyeshadow. With a slightly more slender appearance than the rest of her family, her bones aren’t has thick and dense as someone like Fjola or Eydis. She is also considered short. Standing at 5’3 due to a growth stunt from excessive kaffe as a child after the revelation of her position within the family. Her body can be described as Femmefatale, with almost no tone to her body in general. Her hips are naturally wide, as most women in her family would have. A very small, faded cut on her elbow from one of her hounds jumping up on her. She owns all of the heirloom jewelry and often wears it. Most of her outfits host their house colors and lavish materials. Every outfit she owns is perfectly tailored to her body, and to her own liking. She wears bear fur coats time to time, and she wears shoes with an inch wedge to make her feel better about her shortness. It isn't uncommon to see her draped in a mantle, as she prefers to be father chaste and covered up when in public, and on a regular basis. Tough, it isn't uncommon for her chest, or shoulders to be a tad uncovered, but that is reserved for any events. A mixture of Condescending and extremely feminine. Most of the time she has a slightly sultry tone mixed in which she often uses in business deals because I mean, it works. uwu Personality and Abilities The following is required when filling out your character application. In order to explain the character’s personality, we will ask you write a paragraph to respond to each question, and we’ll provide some examples to give you some ideas. If you want to be helpful to reviewers, make sure to bold the keywords you are using that are traditionally seen as traits: First Paragraph: She can be described as extremely old fashioned. Disliking most every other race that isn’t granted humanum and usually keeping it to herself. She has been known to slap elves, or any other “lesser” race if they irritate her enough, though this has shone to be unacceptable. She has grown somewhat close to lesser class citizens, but nothing ever past a friend. Though it’s extremely rare that she loses composure. She would be seen as extremely cold-hearted, but practical, she is an extremely brutal business woman. Second Paragraph: She shows great pride in her family’s history and everything she owns. It isn’t difficult to see her overly-affectionate with her family members, because she severely lacks any affection if she isn’t the one engaging. She finds herself almost always over-worked and writing for one of her employees or working through business contracts. Often leaving her heart feeling empty at times, and making her seek out affection in close friends or family. Hugs are nice. Third Paragraph: She would sacrifice most of her family if it meant she got a higher titler no doubt. Despite her sometimes awkwardly loving hugs, she would definitely strangle some of them. She considers her only true family to be the two family pets. She even respects strangers more than her family if they are human. She's trying very hard to fix her relationship towards her family, despite her rather jealous actions of keeping all family heirlooms despite some being owned by other members, she seems to find herself hesitantly allowing them to wear the items.. The reasoning for her odd, distant nature towards her family spans back to the death of her mother and the madness of her father, in which she closed herself off from the family. Even further to the fact that she was barely noticed or cared for as a child by her mother or father, sometimes having to forge within the wilderness and eat odd little plants, as her parents sometimes forgot to buy enough for the entire family. (Everyone but her and of course the family animals). Fourth Paragraph: Eirain shows little to no remorse. She lacks certain morality that the modern Alorian has. She thinks of the world as past Regalians would have. She is particularly immoral when it comes to the treatment of other races. Despite other races being able to gain her trust and respect after many trials, if she were to see them beaten she would automatically think it was justified. Though due to her revelations and detachment from her father, she's found herself a lot more kind to other races, though mostly towards Yanar and Elves. She wouldn't publically mistreat any race unless they've done something that personally offended her. Talents Articulate- She is extremely well-versed in most every Regalian and Humanum related subject. Her way of speaking is extremely smooth and she can go about a debate without losing her temper. During the riots, she found herself seething with courage, finding within herself the power of public speech. In situations that call for dire need, she is the one you want to rally citizens. Capable- Despite her young age she has an old soul. Perfectly able to run the two businesses and still search out befriending other higher nobility for her own gain. Though she usually befriends nobility for political reasons, some have become genuine friends to her. She enjoys being kind to people, and it's rare that she'd ever grow destain for someone without a good reason. Though she hasn't stopped her from getting awful vibes, and rejecting the presence of someone. Confident- She has great self pride for her and her family. Never lacking confidence even when trying to find herself a husband. Everything is a game to her and if you say otherwise you are false. However, due to a turn of events, she has found her heart entangled into a forbidden love in which she cannot leave for the life of her. eirain's spirit animal (shhh it's the house sigil animal) by @Patsie uwu kisses Life Story As a small child Eirian felt extremely left out. The smallest of her family even as a young child she was seen as “lesser” than her larger siblings. Lacking attention from her father and mother, due to her lack of crying or fussing as a child her parents never needed to check on her so, she often cared for herself. Reading books are bettering her knowledge of the world while a scorn for her own family began to bubble. By the age of fourteen she held exceptionally high knowledge in most subjects pertaining to business, mathematics, and social classes. In her adolescent years she festered in her personal dis-ease with her family. Finding very little distraught in her mother's passing and her father's descent into pure madness. Instead coping in an odd manor, secluding herself completely from her rather . . In her words "Crumbling" family. She always had a lurking feelings about where she lived. She hated the North more than she hated her first dog, Berkley. So it would come to no one surprise that she had planned for departure to the Archipelago. After writing a letter to what little family she knew to live within Regalia, she found out the truth. Which barely sparked a muse within her busy little head. Amongst the revelation of her family’s true origins two years later she legally took back the family and it’s large amount of old fortune, businesses and properties. Though her elder bastard sister Frejla became the Matriarch, she was always behind her, making business decisions for her and often writing every letter of business that had to be in the common language. With this sort of shadowed power she greatly helped the family stay afloat, as Fjola had no true knowledge about the world of finances. This ended up effectively impacting the rules and regulations of both their family businesses and how the family was to act amidst certain people and nobility. Though soon enough it became apparent that it was not Frejla's rightful place to govern the family due to her illegitimacy, especially after her marriage to Niko Heinrich. After her divorce to Niko and her taking of the children,Eirain was tempted to lock her in an asylum, but seeing as she was strong, she instead opted her to join the school of blackmark. Funding the entire endeavor. After the flee of her elder sister to the school of Blackmark, she rightfully became the Matriarch. Ordering in full power as gracefully as she could. Lacking any remorse for those who may suffer below her. She now, having recently moved to Regalia, she finds herself engaging more and more with people she enjoys. Especially her fellow Regalians. It will be quite clear to anyone that knows her, that she will not tolerate any disrespect, nor will she allow anyone (besides of course the emperor) to trifle with her. She values self respect more than someone's skin shade (unless grey) or race. If they show that they respect themselves enough to pass her first shrouded test of character, then it is a good chance that they will become friends. In recent times she sees herself draped with many duties as she tries to help her family gain any sort of relevancy. Often drying their accounts at points in order to fund events or any present war effort. Her brothers and any male siblings are immediately drafted if not rejected from the war. She fears not for their safety, as she has good faith in their strength.
@VanCeryneia Review complete! Firstly, in order to attain any noble title, you are required to fill out the application in this thread and wait for approval. As such, I will be ignoring any mentions of being a Countess in the application under the expectation that you shall amend such mentions. The Calemberger Sword is not a combat weapon. It’s used primarily by Calemberger Alt-Regalians for hunting, so while she could theoretically carry one as her weapon of choice, it would be seen as extremely bizarre and it wouldn’t hold up in a fight with an actual weapon. In the third paragraph of the personality section, the character’s attitude towards her family seems to take a drastic 180. Could you perhaps explain the reasoning behind her “loving on the outside, yet hateful on the inside” mindset towards her kin? I feel like the life story lacks a lot of information. The life story should generally be a brief chronicle containing the details of the character’s life so far. Your character’s life story seems to contain only “She was left out, not made matriarch, then made matriarch.” Key details are missing. Aside from the listed points, I cannot find any further errors within this sheet. Please make the required edits, highlight your changes in blue and tag me when you're finished. Pending.
@TyrolleanEagle Heads up, I'll making some edits hopefully by the end of the weekend and I'd like you to relook over them. I feel like her past is a tad patchy, and some of her personality and such has changed since I've eased into playing her.
