Rejected Sheet Edvard Norrvakt

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  1. Wumpatron

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    Basic Information (Required)
    • Full Name | Ser Edvard II of House Norrvakt, son of Einarr Norrvakt
      • Baron-Regent of Ostyr
      • Second Sword of the Bulwark
      • Paladin of the Viridian Order
    • Age | 37
    • Gender | Male
    • Race | Velheim Ailor
    • Sexuality | Heterosexual
    • Preferred Weapon | Valsgärde sword
    Skill Information (Required)

    Total Points: 37
    +10 Hunting Knowledge (Cultural)
    +25 Blades Combat Skill
    +5 Front-Line Combat Skill
    +5 Unarmed Combat Skill
    +1 Light Bow Combat Skill
    +1 Fast Blades Combat Skill

    Body Shape
    • 25+5+5x2+1+1=42
    • Muscular Body Shape
    • Low Body Fat
    Languages
    • Common
    • Skodje
    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations
    • Will of Faith | Old God's | Raven Will Spirit
    Visual Information (Required)
    • Eye Color | Brown
    • Hair Color | Dark brown
    • Hair Style | Messy shave
    • Skin Color | Regalian Pink
    • Clothing | Velheim noble attire | Viridian Armor
    • Height | 5'9
    Personality and Abilities (Required with Choice)

    Option Two: The Core List
    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Lawful Neutral/Neutral | Follows laws and traditions to reach equilibrium
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • The Commander | ENTJ
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Old God's | Soul Shard worship

    Life Story (Required)

    Born to Einarr Norrvakt and a Skagger woman.
    Raised in Nastrond, Drixagh being educated in hunting and some courtly practice.
    At the age of 14, becomes a Squire of the Viridian Order, traveling to Regalia
    Graduates from the Order and ventures back home to reestablish his cultural ties
    Performs tasks for his household, while maintaining his knightly duties at the behest of the Elders.
    Practices his swordsmanship, becoming quite fond of hunting in his free time, practicing with the bow.
    Becomes Rahkr of Nastrond up until the conscription of his father into the Imperial Guard.
    Dissolves the Ironwolf Legion out of the shear expense of a private mercenary company and forces his kin to invest in their own house guard.
    Defends his home during the burning of the North, his status as a Viridian Knight turning them away from the ceremonial Norrvakt lands.
    Travels with the Skaggers to rebuild in Drixagh as a charity venture with approval from the Viridian Elders.
    Travels to Ostyr as his brother becomes Lord of the barony there.
    Is offered the position of Master of Arms, but declines due to duties, but affirms his loyalty to his kin.
    Is declared Baron-Regent by his brother and travels to the Crown Isle, leaving the North for the first time since graduating from the Viridian Order.
    Declares himself Rakhr of the Crown Isle shortly after arriving, drawing some ire from the Order, but isn't reprimanded due to a necessity to keep all existing knights in the Order.
    Is appointed Second Sword of the Bulwark to work alongside Elros Typhonus in reworking the Swords of the Bulwark. This act is approved by the Viridian Order on the pretense that he does not join any mercenary company and is compulsory to answer only to the Emperor or the Elders. Any orders taken outside of those two results in either rejection from the Order or resignation from position.
    Forms the Skagger Order Bulwark as a pseudo military company to operate the Skagger Order legally in Regalia as well as the Knightly Order Bulwark, which drew a lot of flack from the knightly community, causing his honor to come into question.
    Continues to work to reform the Swords of the Bulwark while working to advance his household and his culture.
    Defers Rakhr title to Viggo Kensley due to being far too removed from the local community in the capital.
     
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    Last edited: Jun 22, 2019
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    Hello mister Wumpatron!

    I have claimed this application for review. Expect it shortly!
     
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    booette ceo of self sabotage

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    Approved.
     
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    Just moved some points around, removed shielding and added in front-line combat to fit his current role. Ended up being about 7 points so no need for a rereview
     
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    Reworked some proficiencies around to reflect how I want to play the character including changing the Cultural Proficiency into Axes. Body build is increased to Strongman with Built Body Fat to reflect that change. Minor addition to the life story following gameplay, but nothing really is excessively changed.

    @apath
     
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    While waiting for review, I wanted to shift into the knightly aesthetics more and the Skagger narrative was too far removed from my daily rp. Made a Viridian Knight, light proficiency changes, and edits to the life story to reflect all of this. Included Order tolerated explanations for being in the Bulwark as it was an OOC assistance versus an IC direction. Hopefully this will allow for more fluid roleplay generation.
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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