Draal, the Whisperer (Thanks Ghirko for beautiful pic) "Just gettin' started. Don't judge with fist." Character Information Full Name: Draal Denmar Preferred Nicknames: The Whisperer, Draal, 'Mar Derogatory Nicknames: Brute, Beast, Coward, Goat-man Race: Urlan , Previously Suvial Age: 247 Sex: Male Gender: Male / He/Him Sexuality: Questioning Asexual, not Aromantic. Eye Color: Light creme brown "Shared respect. Solves more then telling what to do." Core Concept He's mainly a Unionist, falling loosely under their beliefs to the point that it's not entirely his religion, but it's what he calls himself. Gentle giant, the quiet, mostly passive protector that would rather pick flowers then pick fights. Proficiency Information Strength: 7 Heavy Pack Unyielding Pack Pursuer Pack Brutalist Pack Fisticuffs Pack Comrade Pack Breaker Pack Constitution: 5 Bastion Pack Bulwark Pack Protectorate Pack Counterplay Pack Recovery Pack Wisdom: 1 Defense Theory Dexterity: 0 Magic: 0 Charisma: 1 Pet Husbandry Pack Ability Information Urlan Racials "HALT! Don't step on that. Emperor's Pride flower. Bad things happen if you crush." Languages Common (Broken, Free Language) Agasi (Native Language) Appearance Information He has no scars nor any abnormalities. A 6'8 Southland Clade Url with a mountain-goat like head and legs, covered in black fur marked with his old hair color, a light blonde form of markings on the top of his head. He has pointed ears like an Altalar, however looking animalistic otherwise with his facial features, creme brown eyes, and dark skinned. His body is more commonly covered completely in fur. Life Story Draal was born to an Altalar couple. He was raised primarily in the shadows and stink of the sewers in a Daen city. His father was a leader of a crime group and was eventually caught and executed along with his mother. Draal was seized as a young child and adopted out. He found himself raised by an old Urlan affiliated with one of the many Blackmark Companies. As he grew older, Draal decided to try to train to become a Blackmark, asking his adoptive father for mentorship. He took the young Altalar to a nearby camp to get instructed. Draal wasn't always the brightest but he was determined and loyal. He was generally interested in animals and gardening, amongst defensive combat. As he progressed, he became good at restraining others and defending allies. He also was often a great help when it came to calming animals. As time went on, he decided to speak with his mentor to accept the Url symbiosis as to better his skills as a protector, his Altalar frame betraying his inner strength. Soon after, the new Url graduated, he joined the Blackmark Company officially… as they allowed him with his lust to develop his own code to protect others. Draal met a stray dog who was casted out and feeding off scraps, befriending the dog, Brutus. He was well known for being a friendly brute, helping the less fortunate and even protecting nobles. As time went on, he was requested to help out in Regalia. Unbeknownst to him that it was a mixing pot of racists and violence alike. "Do better. Solve with words. Words don't kill."
@DogVibes Hello, I will be claiming this app for review! Please remove 'werebeast' from her Race and simply state Jendaskea Ailor! You have 10 unused Hobby points, if you wish to use them! It is unnecessary to list the standard mutations given to all Uthurenn werebeasts! You don't have to remove them, but they also don't have to be there. The only ones you are required to list are the four you've chosen. Please remove the Life Story from the Spoiler and, instead, insert the Likes/Dislikes into a Spoiler, as it is the optional section between the two! Make these changes and tag me when you're done!
@DogVibes "you can spend another 10 points, but only on the Arts Category Proficiencies"! It's 10 free points to place in an art proficiency, such as dancing, sculpting, etc.
@Athelois Finished. -- Replaced "Werebeast (Jendaskea)" in Race with "Jenaskea Ailor". -- Added "Hobby Points" in Proficiency Points category and assigned them as such. -- Removed Life Story as a Spoiler and inserted Likes and Dislikes into a Spoiler.
@DogVibes One more edit and then I swear I'll leave you alone! Put in parenthesis where the points invested came from. So essentially, your spread should look like this +25 Lashing Combat (+25 Investment) +5 Fast Blades (+5 Investment) +15 Dancing (+5 Investment, +10 Hobby Points) And then you'll be all set!
-- Updated to fit new proficiencies and updated backstory along with it (last paragraph was added in). Also changed lineage since I couldn't find my old lineage. Any issues, please bring them up and I'll fix them as soon as I can. :)
-- Added Relationships, updated Relationships to current events. -- Added Current Events to Life Story
@HydraLana Been a while, I have updated my old character, reworked him completely after the new Beasty update and every other update since his last update.
@HydraLana I updated it. Changed his concept a little bit because I made him previously for a group that disbanded. Made him more of a gentle giant.
@HydraLana I'm so sorry for bothering again, but I was informed I can't be a houseguard as a half-kathar, so I had to rework him again. His personality aligns with his race better now, anyways. I changed a few things. Backstory remained the same, changed name, changed race, changed around like a couple profs but overall remained the same, and fixed visuals.
@HydraLana Updated and fixed to the new system. I took a long needed break and I'm willing to come back.
