Dothraen Basic Information Name: Dothraen. Alias: Silverfang. Age: 94 years old. Gender: Male. Race: Moon Vault Isldar. Skill Information Physical Stat: 25. Body Shape: Strongman. Body Fat: Built. 50 Points to spend, plus 10 Hobby Points. Core Group Proficiencies +17 Sword Combat +5 Bola Combat +4 Heavy Ranged Combat Talent Group Proficiencies +5 Strength Training +10 Perception Training (+5 Racial Boost) Hobby Group Proficiencies +10 Hunting Art (+10 Hobby Points) +2 Cooking Art Point-Buy Proficiencies +12 Alchemy Common Alchemy Healing Alchemy Conning Alchemy Volatile Alchemy Languages Common Tongue, learned during his upbringing. Sulvaley Elven, learned as native Isldarin language. Wyrm Tongue, learned as the Dragon language. Cahalism Information Dothraen is currently infected with the Cahalism Affliction. Active Soul-Line: Usaar. Cahalic Form Description: Dothraen transforms into a large, quadrupedal wolf with silver-white fur, dubbed 'Silverfang'. While predominantly bestial, his furred limbs taper off to silver-blue sparkling crystallized arms and legs. A pair of large, sabretooth fangs protrude from his mouth, and his glowing icy eyes gain slitted canine pupils. When standing upright, he reaches up to 8 feet of height, but generally walks on all fours. Visual Information Eye Color: Icy-blue. Hair Color: Silver white. Hair Style: Half-ponytail. Skin Color: Pale white. Clothing: Armored, with a black cloak draped over his figure. Height: 6 feet, 5 inches. Personality Information Character Alignment True Neutral: A neutral character (also called "true neutral") is neutral on both axes and tends not to feel strongly towards any alignment, or actively seeks their balance. Personality Type The Logistician: Logisticians take pride in the work they do. They complete each task with patience and dedication. Logisticians don’t make assumptions, preferring to analyze their surroundings, check their facts and arrive at practical courses of action. Character's Religion The Exist Colossi: Dothraen is pious enough to offer monthly sacrifices to the Elder Spirit, but generally does not speak openly about his faith, and refrains from engaging in debates of religion. Life Story Birth Dothraen was born in Ellador in the year of 215AC, to a famed Isldarin warrior known as Rzekae Bramas, and a sorceress mother who went by the name of Adelia Vaneiros. From youth, Dothraen was groomed to become a warrior, subject to several studies in the arcane. The young Dothraen would become adept in the use of several sorcery spells at an age as young as ten, gearing him to become a sorcerer with combat capabilities. Youth While Dothraen was aging, his father fell in battle while defending the Ellador walls from Dwarven sieges. The passing was too much for Dothraen's mother to bear, resulting in her abandoning Dothraen and subsequently leaving him into the care of several mercenaries who happened to be traveling the continent. These mercenaries pitied the young Dothraen, and took him into their merry band. Over the years that followed, Dothraen would be trained by these mercenaries in the use of a sword, learning several combat tactics, and slowly yet certainly being groomed into a prodigal warrior in his own right. Adult An adult Dothraen would finally become a fledged mercenary in his own right, having taken up the trade of those who groomed him, raised him and taught him to become a warrior. Dothraen became proficient in several types of knowledge, learning the animalistic behavior of wild-life for hunting purposes, as well as the give-aways of Vampirism and Shatterism curse, and how to combat them. Dothraen's experiences would soon lead him into an encounter with the Justice Arken, ultimately becoming possessed and forced to serve the bidding of Justice for several years. Current Dothraen was ambushed by a band of Darkwalds in the forests of Waldmark. Although he slew a number of the Tricorned Knights, he was ultimately defeated. The Justice Possession left his body, deeming him to no longer be of use, and the Isldar was left in a puddle of his own blood. By a miraculous encounter, a tribe of Cahals discovered Dothraen, and their Aphar managed to restart his heart. The price Dothraen paid for his life being returned to him, was that he woke up already infected with the Cahalic Affliction, a 'gift' left to him by the tribal Cahals who rescued him from his own demise. Utterly confused and uncertain of what precisely he had become, Dothraen opened his Cahalic eyes to the world, as an Usaar.
@AlphaInsomnia I have changed the character into a full Isldar rather than a Half-Elf, since I felt that he was pretty much a full-on Isldar already in terms of concept, which made his half-elvenness redundant. Everything else remains the same.
Here is my review: Isldar typically do not leave their holds. Why did he leave? Where was he born? There's not really a specific mention of it. Make these edits in blue and tag me once you have finished.
@AlphaInsomnia Overhauled the life story entirely after the character was approved for Ancient Character Permission, which also now touches up on the points you have brought up. Also edited the proficiencies slightly to suit a character who is as old as 246 years, and I've re-defined his religion to fit the Isldar theme change.
@AlphaInsomnia Requesting reapproval. The character is now a Silven so the change is reflected accordingly in blue. I've also invested 5 points into Alchemy Sciences. The Silven mutation doc will be linked later after it is approved.
@AlphaInsomnia Requiring a reapproval. The character is no longer a Silven and had a special permission change, his new permission is 'Justice Lingering Possession' which I have edited the sheet to fit properly.
Looks good, though I'd caution a second look over the story line. Being a warrior in combat and consumed by pure justice and fairness would have issues. Battlefields are harsh places.
@AlphaInsomnia Life story completely rewritten to fit the concept better, and the proficiencies altered as I found more use in some proficiencies and less so in others.
There is a small error with your proficiency points, which sum up to 61. Fix that, and tag me with @AlphaInsomnia .
@AlphaInsomnia Nothing too different, but applied changes after the Isldar update. Abilities and religion edited in accordance.
@AlphaInsomnia The sheet is updated according to the Proficiency System rework, requesting re-approval.
@AlphaInsomnia Hello, just tagging to confirm that Dothraen was infected with Werebeastism, mostly because I want to try it out. No other changes.
@AlphaInsomnia Requesting re-review. I have self-revoked Dothraen's special permission, and rewritten the life story from scratch to accomodate new changes.
@AlphaInsomnia Proficiency Points and Sorcery abilities updated to be in line with the Sorcery Update.
