Preserved Sheet Dora Dei Mar

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Basic Information.
  • Full Name: Dora dei Mar, full name Doralessa dei Mariannia. She mostly spends her time as Dora, though, giving up her last name way back when. She only uses it for official documentation.
  • Age: 40.
  • Gender: Female.
  • Race: Half Dressolini, quarter Daendroque and a quarter Altalar.
  • Sexuality: Straight.
Skill Information.
  • Total Proficiency Points: 50. (+10 Dressolini Boost.)
    • +10 Musical Arts. (+10 Dressolini Boost.)
    • +5 Blunt Combat Skill. (+5 Proficiency Points.)
    • +25 Medical Sciences. (+25 Proficiency Points.)
    • +10 Food and Drink Sciences. (+10 Proficiency Points.)
  • Body Shape: 5 Physical Stat.
    • Toned, Average Body Fat.
  • Languages.
    • Common. (Literate.)
    • Dressolini. (Literate.)
Visual Information.
  • Eye Color.
    • Green.
  • Hair Color.
    • Brown.
  • Hair Style.
    • Pinned back and cut short. Whatever was left was then also pinned back.
  • Skin Color.
    • Tanned.
  • Clothing.
    • Something short and brief for the Summer weather, but modest and covers properly.
  • Height.
    • 5'9 or 175.2 centimeters.
Personality.
  • First Paragraph.
  • Seemingly put together on the outside, many strangers don't care to question Dora's drab fashion choice. Many take interest in her lacking of emotions- her dead gaze and almost unreadable face. It makes for a haphazard of socializing to become much more like a minefield for many new introductions. Instead of making friends, Dora resorts to just keeping to herself. Most if not all new people will never get the title friend due to the lack of motivation on both sides. Dora simply sees friends as baggage while others see her as a fruitless pursuit.
  • Second Paragraph.
  • Dora, on the other hand, is a wealthy spring of emotions. While it may all be bottled up to save her tough guy image, Dora suffers from a lot of internal anxieties and emotions that she was never really prepared to deal with. Living with the monks taught her things she had needed for necessity, not friendship and love. Showing her emotions was never an option for her as a child, only progression to work for the Spirit. Thus, Dora views her soul to be indebted to the Spirit. Insecurities plague her- a constant worry of why she won't have friends, but then she remembers how awful it is to be close to somebody- rampant problems that make her life of less worth when she cannot do her job right- misjudging every option and fearing a mistake- all of this wraps around her and suffocate Dora at nearly all times at night. Sleep is an impossible mission for Dora, so many times she'll instead crash at odd times when her body has simply had enough. Her mind and heart constantly clash over right and wrong and the several choices she must make over the day. While most of this is caused by her vivid and violent experiences while out in the field, some cause is rooted deeply in her lackluster past of being raised by non-maternal monks.
  • Third Paragraph.
  • With what little friends she has and her family diminishing at every night, Dora is a loving, albeit sarcastic, addition to them. Her humor is unique and her cooking is wonderful, and she makes sure to spend all of her time with them, making it as wonderful as it can be. While a strange aspect many people would never dream of finding in someone like Dora, she has plenty of love to share. This group of people is selective and small, and of course dwindling. Dora can be found at the Abbey of the Confessors, repaying her mentors with her service as a cook. The very same skill they taught her.
  • Fourth Paragraph.
  • As with everyone, Dora can be drawn to corruption easily. Her current job screams utter corruption, so she fits the mold for it. It isn't that she's inherently evil, she simply fills her purpose given to her. While overall in her life, Dora is dedicated to the Spirit, her current actions with the Blackguard are simply serving that purpose. Her cynical attitude and sarcasm duo with this current purpose and tailored her well to look corrupt. Instead, she is simply misguided. Dora finds it easy to blame all mistakes on her years fighting and healing warriors, instead of owning up to them.
  • Fifth Paragraph.
  • Dora is a devout Unionist. She was practically born in the School of Battlemed, raised by the monks and up into her early twenties. She can easily see it as the saving grace of her life, lifting her life from rags to riches. She has her life to thank the Spirit in return, as the Dogartan monks taught her.
Life Story.
  • Dora was born on October Eighth, 265 AC, to a half Altalar and half Daendroque mother and a Dressolini father in Regalia.
  • Quickly after birth, she was abandoned on the streets. With nobody to turn to, a friendly stranger turned her over to the Dogartan monks. It was then she was adopted into the group of monks.
  • She was raised as the most ideal way for monks, properly and sparingly. She was given fine lessons in cooking and had been given the tasks of preparing meals. The young woman showed great promise in it. She cooked for their small amount of students in the school, and slowly became to befriend many of them, even as a child.
  • However, personality was simply never developed. Her friends had to eventually leave and probably die for service to their great city, which led to Dora developing a more anti-social behavior as she neared her eighth birthday.
  • By the age of ten, she had also shown promise in the school's craft there. She was permitted to advance into the school's program as a Battlemed.
  • She graduated upon reaching twenty, and began travelling in wars for twenty or more so years.
  • Upon being wounded in the current Nelfin war, she was discharged from service and sent home to lick her wounds that she couldn't heal for herself.
  • She joined with the faith that had practically saved her life and joined the Order of Talent, a Unionist Cult branch. She continues preaching about Unionism to this day, mainly through the actions of helping strangers, even if she may not care for them.
 
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  • Personality is conflicting. I would consider looking at the first and second paragraphs in particular as they state very contradicting information.
  • Life story is a bit lackluster. Considering fleshing it out with some thicker sentences or adding more details at certain junctures regarding certain life events.