Played Character Dominic Estrada

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Dominic Estrada
    • Race: Slizzar
    • Affinity: Corruption Silven
    • Age: 22
    • Gender: Generally Male
    • Eye Color: Golden
    • Aliases: Elise Morfir, Colom, Madileine Fortier, The ManyFaced
    Core Concept
    • Dominic is the very picture of the Arken he was sired from, spreading corruption wherever he goes in search of the void-fueled rush it provides. Having been shaped by his arken-sire’s influence, Dominic is naturally attracted to the powerful, seeking to goad and tempt them into breaking their personal code and then assist them down their path of indulgence. Ever the diligent servant, Dominic works from the shadows to add to the ranks of corrupt politicians and knights in the city and ensure the weak live in fear of the strong.
    Proficiencies
    • Wisdom: 7
      • Command Point Buy
        • Focus Command (Commandvex)
        • Attack Command
        • Defend Command
        • Overwhelm Command
        • Resist Command
      • Tech Point Buy (Teslatech)
        • Tech Armory
        • Tech Gravity
      • Arcana Point Buy (Void)
        • Arcana Bolts
    • Dexterity: 0
      • Soft Landing (Slizzar Buff II)
      • Disguise Pack (Corruption Arkenborn)
    • Magic: 7 - Void
      • Sinistral Puppet
      • Radiant Shield
      • Radiant Push
      • Radiant Relocate
      • Radiant Bolster
      • Technique Parry (Chem)
      • Chem Revive
    Abilities

    Languages

    Common (Free)
    Droque (Native)
    Zoram (Native)
    Empire Linguist Pack (Point Investment)


    Appearance Information
    • Dominic’s Daendroque male form's jaw is somewhat crooked, a feature that makes him generally easy to recognize (when not disguised) for those who know him. His silven gold eyes mark his corrupt parentage. When in vampiric form, Dominic is unrecognizable and seems to have a porcelain theater mask merged with his features, 6 crimson eyes peering through its holes and inky black hair surrounding it.
    • Dominic is 5 foot 10 with a light hazelnut skin tone. He has blue eyes and a well-shaved face with relatively simple features that if scrutinized one may see as attractive but largely unremarkable.
    • Dominic generally sticks to his Daendroque male form, since that is the one he is most comfortable with but is very willing to change his form temporarily to further his mission of spreading corruption in the city.
    Life Story
    • Dominic was born in Daenshore to the Corruption Arken and a Daendroque woman, who at the time had taken on the appearance of a dashing Daendroque courtier. He grew up one of many children though he was the only silven of them and was as such ostracized by much of his family.
    • While he was forced to help with labor on the farm throughout his adolescence, he found it dull and was resolved from a young age not to follow in his parents' footsteps. He entertained himself by learning the basics of various weapons from friends of his older siblings.
    • Dominic left home as soon as he was able to and secured an apprenticeship at an inn a few towns away. Since the inn was located along a main trade route, Dominic met a variety of characters both legitimate and not. Once he turned 18, Dominic embraced his Slizzar heritage as an enhancement of his calling from his arken parentage. Eventually as he became more confident in his abilities, he began speaking with more of those who passed through the inn gleaning what knowledge he could from them and from time-to-time passing notes between dodgy figures for a few extra regals. This would eventually progress to trading information as Dominic was apt to give others any pertinent gossip he had heard during his work in exchange for an interesting book or even the occasional real reason as to why they were passing through.
    • While he was entertained by his life at the inn, Dominic found many of those he spoke to discussing life in Regalia and its many ongoings. Always wanting to be in the loop, Dominic eventually decided to take his meager savings and move to the capital.
     
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    @Reading5993 You have spent 1 too many points, the max you can spend is 14, you have spent 15
     
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    @Lizmun Dominic has been infected with vampirism so I added that to his app along with 1 afflicted and 3 magic packs in his abilities section! Also just heard that the burglary pack isn't usable at the moment so I'm switching that out for Embargo.
     
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    @Lizmun Changed Dominic to a Corruption Silven
     
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    @Lizmun Updated with the new melee and firearms proficiency updates, no change in point distributions
     
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    @Lizmun Dominic has been cured so vampirism labeled inactive
     
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    @Lizmun Realized I never updated Dominic's magic so I changed his one spell to Magic Throw since it used to be the old Shadow Magic Pack which no longer exists. I know his vampire abilities are still out of date, but I'll update those if he gets infected again.
     
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    @Lizmun Changed Dominic to a Slizzar since I think it better fits how I've been playing the character. Needs re-review. All areas changed highlighted in red.
     
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    @Caelamus Changed the Stupid Luck pack out for the Grauwald Wisdom Pack given his IG life has been focused on the purist com so I'd assume he's gotten used to purist mannerisms and would be able to imitate them enough to turn into a mundane who could pass for a devout purist.
     
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    Approved but make sure you change the applications tag to Needs Re-Review in the future!
     
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    @Caelamus Re-Infected with vampirism so I updated his vampire pointbuys to the new system, changes highlighted in red
     
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    @Caelamus Removed Grauwald Pack because it no longer exists and replaced it with the climber pack. Also, realized I can get 3 spell specials cause I have one spell point buy pack so I added those. All changes in red!
     
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    @Caelamus got back state saboteur and replaced the rogue packs that got removed with new ones. Chain break replaced with scan sight
     
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    Changed some aesthetics and updated the core concept since I hadn't changed it since I made the character and his concept has definitely changed since then.
     
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    @Caelamus Minor updates. Switched mimicry for illusionism cause their spells got switched in the recent rework. Also I realized I can get specials for my vampire point buys, so I added those.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated for Slizzar racial update. Re-review needed.
     
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    @Caelamus I'm so sorry for the changes so soon after the last one, but after talking to people who understand crp a lot better than I do, I realized Dominic is much better suited to a ranged/support role in combat and so I switched some of his profs around to accommodate that. Re-Review needed and all changes in red.
     
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    Updated profs and linked IC arken pact. All changes in red. New Reviewer needed.
     
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    Claimed for review, expect a response within 24 hours.
     
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    Hello! One request before I approve your sheet:
    Please note whether or not your Vampirism is an Active or Inactive affliction at the moment.

    Make that change, and ping me in a reply!
     
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    Updating to new pack names since pack names now match abilities.
     
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    Decided to rehaul to greater mage
     
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    Updated to reflect removal of society point buy and addition of command point buy.
     
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    Has become Caius' angriest new follower after an encounter with the Sword of Caius, all magic is temporarily draconic and Avarice pact is temporarily severed
     
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    Was exorcised Friday so is back to having Avarice pact and all prior void abilities
     

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