Di'aree Sire (wip)

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Is this a good, Even for a wip?

  1. Mhm. Doing great Mate!

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  1. HereticTakao

    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Basic Information

    • Di’aree(Die-er-E) Sire is a 11 year old Female Klein (M’ytaka)

    • Di’aree was born to Ca’lkin and Ida’ris Sire on the day of the 5th of December, 291 AC, in the small village of Seris, Eroki as an only child. She currently lives with her Owner Damon Sictor, at the Sictor Manor or in Regalia. Other Family Relations Include:
      • Ca’lkin Sire, <Deceased>, Father.
      • Ida’ris Sire, <Deceased>, Mother.
      • Hilda Sire, <Deceased>, Aunt.
      • De'lkin Sire, <Deceased> Uncle.
    • Di’aree currently lives with her Owner Damon Sictor, following him to where ever he goes, but she usually resigns at the Sictor Manor.

    • Since of Di’aree’s young age, she really has no life ambition at this time. Though if she would think about it for a long time, it would be to use every part of her life and live it. Usually by doing dangerous things and such.
    Visual Information


    Body Description


    • Di’aree stands at roughly 1 foot and 19 pounds. She has a slim body, but is still slightly chubby. Most of her fat resigning in her limbs, making them very stubby. She has has a short cat like tail, from her M’ytaka status.

    • With a light tan skin complexion, she gets sunburns easier than people with darker skin. She also has a burn mark on her ankle from when she was holding a torch to see out in the night barefoot, and drop it near the right side of her ankle burning it instantly.

    • Di’aree has rarely any hair on her body. The body part with the most hair is most likely located on her limbs.
    Head Description


    • Di’aree has a small oval shaped head, with small eyes that have pupils that almost resembles those of a cats. She also has a small hooked shaped nose, with thin light pink lips.

    • Di’aree always portrays a happy look never the less. Rarely really taking on a sad and depressed look. With this happy look, she has bright green colored eyes, that go along quite well with this happy look.
    • She has long light brown hair that reaches to her the middle of her back, and in the front at the end of her breast. Also her hair usually curls at the ends.

    • Di’aree has no tattoos, piercings, or earrings. She also has no facial disabilities she knows of.
    Clothing and Accessories
    • Di'aree dons a dress with the color of light grey as the primary color and the color teal as the secondary. Though this only goes for the torso part of the dress, the bottom half is a plain brown. All of this clothing was provided by her Owner.
    • Di'aree owns a small satchel bag, That currently holds nothing, but she is hoping to put in something soon.

    Personality Information

    Personality Traits
    • Childish: Since of being a child herself, and for the childish appearance that some Q'urebo give off, she has grown to be quite childish. Usually by complaining about useless things or begging for something like a brat.
    • Uneducated: Since not getting the best education there is to offer, she is consider "dumb" or "stupid". With this uneducated personality trait, she will do stupid things at times getting herself and maybe others in trouble with the people of Regalia.
    • Kind: Di'aree loves to share kindness with people. It brings her to a smile, when she someone else smile. With this kindness brought about, she gains allies quickly if they take the respect coming from her is accepted.
    • Cheerful: With the love of having fun, she is always cheerful or excited. This trait also gets her in trouble with people of the serious manner. Though she keeps on being cheerful and running around with a smile on her face.
    • Impatient: Being the childish person she is, she can tend to be impatient. She dislikes waiting for things to happen and standing around doing nothing. It also gets her in trouble whenever she wants too do something fun on her own.
    • Imaginative: Di'aree has a
    • Daydreamer: Since Q'urebo lack attention spans, she is quite the daydreamer. This resulting in her getting in trouble with a Noble,Commoner,Or a Peasant talking to her. She sometimes even purposely ignores people.
    • Adventurous: Since her liking of fun she just loves to venture out and do new things. By; Tasting new foods, Tasting new drinks, Climbing new trees, etc. Though she also loves old things too if they are fun.
    Likes


    • Fun: Di’aree loves having fun. She just loves running around, jumping through places, It just gives a good feeling inside that she truly loves.
    • Other Klein: They are almost the only people that respect her, and also that she can actually talk too without ever five seconds in between to figure out the words to say.
    • Food/Drinks from Regalia: She loves the flavor in things, and how ever thing has its own unique flavor, even the bad ones. It just impresses her how everything is different.
    • Eroque: Since its sort of mandatory thing to learn common in Regalia, And with her inexperience in common, in addition with this being her native language and how she can speak it fluently, so she has grown a liking for her native language more than she had when she back in Eroki.
    Dislikes

    • Boredom: Di'aree hates doing nothing. It makes her feel more useless than she already is and it can sometimes lead her into depression and make her want to curl up into a ball a cry out a river.
    • Crelin 'Grey Kleinfolk': They took her family away from her. Brutally murdering them, eating them like they were loafs of bread. They disgust her. If she ever sees one of these "Grey Kleinfolk" again, she will most likely attempt to kill it, or just call it names.
    • Unkindness/Pessimism: It always gets on her nerves when someone is being unkind and make the whole emotional atmosphere corrupt. She tries to stop this, but because of her small figure she can't dodge the fate of them beating her or worse.
    • Common Tongue: To her it is the hardest thing in the world to learn. How can people do it? She thinks it is as crazy as the 'Grey Kleinfolk'
    Abilities and Disabilities


    Strengths


    • Di’aree is amazing climber. Since of the Klein feature of small four mouse like toes, that help her climb. This also helps her when she is wanting to have some fun and climb a tree, or attempt to pick a large piece of fruit.
    • Di’aree is very Kind. She uses this kindness to gain respect to people she will want respect from, and just to see smiles on peoples faces.
    • Di’aree can be Imaginative/Creative. This helps her try to get out of the void grasp of boredom. It also helps her to see the "light" in people.
    Weaknesses


    • Di'aree can be clumsy sometimes. Tripping and falling over the slightest of things, you don't want to trust her with anything. Even the most common of things.
    • Since being a child, Negative words towards her can affect her a lot. Since entering Regalia she has been emotionally hurt/broken. It usually ends up in her curling up in a ball and crying a river.
    • Di'aree is not one of those people you call a "fighter". She can be a coward at time, and she isn't really that strong.
    Combat Styles


    Offensive Style: If it was a human or any large race, she wouldn't bother doing her offensive style on them. Though if it was a small race or even a small person, she would try to get a hit, knocking them backwards. If successful with this she would just run away, so she doesn't have to fight anymore.


    Defensive Style: Di’aree really doesn’t have a defensive style. She would usually just curl up in a ball, cover her head, and hope for the best.



    Weapons of Choice

    • Fist: Since her Owner varying her choice on what weapon she can hold or not, she just uses her fist to fight. Though she tries to stay out of fights as best as she can.




    Relationships

    Friendships

    Ca’lkin Sire(NPC)(Father)<Dead>:Ca'lkin was Di'aree's "loving caring Father". He along with his wife Ida'ris, Usually spoiled Di'aree in anyway he and she could. Di'aree and him had a strong relationship because of this. When the attack happened, Calkin was brutally murder/eaten by Crelin.


    Ida’ris Sire (NPC)(Mother)<Dead>:Ida'ris, treated Di'aree the same way Ca'lkin treated her. Mostly spoiling her, giving her most of the food they got for their dining sessions. Though, Di'aree some what got a weaker relation with her mother. It was thought to be weird when Di'aree thought about it, but she eventually got over it. When the attack happened, Ida'ris was brutally murder/eaten by Crelin.


    De’lkin Sire (NPC) (Uncle)<Dead>: De'lkin was Di'aree's savior. When the Crelin attack and brutally murder Di'aree's parents almost right in front of her, He was the one that saved her from almost be eaten. Running with Di'aree, and his wife Hilda, with some other survivors to the ports that Regalia set up and set sails to Regalia. When the arrived, Some humans ganged up on them and started to beat De'lkin and his wife to death, leaving Di'aree to run while they were distracted.


    Hilda Sire (NPC) (Aunt)<Dead>: Hilda, was one of the weaker relations in Di'aree's life. Though she played a helping hand. She would see Hilda almost once every nine months to a year. Since she was farther into the village, on the northern side, She rarely visit. Though when she did she stayed for a day and brought over food.

    Then the attack happen. Since it happen on the northern side first, she was the last of many few survivors. Setting sails to regalia with Di'aree and De'lkin, she arrived to Regalia, Hoping to start a new life.. But see death be brought to her.



    N’omiel M’triche(@_Omnomivore_ )<Alive>: The small, little A’rafa Q’urebo interested Di’aree with her almost same inexperience in common as Di’aree. They had what seemed to be a long conversation to Di’aree, and then N’omiel said she had to go home. Di’aree is really looking forward to seeing N’omiel again.

    Damon Sictor (@e2782) <Owner/Savior>: Damon. Saved Di'aree from the street life, gaining her loyalty and respect instantly. She honestly considers him a "savior", as he did indeed save him from street life.


    Life Story
    {Chapter One}
    Birth
    The tiny female M’ytaka baby cried in her mother Ida’ris arms. Joy filled the room where the baby was born. They started naming features, that were from her parents. It was wonderful.
    Then, The time came. The parents had a long discussion, the came up with a name.
    It was, Di’aree.

    {Chapter Two}


    Mischievous Di’aree
    Di’aree was an mischievous energetic child that got in trouble a lot, at first. She was always running around the village, asking the townsfolk of her village nonsense questions. She was the type of child that love to play and get on people’s nerves. It was amusing to her how people’s faces turned from a caucasian color, to a dark shade of red.

    Eventually, her parents were told my townsfolk that their daughter was causing trouble, and they would like for them to teach her some manners along with some decent education, since Di’aree was asking them stupid questions.

    Ida’ris and Ca’lkin started right away.


    {Chapter Three}

    Losing The Mischievous Personality Pt.1

    Meeting De’lkin and Hilda Pt.2


    Part One; Losing the Mischievous Personality
    Starting with Ca’lkin teaching Di’aree how to read and write. Though he didn’t get much into grammar, since he didn’t know much himself. Ida’ris also started to teach Di’aree The Faith Of Estel, Eroque, and little to none manners, since she didn't know much herself. Each week, she would receive education on these topics from one of them, every day.

    Being education, Di’aree was became less mischievous and annoying than she was before. Though she still had some childish Attributes. It still was a great improvement.

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    Part Two; Meeting De'lkin and Hilda
    It was by this time that she meet her Aunt and Uncle for the first time. They came over to see their Niece Di’aree. When the walked into Di’aree’s house, after being granted permission from Ca’lkin and Ida’ris, Di’aree walked up to them and greeted them with “Hello, My name is Di’aree. What is yours?”

    Hilda replied in with “My name is Hilda, and this is my husband De’lkin. We are your Aunt and Uncle Di’aree, and its a pleasure to meet you for the first time.” After saying this, Hilda walk over to Ida’ris and hugged her.

    Ida’ris said to Hilda and De’lkin “It is nice seeing you again. Now, It is almost time to prepare for supper. Di’aree, I would like if you would get to know your Aunt and Uncle, so talk to them” After saying this she walked off to prepare dinner.

    Di’aree did as her mother was told and started to get to know them. Surprisingly she was interested in what they had to say. After a thirty minute conversation, Supper was served.

    At the table Di’aree still was eager for more information. So, She got more information.

    {Chapter Four}
    Part One; The Spark Of The D’aevola Raid
    Part Two; The Raid
    Part Three; The After Math


    Part One; The Spark
    It was a cold winter morning. Di’aree was wondering outside in her normal white and brown dress, with the addition of a wolf fur coat and some leather boots. Her mother called her in when it started to get dark outside. Thats when the spark happened.

    Faint screams could be heard from the Western side of their village. Ida’ris ran outside to see what the commotion was about. There was a fire. The worst part, was that it wasn’t on accident. Ida’ris saw images of other Q’urebo. They were D’aevola, and they were starting a raid. Di’aree came out to see too, but her mother pushed her back inside.

    “Ca’lkin, get all of the protection we have for this house!”

    Di’aree, with her curious mind wonder why everyone was running around and acting insane. “Mommy what’s wrong, I’m scared.” She said, Almost in tears. Ida’ris, picked up Di’aree and rocked her back and forth trying to calm her. “Its okay Di’aree, It’s Okay”

    That day to Di’aree was a spark. The spark that started a fire. The fire of the D’aevola raid.

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    Part Two; The Raid
    It was like war in their village. The M’ytaka archers and other fighters fought to the death with the enemy D’aevola, While Di’aree sat at home crying.

    “Why do they do this!” Di’aree scream, “They are Q’urebo like us! Why they kill us!”

    Ida’ris sighed “Because. They just do. I never liked those D’aevola scum anyway, so it would be the betterment for all of us if they just died” Di’aree could not react to what her mother was saying. She never had seen her mother be like this, at all.

    They sat in semi-silence for only a few minutes, when their door had been busted down. Three D’aevola had ran in, growling.

    “Give us all you have!” One of the D’aevola said, “Or we kill you and your child!” The other D’aevola agreed by nodding and some more growling.

    “Never.” Ida’ris said. Ca’lkin looked at her with a shocked look. “I will never give up everything for you scum.” Ida’ris then picked up a knife that was near her and held it tightly. She then attacked the D’aevola that had threaten her family. He then dodged, pushing her to one of the house walls.

    “No!” Di’aree screamed. Ida’ris got up and surprised one of the D’aevola, Making a stab on the bottom left of the side of his torso. The D’aevola fell to the ground in pain. Ca’lkin, Decided to fend off the D’aevola too. Di’aree sat in a corner as she watched the D’aevola get murder by her parents. New emotions filled her, Some she didn’t like.

    The Daevola raid had changed her life forever.

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    Part Three;The Aftermath
    Seventy M’ytaka were murder that day. Twenty severly injured. Ten Injured. Eighty buildings were destroyed, including Di’aree’s house. After the village drived out the D’aevola scum, they started an attempt to rebuild. Though their rebuilding didn’t rebuild the hole that was blasted right through Di’aree like an arrow. The raid had truly changed her life forever, until that hole healed, which would never happen. The seeping hole in Di’aree is a mental scar that would never heal.



    {Chapter Five}
    The Regalian Encounter


    The Regalian Incounter


    It was a normal day for Di’aree, well at least she hoped. She skipped through a meadow in the woods, picking flowers of every color she could think of. Then she made it too the shoreline. Uh oh, She thought. She had gone way too far. The smell of salt water was pleasant, and she decided to stay and not go back. She had sat on the beach, and drew in the sand, taking in the pleasant sounds and smells that the sea gave her.

    After minutes or maybe an hour of laying in the sand, she had her an unpleasant sound. The sound of a Regalian Boat. Not knowing what the vessel was, she quickly got up and ran back to her side of the village, dropping the flowers, knowing she will get them later.

    “Moma!” She yell as she came into the house, “There is big thing coming towards Eroki!” as she used her hands to shape it out. Ida’ris ran to Di’aree, worried about what she was talking about. “Where?!” She had said.

    “Around the Shoreline, but it must be further now!”

    “Wait the Shoreline… Di’aree what were you-”

    “Not now!” She said as she portrayed a worried look, “What if they invaders from other land! Going to take away what Estel have gave us!”

    “Di’aree calm down. Now, lets go to the shoreline to see if they are still there.”

    Di’aree tugged at her mother, running towards the shoreline. As they were running they bumped into a large man and fell down. Di’aree felt a dizzy and if Aloria was spinning around and around. She got up to be looking up at a five foot tall man, wearing a “fancy” uniform. He spoke a weird language that Di’aree couldn’t understand. He picked Di’aree up and study her. She squinted as she was facing the sun, though the man’s head provided a semi-block from the sun. He touch her ears and felt her tail.
    What are you doing?” She says. The man again said something in the weird language. He then put her down, and trudged through the forest towards the shoreline. She then hugged her mother and told her “I hope that never happens again.” as she almost slowly started to cry.

    {Chapter Six}

    Part One;The Crelin Attack

    Part Two;The Departure


    Part One; The Crelin Attack

    It was a few weeks after the incident with Di’aree and the large Regalian man. Di’aree had almost gotten over the fact that she had been so helpless right there and that he examined her like he hadn’t seen a Q’urebo before. She started to nimble on the bread that her mother gave her for breakfast, and enjoyed it. She took a slow sip of water, every time she took a bite out of the bread.

    After eating breakfast she decided to go outside a play. It was a wonderful day outside and the sun was shining. She ran in the grass, falling down purposely sometimes, giggling. It was then that she notice and smelled fire. She got up to see some flames, coming from the northern part of her village. Oh No, Maybe the bad Q’urebo came back, She thought.

    “Mommy there is a fire in the northern-” She didn’t get to finish her sentence. A group of grey Kleinfolk busted into her house and roared. They hiss. They were almost as bad as the D’aevola.

    “Ahh!!!!” She screamed. The Grey Kleinfolk attack her parents and brutally started to eat them. “Mommy! Daddy” Di’aree said in tears. They Grey Kleinfolk look at her and stared. They bared their bloody teeth. They started to walk to her and hiss. She scream.

    On time, an arrow flyed and hit one of the Grey Kleinfolk in the ear. “Di’aree!” Someone screamed. It was De’lkin. De’lkin swiftly ran to Di’aree, while firing some arrows. He grab her and ran with her, Straight to the docts.



    Part Two; The Departure

    Hilda meet them at the docks that Regalia set up with a group of M’ytaka. A boat that could only fit twenty floated on the water.

    “I have her” De’lkin said.

    “Where is my sister? And her husband?” Hilda asked.

    “There dead” De’lkin said. Hilda burst into tears, But the others calm her down and got her on the boat. They then had the hurry, hearing the Grey Kleinfolk coming.

    “Come on! We need to move faster!” De’lkin said and they went faster. When everyone got on the boat they paddled away, trying to get away from Eroki to whatever landmass they shall find and as they left Eroki, Di’aree was laying on the boat looking up at the sky. She knows that Mother and Father are with Estel, and she smiled. Her grief had skip every stage expect acceptance. She had accepted that Mother and Father were dead, She knew she had to move on.

    The Departure from Eroki and her old life had begun.

    {Epilogue}
    They had arrived to a unknown land mass. Swarming out in a group, the other inhabitants of the land mass did not they respect them. "Dirty Rodents" "Small Pest" They called them. They finally got out weapons and bats and started to beat them. Saying "Go back to where you came from.
    Di'aree managed to survived, with a broken leg. Though her only family left had died in the little uprising to remove Klein.
    She was broken. She was shattered. She was weak.
    And she was hopeless.

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    It was a rainy afternoon. Di'aree sat under a tree, as she ate a small piece of bread that without a doubt was most likely old. A slender and void pale man walk up to her. He smiled.
    No one had ever done that to her. He held at his hand. Di'aree grab as much as she could, and just like that. She was taken to the Sictor Manor, and was an "Official pet". Di'aree never really bothered to ask why he toke her in, All the knew is that she could start a new life.

     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Open for reviews!
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    I am just going to tag @billy_dont_rage Since, Well.. He makes good reviews.
     
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    I will review this once it gets closer to completion.
     
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    Okay
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Update:
    • Added Explanations of the relationships.
    • Added The Birth Section of Life Story
    • Added some of her personality traits.
     
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    Update:
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Update:
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    • Added Strengths
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    I am locking this until I finish the whole thing. So I don't have to bother with some useless comments or something.
     
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    I am going to bump this thread. I will have a Update soon!
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Update:
    • Added Chapter Four. The last Chapter and the epilogue will be added Tomorrow!
    • Added Weaknesses
     
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    Unlocking the Thread.
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    @billy_dont_rage Hey do you think you can review? I only have one or two chapters left in the life story. Everything is complete.
     
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    I can't really see anything wrong with this app except the part in the life story where Di'aree was educated for politeness. I am unsure how much manners is sought after in a Q'urebo community.
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Yeah, I mean I should add that she didn't get the "best" Politeness. Or change up the title and stuff.
    (Also when i click on the Billy_Don't_Rage quoted your comment on Di'aree Sire or something, I thought I was going to list..))
     
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    HereticTakao Archmage of Himbomancy

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    Welp. Got revamp this a little since Di'aree join the Sictor Family as Damon's Pet.
     
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    Oh, how cute this is.
     
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    I am just imagining all the Sictor Children just swarming Di'aree...
    eh..
     
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    Update:
    • Added Chapter 5, 6, and Present to the life Story.
    Di'aree Sire is finished!
     
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    I'm not.
     
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    Okay :P
     
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    Omg this double spoiler thing is annoying the hell out of me.
    Edit: I fixed it :P
     
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    @billy_dont_rage So what do you think of the finished version? Great? Good? So horrible your eyes burn out than burn back in magically?
     
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    I SHALL REVIEW THIS even though I'm not a staff.

    • I've noticed some spelling errors, for example you misspelled the word mandatory.
    • Some aspects of your application are quite thin. Try expanding on her personality traits, likes, dislikes, strengths and weaknesses, please.
    I suppose that's all, feel free to send me a tag when you;ve made above edits. Sheesh, now I sound like a roleplay staff.
     
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    I mean when I review I sound like roleplay staff. A new one though :P
     
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    @GoldenCoconuts
    I think I made all the edits needed. What to you think?
     
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    After a comma, you do not need to capitalize the first letter after unless it's a proper noun. You still could expand upon the traits, though :)
     
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    -Works some more-
     
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    I think I've made all the edits.
     
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    WOOHOO GREAT.
     
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    So I did make all the edits?
     
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    yup
     
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    Do you think I should transfer it to Staff Review?
     
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    sure
     
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    Lets do this :)
     
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