Basic Information Full Name: Darcy "Dee" Constance Medlaine Age: 25 Gender: Female Race: Ailor Sexuality: Bisexual Preferred Weapon: Fists Inventory Information A small, yellow tinted ringed notebook with a pencil through the binding. A pouch the size of an average fist full of regal currency. Round, Brown framed Spectacles. A tube of baby pink tinted lip balm. A book on Forensic Criminology. Skill Information Total Points: 35 +15 Fist Combat +5 Stealth Rogue + 15 Perception +10 Writing Art Body Shape 18 Body Stat Athletic Body Shape Low Body Fat Languages Common (learned in childhood) Ithanian (Learned in Ithania) Daendroque (Learned at School, in Ithania) Basic Information (Extended) Describe your character’s position in Regalia. Why are they there? How long have they been there? What is their occupation and living situation? - Darcy is a regular commoner citizen. She arrived at Regalia due to a letter from her brother stating her family wished she would return home after fleeing due to disagreements and conflict. Darcy has been in Regalia for a few months, but has remained hidden until recently. Her occupation is an independent detective and crime specialist. Describe your character’s upbringing. Where were they born, to whom? How many siblings do they have? What about their extended family/noble family ? - Darcy was born in Regalia, but fled at age nineteen to Ithania after harsh family conflicts and disagreements. Darcy has one older brother, Darellen. She has a married mother and father, and both sets of grandparents are deceased. Describe any secondary ambitions your character may have. Short term ambitions, or ambitions that may not be related to your character’s main goal in life. - Darcy's secondary ambitions are mainly just to keep a stable reputation for herself and her work, and make a few friends and equip a few colleages. Visual Information (Required) Eye Color: Light Blue Hair Color: Blonde Hair Style: Bun Skin Color: Fair Clothing: Stylish, mostly moveable dresses and boots. Height: 5'8 Personality (Required with Choice) Option Two: The Core List Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Good Choose your Character Personality Type The Architect, INTJ Choose your Character's Religion Unionism, 7/10 Weaknesses (OPTIONAL) Darcy's main weakness is the possibilty of not finding justice. Since she did not recieve it in her family, she seeks it out in crime work and detecting where justice is not seen. She does not seem to have grasped the concept that not all justice and peace will be done in the world, but she still strives for it. Darcy's second worst weakness is her brother. She collapsed under family pressure to return to Regalia, and is against the idea of ever making ties with her brother or parents every again. She does get triggered when she sees or hears anything that might connect or remind her of her family. Relationships (Optional) - Darellen Medlaine, Brother - Bernard Medlaine, Father - Shailene Medlaine, Mother Life Story (Required) Darcy Medlaine was born on January 6th, 284 AC in a small nook of Regalia. Her older brother of six years, Darellen, stood by the bed awaiting her little sister to open her blue eyes. Darcy grew up with knowledge being shoved down her throat. Immediately enlisted into education at age six, taught by her mother and father that ran a quiet bakery in the Ithanian District. Darcy was the top of her class, living life one day at a time whilst reading, writing, and observing the world around her. When Darcy was just seventeen, her parents proposed she remain in Regalia and run the bakery while they grew old. Darcy refused, and demanded she go to school in Ithania and make a life away from the havoc of the city. After weeks of pleading and more rejection, Darcy snuck out with a small sack of books and clothes and caught a ship to Ithania. During Darcy's short nine years in Ithania, she studied up on criminology, law, and writing. She wrote many books and published them in the city she dwelled in. Although she did not meet any lovers or make any friends, she acted just fine being by herself. It was easier for her to work in peace and quiet in the small Inn room she called something of a home. After multiple groups of people banging on her door, bribing her to bring solution to their problems, ranging from family murder to a math problem, she coinsidentally recieved a letter from her brother stating she needed to come home to resolve the family's hardships and unite once more. Mustering as much patience and mercy as she could, she departed Ithania and went off to Regalia. Now Darcy arrives in Regalia without notice of her brother or parents, renting out a room at the Nook Inn until she can find a house to live out of. Perhaps she will find what she is looking for here: closure. Closure that she can be herself without fear of rejection. Closure that whatever path she chooses and whoever she meets, that she will be happy.
First thing it seems like you double posted. Now onto the things I noticed. Proficiency (Points spent on skills will be tracked by using [points tracked/final total])I noticed that you haven't spent all proficiency points and you gave a different total than actually shown. You're going to probably going end up recalculating the physical stat. 10 talent points (10/10 spent) Perception is a Talent so that is 10/15 10 hobby points (10/10 spent) Writing Art is a Hobby 10/10 30 floating points from 25 years of life plus bonus 5 (25/30 spent) 5 for Perception (10+5)/15 5 for Stealth Rogue 5/5 15 for Fist Combat 15/15 5 Floating points Ailor Lineage (You're going to need to read this) The most important thing though is making use of paragraphs and indentations.
