Character Information Full Name: Ma'tsuii Dahlia or just Lia. Race: Feka. Age: 18. Sex: Female. Gender: Female. Sexuality: Straight. Eye Color: Blue. Core Concept Dahlia has no formal religion due to the exclusion of Feka in the Faces of Baskarr Faith. Dahlia is a Naive and caring person, her Niche is a young fisher, but with the ability points left over she can be molded in time into other things depending on her interactions and young age. Proficiency Information 5 Baking Art (Hobby) 5 Sailing Art (Hobby) 5 Cooking Art 5 Bodycare Training 1 Two-Handed Blunt 3 Roguery 36 Unused Points 4 Physical Stat Ability Information Roguery: Rogue Gift 4 Languages Common (Free) Wa'an (Parent) Ibeth (Parent) Appearance Information A relatively short Feka at only 4'8 suffering from Olvomism. Has Black hair, and orange fur for her Feka parts. Wears a blue robe normaly. Life Story Ma’tsuii Dahlia of the Husani Clan, Daughter of Ma’tsuii Ha’na is a Feka from the Kheni -Hetef Fleet, born on 12 May 291 AC. Thanks to the union between a Nefer Asha and an Sihai, Dahlia's early years were spent helping her mother in the inn and finding a love for cooking. She spent time on fishing boats learning the trade over the next few years. Wanting to reunite with her sister in Regalia she moved there. Progression Information Sage Level 1 Admiral Level 1
@Malir_Bromtor Hello! Apologies for the wait, my review is below. - Dalia is currently aged 25, giving them 30 core points. Right now you are five points over the cap. - As is, your backstory mentions only passingly Dalia's skill in archery, while their points reflect that of someone who has mastered the craft. I would tweak that a smidge, maybe adding a line or two more in that regard. Other than that, everything seems to check out. Mark changes made in green and tag me once changes are made!
Everything looks good! However, there's a small typo in your backstory. Being born in 283 AC would mean your character is 26, not 18. The current year is 309 AC. Please clarify on your app whether you'd prefer for them to be 26 or 18. That's very minor, so I'll go ahead and approve in the meantime. APPROVED
