Cyan Timemantle

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  1. Mekking1

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Cyan Timemantle
    • Race: Ailor, Heartland Ceardian
    • Age: 26
    • Sex: Female
    • Sexuality: Find out IC
    • Eye Color: Icy Blue
    Core Concept
    • Cyan is Agnostic, believe if there is a god it is of little relevance to her. Her parents were devout Unionists; however she abandoned this religion once she reached her teenager years.
    • Out of place, but never out of time. Cyan is a bit of an Outcast who strives for acceptance. Generally a kindhearted girl, but sometimes a bit of a loner. She has more then a couple of secrets...
      In her free time, she enjoys singing and playing the piano.
    Proficiencies
    14/14 Total Points used.
      • Strength: 4
        • Blades Pack
        • Unarmed Pack
        • Large Blades Pack
        • Flexible Weapons Pack
      • Constitution: 2
        • Multi-Shielding Pack
      • Wisdom: 2
        • Affliction Wisdom Pack
        • Dimenthist Wisdom Pack
      • Dexterity: 1
        • Parkour Pack
      • Magic: 5 (Exist)
        • Time Magic Pack
        • Light Magic Pack
        • Space Magic Pack
        • Healing Magic Pack
        • Cosmic Magic Pack
      • Charisma: 0
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    Appearance Information
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    • Cyan is 5'7" tall, with a slender build.
    • Cyan wears light, white painted metal armor on her legs and arms, as well as a choker with a blue gem inlaid in it.
    • Cyan has blue facial tattoos, something that reflects her role in battle as a Mage according to her.
    Life Story
    • Cyan grew up and had a relatively normal life in a small town on the crown isles, except for a small detail: She was able to learn magic really easily, learning sorcery at a young age. She was forbidden by both her family and her town from exploring these, but did so anyways. Growing up she really enjoyed singing, and also learned to play the piano during this time.
    • During her early teenage years, she learned to fight with the help of the Town Guard, planning to join the guard herself some day, making a humble living protecting the townsfolk from the occasional lowlife. It was during this time, she also learned in the distant past her family had been renowned mages from digging through old family history, further inspiring her to continue studying magic in secret.
    • It is believed during her later teenage years, while visiting the Crown City for study, use of her magic caused an accident, the details of which are not well known.
    • Her family, however, found out. For her gross disobedience she was disowned, kicked out, and left to fend for herself. She tried to find work as a Sellsword or Freelance Mage whenever she could, just trying to get by. A path that would eventually lead her back to the Crown City.
     
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  2. BiBiBirdie

    BiBiBirdie The Bird Monarch

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    Hello there! I've claimed this application for review. Please make the following edits and tag @BiBiBirdie when complete!
    As a side note, a Cratos (in its old form) does not have any other visual features that would give away its identity as a Cratos!
    As a Cratos, you can get up to 5 Engineering Packs for free! However, if you would like to keep the points invested in engineering, that's fine as well.
    Please make a note of the Engineering Branch here! In this case, it would be shown as Engineering [Dark Metal].
    Please include their Cratos Abilities here, as well as what their attunement is! Since you've gone with a blue colour scheme, I'm assuming this would be a Cahal Attunement.
    Please include a small mention in their backstory of when or where they learned to fight.
    Please include a small mention in their backstory of when or where they learned to use engineering. I would recommend having the Cratos teach her, but that's up to you!
     
  3. Mekking1

    Mekking1 If specified, this will replace the title that dis

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    @BiBiBirdie Done, thank you
     
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    BiBiBirdie The Bird Monarch

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    Approved! However,
    As a note, you can edit this to read as +15 Vocal Arts (+5 Hobby Points) (+10 Invested) to make things easier to review! (And the same thing for Instrument arts)
    You've also spent 33 points! Please update this!
     
  5. shardbearer

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    I'm a big fan.
     
  6. Mekking1

    Mekking1 If specified, this will replace the title that dis

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    Why so? Its nice to know things done right and wrong, for the use of future characters.
     
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  7. Mekking1

    Mekking1 If specified, this will replace the title that dis

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    @BiBiBirdie I got this all fixed up so it should be ready for re-review.
     
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    nice.
     
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  9. Mekking1

    Mekking1 If specified, this will replace the title that dis

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    Quite, I love her
     
  10. BiBiBirdie

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    Approved!
     
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