Basic Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list.Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Full Name: Corjah dei Termini Age: 45 Gender: Male Race: Dressolini Ailor Sexuality: Straight Skill Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list.Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Also be sure to use a bolded header to separate Culture Points from Proficiency Points and languages. Total Points: 50 Points +20 Heavy Bow Combat Skill (Proficiency) +20 Squad Tactic Skill (Proficiency) +8 Unionist Sanktist Ritualism Skill (Proficiency) +2 Perception Skill (Proficiency) 20 HB= 20 Athletic Low Body Fat Languages Dressalao (Learned from Parents) Common (Learned through Education) Visual Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Eye Color: Dark Green Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Wavy slicked back Skin Color: Dressolini lightly tanned Clothing: Militaristic Height: 6ft Personality and Abilities (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. In order to explain the character’s personality, we will ask you write a respond to each question, so that a reviewer or reader can gain some valuable insight into your character, while also challenging you to think outside of the box for your character's responses. You should try to answer each question with at least 2 phrases to explain their in-character actions and feelings. How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? Corjah responds to fear as an unspoken challenge to best himself, should he find himself feeling weak in his convictions he will do his best to stand firm against it for the sake of his vows. For the Fear that he cannot challenge and cannot handle, he will become silently resigned in himself, his breathing quickening and his mind travelling a mile a minute, if it is something he has never faced nor has no means of defense against he will become Paralyzed with Fear until he snaps out of it somehow. How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? Corjah reacts to Stress similarly to fear, choosing to seek to get the stressful situation over quickly rather than prolonging the uncomfortable. In stressful situations he subtly begins to hyperventilate a bit and bounce his leg to try to focus his attention on something. Being unable to Smoke and only being able to Drink in the privacy of a room alone he doesn't have many other means to react and cope with stress. How would your character express feeling Happy? Through Music usually, idly playing his Lyre when he feels the most joy. He would also cheer and give a heart Ha-ha! When the feeling of Happiness is filled in him, depending on what it is that is making him happy makes the intensity of the Happiness difficult in itself. How does your character view Law and Authorities? The Absolute Law of the Land should be the Spirits Final Word, Man can only do so much to curb the way people desire to be. Authority figures are those who have earned their place and that must be respected. However if they fail in their position he believes they are not ready and need to be re-educated. How does your character feel about Races other than their own? If they are Void oriented Races he hates them with a biting passion, if they are Gorr races he is accepting though distant, if they are anything else it varies on a person to person basis though ultimately he has a Dressolini supremacy ideal to himself as well. How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths? His Devotion to the Order of Pavisa fuels his respect and loving of the Spirit, seeing himself as a Devout follower of Unionism he has his beliefs set upon that ideal. As for other faiths, those who follow other faiths are misguided souls who, should they reject to conform and embrace the Spirit are essentially useless otherwise. How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? He is wary of the Arcane and Magical, powers given to man in service to the Great Way are fundamentally flawed as he believes the greatest power one could be given is to be born Ailor. He is not favorable of Mages unless they are used more so as tools than as equals. How does your character feel towards their family? Corjah loves his family to the core, seeing his position as one in which he can protect his family and their interests fuels his passion for keeping his family strong. What is your character's biggest insecurity? Corjahs biggest insecurity is that he will forever remain in the shadow of his older brother Deos accolades, he wishes to do good in the world and not be so loose as Deo in what he deems morally just. What is your character the most proud of about themselves? He has become a Maestro within the Pavisa Order and has been given the chance to open a Chapter of said Order within the Capital City. What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? His Code of Erhen and his devotion to the Spirit. These two things combined keep him motivated to move forward and be strong for his people and family. What is your character's biggest fear? Failure, failing to succeed in battle worries him to the point he would begin overthinking his decisions and making mistakes, in these times of weakness he would look to his Family and the Clergy in order to realign him and keep him on track. Life Story (Required) Add a summarized plot line of your character's life story. The point of the Life Story is not to give a novella long list of events that happened in the character's life, it's supposed to just create a summary of the person's life, while keeping a keen eye on explaining the previous points. The life story is supposed to tie together and provide background information as to why and how the person became what they are. It is required to limit your Life Story to about 3-4 paragraphs with no more than 800-900 words. If you want to, you can include a full Life Chronicles behind your Life Story where you go deeper into detail, with no upper limit for words, however this will not be reviewed. Keep in mind that all crucial factors should be in the Life Story, as the approval only counts for the information in the Life Story and information in the Life Chronicles may not be lore canon. Childhood: Corjah was born in the great province of Termini to a loving and supportive mother and father by the names of Maria and Mario II. Was separated from his Brother Deo at a young age to become a Lay Servant to the local Pavisa Chapter in Termini at the age of ten and soon after became a Squire at the age of 14. His Local Pavisa Chapter Maestro remarks in this time how Corjah is very bossy to the other Squires at his level. Teenage Years: Having been taken in as a Squire in the Pavisa Order at the Age of 14 he began his training with the Pavisa Crossbow, taking a liking to it rather quickly. Developed a habit of staying up late and reading the necessary text to excel at the written portions of his studies, though due to this arrived to formation late and sometimes fell asleep during quarterly chore time in the Servants quarters where the other Knights wouldn’t be actively walking about. Tried to take after his elder brother Deo at being rather well with the Ladies but was often times rebuffed by his fellow female Squires for, “trying to hard”. Adulthood: Graduated from the Pavisa Order at the age of 24 with the rank of Knight, being granted his Ring to symbolize his attachment to the Order. Served under the command of the Maestro of Termini as his Seneschal for a number of years. Showcased positive ability with Commanding of his Pavisa Lines under the Maestros order and soon developed a unique interest in the practice of Front Line Command. Was taken prisoner along with the other leading members of the Pavisa Order that had their Chapter in Termini when the Iron Duke stormed through the Land. Their imprisonment was appealed by the Local Reverend and soon they were set free but returned to find their Bailey was ransacked by the Iron Dukes forces. The Termini Chapter soon disbanded in favor of service directly to the Grand Maestro of the Pavisa Order. The Grand Maestro chose to grant Corjah the rank of Maestro when his old one died of old age and thusly gave him the task to head to the Capital City of the Empire and set up a Chapter of the Pavisa Order in Regalia. At the age of 44 Corjah now heads to Regalia to complete this task and to do his Order proud.
Please detail how he reacts to fear that he cannot cope with, his reaction cannot always be to challenge himself. What would he do when confronted with true terror, such as a dragon or creature about to devour him? Iterate on these aspects of fear. I would recommend adding another sentence under each question to keep a minium of around two to provide more depth. Or how would he deal with the fear of losing battle? Various things you could add! What coping mechanisms does he have that enable to him to get over stress? Does he fidget? Does he smoke? Does he drink? What does he do? Over-all the biggest issue is mostly the personality section, I see very little else other than that. Be sure to tag me and highlight edits when you're done!
Updates: Granted Combat School Leadership (Pavisa Order). Name changed from Corjah dei Termini to Vinicii at the Top.
Updated Age to 44, transferred Points from Shield and Pole all to Heavy Bow Skills increasing it to 24+. @Caelamus
@Mortisian Your Heavy Bow Calculations would be 48 instead of 24 since it's a heavy weapon per say. Correct Math: 20FL + 48HB (24x2) = 64 Body Stat
You can only have up to 8 points into this. You also have 10 hobby points left to put towards anything in the art profs. Heavy bow doesn't give double points anymore. Please correct this. Once you make the corrections in PURPLE tag me again. @Mortisian
Made em, Keeping Hobby Points as I discover what Corjah likes to do for a Hobby and gets better at over time. @Nesstro