Basic Information Full Name: Kristina Keusen Age: 31 Gender: Female Race: Leutze born Ailor. Main Ambition: Kristina seeks to procure some significant amount of wealth, to buy the luxuries of life. Special Permission: Champion in School of Himmlisch Spoiler: Basic Information Expanded Kristina has been in Regalia for several years and arrived after she had completed training, though she didn't see it fit to even attempt to be a Virgin Blade. She found herself in a series of odd jobs, such as physical labor, tending bars, and cleaning up messes. She now has herself comfortably in a house right outside the tavern, that was originally a shop. She uses it now as a means for an office, and a place to live. Kristina was raised in Vixhall, in a moderately busy town. She grew up the daughter, (expected and hoped to be son) of a local guard and a young farmer's daughter. She grew up constantly forced to work what was considered a man's job with the lack of any siblings. Kristina's only second ambition is that if she has a child, she will raise it to be a free-thinking individual, who won't feel smothered like she did as a kid. Spoiler: Skill Information School: Himmlisch Level: Champion Source: Learned from the Academy. Visual Information Eye Color: Dark Green. Hair Color: Red. Hair Style: Tied in to over the shoulder ponytail. Skin Color: Pale Clothing: A shirt with a cape covering one arm, and pants used for maximum mobility and comfort. Height: 5'8 FT Body Build: Ripped Weapon of Choice: A Claymore, for no exact reasons, Kristina finds Great Swords difficult. Personality and Abilities: First Paragraph: People often see Kristina as stoic and rude. They often think that she doesn't like anyone or anything. She seems to be very self-confident, and even to a point stuck-up. Those who get her to talk say she's still very quiet, with very few words to say. She is often described as observant, though, with how her blank eyes seem to be around the room whenever someone glances at her. Second Paragraph: Kristina is actually rather nervous around people, and finds it hard to properly express herself. People make the right assumption that she is confident, but only in her combat skills. She finds clutter a rather distasteful thing and chaotic, so she tends to keep a neat and orderly house, clothes, and general living style. She is passionate about the things she loves, but rarely let it shows publicly. Third Paragraph: Kristina tends to be more animated and lively near her friends, and almost deadly silent near her family. With her friends, Kristina tends to be sarcastic and lively and is constantly cracking jokes or making comedic statements. With lovers, Kristina tends to be an entirely different woman, who shows passion and concern openly and isn't afraid to make her worries known. With everyone close to her, she is very protective, almost overly so, which is in stark contrast to what strangers think of her as detached and aloof. Fourth Paragraph: Kristina is incredibly neutral, with no care for being a good-doer or evil. She sides with whoever offers the most money and has the best chance of winning, so she’s very flexible when it comes to sides. She sees corruption as unavoidable but doesn’t stand for it if it’s publicized. She thinks people who try to fix everything in the name of good and justice, are fools who will be stabbed sooner or later. Talents Focused: Kristna, due to her years in training, has become quite perceptive. Beyond that, she was always a focused child, aware of patterns and the such, she is able to pinpoint her focus on smaller things quite easily, pouring her entire being into a project or training. This is one of the reasons the woman seems slightly indifferent to other things, as she is simply not paying as much as intention as she should. Agile: Throughout her life, Kristina was always just fast. A fast runner, no. But fast with her hands and arms, most assuredly. Kristina always uses her speed to deliver quick lashes to the enemies and weave her way out of a foe’s attack to some reasonable extent, and quickly punish them when they leave their weak points unguarded. She also uses this to make quick retreats when she notices she’s over-committed herself to a battle. She makes sure she is in a fight, and out of a fight as fast as possible. This is easily her most valued strength. School of Himmlisch: As most of Kristina's life was devoted to her training, she has effectively become rather proficient in her abilities. A red-haired guardian, she is able to wield her blade both offensively to cripple opponents into submission, and defensively. Her fighting style tends to rely even more heavily on defense than others with the same education. This comes from her generally non-aggravated attitude, and her the thought of fighting being more inconvenient than not. No matter the reasons behind her particular style, she is still a force to be reckoned with. Life Story Childhood: Kristina was born and hoped to be a boy, and she was even lucky to be born at all, due to her mother’s infertility issues, though, due to birth complications, her mother passed away shortly after birth. When she came out to be a female, her father was enraged and begun to raise her as a boy, until a baby brother was produced or not. This meant Kristina was forced to work the small shop they owned, and do all the more physically requiring activities. She grew used to it and knew to follow her father’s instructions without any questions. This would lead her to be a very obedient child, with very little time to play or talk to people about anything else but work. But all and all, she was happy with her life. Teenage: Kristina's early teenage years was probably the best times she had. She snuck out with the small group of friends she had after work to enjoy a drink from one of her friend’s parent’s brewery and quickly grew attached to them. Her Aunt always knew what she had been doing when she returned home, but didn’t care and decided to let her live in freedom, knowing the child she had been in. Eventually, her Aunt had let her live her a free life too long and had noticed the mistakes. Her aunt decided to take action in disciplining the teenage Kristina by sending her to train under the Himmlisch style, as her Aunt herself used to serve as a Virgin Blade, before an accident left her unable to. This made a young teenage Kristina lose many of her years. Adult: Kristina's young adulthood was spent in the Academy, training in and eventually perfecting her style to a point of content. The woman never found herself to quite lock with the Virgin Blades in terms of devotion and ideals, so she never stayed one for longer than a decade. Finding herself lost and without a cause, she eventually decided on traveling to Regalia, in hopes of scoring in on one of the many economic opportunities it had, but never could keep permanent jobs. She was mainly a bartender and a cleaner for the majority of her time until she got lucky and landed herself a job with House Ombre, after departing from another House.
@SpinSpinDizzy Review complete. Fortunately, I can find no major grammatical mistakes or out-standing lore inconsistencies in this sheet. However, I will mention that you may wish to give thought to creating a goal for this character. A character with no goals will become stale rather quickly, in my own personal experience. But all of my commentary aside, Approved.
Visual: Your body build will need to be ripped given she is a champion in the school of Himmlisch. Talents: Add the School of Himmlisch as a talent and either remove a talent, my suggestion being Cautious, or simply add another weakness to balance it all out. Life Story: Your character would have needed to be a Virgin Blade for at least 10 years to be considered a champion. Either remove her being a champion or adjust her life story accordingly. Make the above edits in a different colour and tag me afterwards! @SpinSpinDizzy
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