Preserved Sheet Chengis

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Martyr_321

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Chengis' Walk up music

Basic Information (Required)

  • Full Name: Chengis
  • Age: 63
  • Gender: Agender, refers to himself as male.
  • Race: Yanar
  • Sexuality: Heterosexual
  • Weapon choice: Carries 2 swords on his hips, a Gladius and a Falx, and on his left arm he carries a Targe Shield, and on his back he carries two javelins in a smooth slide harnass so he can pull them out and throw in one easy motion.
Skill Information (Required)
  • Total Points: 60 from age
    • +20 Blades Combat Skill (+20 from points)
    • +10 Squad Tactic Skill (+10 from points)
    • +4 Society Knowledge (+4 from points: Unionism Knowledge)
    • +15 Shield Combat Skill (+15 from points)
    • +5 Athletic Training (+5 from points)
    • + 6 Throwing Combat Skill (+6 from points)
  • Body Shape
    • Physical Stat: 20 Blades Combat + 15 Shielding + 5 Throwing Combat Skill, 5x2 Athletic Training = 50, however 40 Physical Stat because Yanar
    • Body Shape: Muscular
    • Body Fat: Extremely Low Body Fat
  • Languages:
    • Common
    • Plains Elven
  • Combat Rolls
    • 22 Attack, Base 10 + 4 Swords + 8 Body build
    • 26 Defense, Base 10 + 5 Shields +8 Swords + 3 Athletics
Basic information Extended

Chengis is currently a third rank citizen, brought there and raised by Unionists Priests, he's been there most of his life. He is currently going for application in the City Guard again and fight along side his brother Bhima.

He was brought up to Unionist Priests, but given birth to by Hak'Chan, as far as he knows he has one brother and that is Bhima, a warrior monk dedicated to purging and vengeance against Void Worshipers who had killed their parent.

Outside of trying to get better, he wants to be a first class Citizen, his ability to follow orders and unwavering loyalty to the Ailor cause will be instrumental in that regard.

Visual Information (Required)
  • Eye Color: Brown
  • Hair Color: Green
  • Hair Style: Moss all over except chest, typically with more smaller moss patches.
  • Skin Color: Green
  • Clothing: Red Shirt, brown trousers.
  • Height: 6'0
  • Body Build: random
Visual Information (Continued)

Chengis' face is just as it should be, slanted eyes of a Ch'ien-Ji that are tucked under heavy brows like that of an Orc, his ears are small and tucked almost tight to his head, his nose flatter against this skull but still protrudes from his face. His mouth is a slight frown when in resting and listening with a large forehead covered by dreadlocks of green moss that run out of his head and cover most of his features (though he tries to keep it out of the way most of the time.) His thick neck is wrapped in a golden torque that would look too small if it didn't fit him so well.

Chengis is a big plant man, built like a wall of muscle he is 6'8 (203cm) and 256 pounds (116.12kg) He's got very broad shoulders with a thick chest, all muscle showing due to the fact he sculpted his body to look like a muscular build with very low body fat. He has long arms, that are very well sculpted, his muscles seemingly almost always in flex mode. As well as thick sculpted abdominal muscles and thicker more powerful legs also with very visable muscle beneath the layer of tree bark he's covered himself in. He has mossy hair covering most of his body going along his arms and legs and upper chest, but not covering his abdomen.

Chengis walks around with a very nice red shirt with leather spaulders covering up most of his decorations, on his legs he wears nice brown trousers. However, when shirtless he has two golden torques on each of his biceps that curl around his middle arm. as well as two leather cords with his name written into them in case he should ever fall in battle. He also wears a thick golden torque around his neck, with two dragon heads that meet near the middle.

Chengis' voice is of middle tone and powerful. He has an light air of command that comes up while in the din of battle his voice can be easily heard above the clash of swords and shields when shouting. He speaks at a normal speed and keeps his sentences smart and short. So he can be understood and followed if others want to follow him.

Personality and Abilities (Required)
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Fear?
      • What is fear? Fear is what I want to conquer, and I conquer fear with a calm head and a tactical mind. He who keeps his fear under control wins.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Stress?
      • Stress is as good as fear when dealing with it. Stress is dealt with by calculating out the problem, and taking it out at the source. What causes his stress but external forces after all?
    • How would your character express feeling Happy?
      • Very outgoing, he is a social butterfly when he's happy, talks to everyone and is excessively polite and always smiling. Happiness is everything that life should be and more.
    • How does your character view Law and Authorities?
      • With full dictation to their rank and authority, always following orders no matter how ridiculous. While obeying the law, he also respects everyone, regardless of race. Because he knows if he does not then he will be looked down on more than others.
    • How does your character feel about Races other than their own?
      • He's very loyal to the Ailor race. Believing himself to be an Ailor reborn because of his failures in a past life. He will protect other Ailor from harm and always make sure he does his best to help out in any way he can. Chengis feels as though he can help out his own race and other races by proving himself to the First Class races.
    • How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths?
      • Chengis is a devout follower of Unionism. His Brother leads their morning and evening prayers.
      • He believes that all other Religions outside of Unionism are false, but can not be punished, but he especially believes that Void Worship is worthy of being destroyed, sometimes by any means necessary.
    • How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world?
      • He's always cautious around things he doesn't understand. and that's one of the things he's cautious around. When dealing with the Arcane, he will field himself in the best way possible and try to learn what he's facing so he can work around it.
    • How does your character feel towards their family?
      • He loves his family, He and his brother have been through the world together. Chengis would give his life for his brother and will fight more for his family than anything else.
    • What is your character's biggest insecurity?
      • He's very sensetive about being insulted, and if he is insulted, he asks the person giving the insult to either retract his statement or prepare to protect himself using his fists.
    • What is your character the most proud of about themselves?
      • He is most proud of the fact that he's earned his way through life.
      • He loves the fact that he has already succeeded in saving lives while he was formerly in the guard.
      • He is most proud about himself trying to push himself forward in life.
    • What motivates your character to move forward and better their life?
      • He has a desire to succeed, and to make sure he succeeds. He wants to fight for a better life for himself and his brother, He personally is striving for first class citizenship and to become a Captain in the Guard.
    • What is your character's biggest fear?
      • He's afraid of failing himself. He believes that he is an Ailor reborn and failed in a previous life under the Fourth Creed and so was reborn as an inferior race. He is always afraid of failing.
Relationships:
Chengis currently has a lot of people he's an acquaintance with, but not necessarily friends with. He considers his friends to be more of his comrades in arms such as
His brother, Bhima, ( @SirJiminyCricket )
Close friend and battle buddy, Sibyllad Lykke ( @Sujitation )
Close friend and training, McKale Hellset ( @Hellset )
His adopted son and very close friend Eric Decimar ( @Ghirko )
Battle buddy and fellow guard, Lyal'amna Moliria ( @Caduceus_Clayy )
Battle buddy and fellow guard, Abigail Cormac ( @OffSeason )

(anyone else that I am missing feel free to leave a comment :D)

Life Story (Required)

Chengis' life story begins with him as a Yanar child, born to an old deteriorating Yanar named Hak'Chan. Along side his birth mate Bhima, they were both born in the year 276 AD on January the 4th, his parent Yanar deceased shortly after him being born. Hak'Chan's mental ability and physical state left him too weak to thrive in the Daendroque area due to his old age of 276 and not having regrouped up with the other Yanar behind the Forest Wall. Hak'Chan was killed by a group of Void worshipers within the first 10 days of Chengis being alive. They were rescued by a group of Unionist Priests and taken to Regalia and they were taken to Regalia. Chengis ended up imprinting more on the Unionist Priests that saved their lives and was dedicated to living up to their standards.

One of their rescuers, was a Paladin named Aida Dudley, took them in and raised them in the order of the Faith. Their generosity, kindness, and strength are what made Chengis and Bhima what they are today. Chengis trained in the Monastery, training his mind and memorizing the Creeds. Later he'd move out of the Monastery and move on to fighting colleges, learning the way of the swords

Eventually Chengis had enough money to buy a mentor, to train him in fighting. His body already toned to the way of moving on instinct, making him a natural hand to hand fighter and fighter with his twin swords. He fought with natural talent and grace. His wrestling and skill with his twin swords weapons made him extrordinarily dangerous in close range. Regardless if Chengis failed to understand, he'd keep trying relentlessly to get better to where he could to improve and be fit for the school.

When he was twenty, he had learned enough. He had only his brother and with his mentor now gone, He went out to fight in the areas surrounding Regalia, entering in to many fight clubs and training groups in order to improve. Soon, Chengis met peace with the different looking people of the world and began making friends. Chengis would continue to train. His sword skills getting better and better. He'd soon surpass all his peers and return to the city. He made friends in the city and is determined to gain renown, merit, and knowledge as well.

At the age of 63, Chengis is currently with his brother, Bhima. And with the return of his Birth mate Bhima, together they are again striving to become the greatest people they can be. And they will tag team the world and take it on hard core. As he goes on in life he will look to change that, but as of now, he is always polite. Always willing to help people in whatever way he can.
 
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I feel like I should mention that Yanar don't follow the body build thing because of ovulation they just become the body build of whoever they ovulated
 
I feel like I should mention that Yanar don't follow the body build thing because of ovulation they just become the body build of whoever they ovulated
He is however, muscular build, just for the clarification on it. If it changes I would change that as well.
 
Please make the following edits:
  • Body Stat: (+10 unarmed combat x 2) + (20 blades) + (15 frontline) = 55 total. You can have any body build that abides to Yanar Ovilation, just fix your math on the body stat section.
  • You need at least two sentences for each personality and abilities section. Please add a sentence or two to the more barren section.
  • Under the religion section, mention what he thinks on other religions. Try adding some examples.
  • Expand on Hak'Chans death and story. Go into detail for lack of confusion, why did he struggle in Daendroque?
  • Be sure you have Ghirko's permission for inclusion of his character in the backstory, though I'd personally recommend concentrating on Chengis in your story.
Tag me once you've made the following edits in blue.
 
@PapidaCarrot I did some editing to my stats, if you want to look at it and re approve it feel free nothing else changed
 
@Martyr_321
You have a total of 65 points at the moment. I'm not sure where the +15 shields (Racial boost) came from. I don't believe Yanar receive a +15 shields racial boost.

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@PapidaCarrot messed up on the addition, forgot to change what used to be +10 to +5 unarmed So I should be down to 60 again
 
@Martyr_321 Recheck your points, you are way over 60. Keep in mind that racial bonuses aren't a thing anymore, only racial limits to a proficiency
 
Physical Stat: 20 Blades Combat + 10 Squad Tactics Skill + 15 Shielding + 5 Throwing Combat Skill, 5x2 Unarmed Combat Skill, 0x2 Athletic Training = 25 Physical Stat because Yanar

Tactics doesn't factor in, and your total physical stat is 50, though as Yanar your max is 40.

20 Blades=20
15 Shield=15
5 Unarmed= 10
5 Throwing=5

20+15+10+5= 50
 
@Martyr_321 You need to edit your application so that it says needs reviewer. No one can see it when it's listed as rejected. You also should reach out via message to me, as I couldn't see any of your tags, likely because the application was listed as rejected.


Please make the following edits:
  • Remove the combat roles section, or put it in a spoiler.
  • Remove body build in the visual information section. That information is handled in your body stat section.