Played Character Charles Vasilev

[YoitsKing]

Spoiler: Ambience

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Basic Information​

-Full name: Charles Vasilev
-Age: 27
-Sex: Male
-Race: Krainivaya

Core Concepts​

-Charles is on the heavier side of belief, of the orthodox unionist faith.
-Charles is a man who wishes for a leadership role more than anything. He is quick to inspire men, and lives to serve the Empire with all his being.

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Strength: 1
~ Technique Parry

Constitution: 1
~ Iron Will

Intelligence: 6
~ Tech Wrath
~ Puretek Roulette
~ Puretek Evade
~ Puretek Reload
~ Puretek Blessing
~ Wardrobe Pack

Dexterity: 7
~ Cutthroat Stance [Free]
~ Cutthroat Backstab
~ Cutthroat Target
~ Cutthroat Dodge
~ Cutthroat Bleed
~ Cutthroat Mirror
~ Sharp Reflexes
~ Improvised Attack

Languages​

-Common
-Kriv


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Visual Information​

-Eye color: Light blue
-Hair color: Chestnut with streaks of silver
-Hair style: Medium-Short heavily styled hair
-Skin color: Ivory
-Clothing: Fashionable or militaristic clothing.
-Height: 6'1

Personality​

-Alignment: Neutral Good
-Personality: Campaigner
-Religion: Unionism (8/10)

Backstory

To Be written*
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[Jonificus]

Under review

 

[Jonificus]

Approved :-D

 

[YoitsKing]

Approved :-D

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Fixed my backstory and some points

 

[Jonificus]

Fixed my backstory and some points

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No longer on staff.

 

[Follower]

@YoitsKing Everything seems to be in order, Approved.

 

[YoitsKing]

@YoitsKing Everything seems to be in order, Approved.

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@Follower Re review please, due to the new update!

 

[Yurs]

Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly

 

[Yurs]

Howdy! Your app looks good, the inclusion of Taylor Swift got a laugh out of me. However, there's some edits that need to be made before I can approve this application:

• Your current proficiency spread and Phys Stat calculation is all over the place. Values and investments largely do not line up, and your Phys Stat appears to be going off old values. Additionally, you have claimed your Racial Boost on a 5 Point Hobby investment, however you are only able to apply it to at least 10 Points Hobby investments as mentioned on: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Racial_Boosts . Please go ahead and completely redo this section to be more comprehensible.

Please go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary changes and we can continue the review from there. Thank you for your patience!

 

[YoitsKing]

Howdy! Your app looks good, the inclusion of Taylor Swift got a laugh out of me. However, there's some edits that need to be made before I can approve this application:

• Your current proficiency spread and Phys Stat calculation is all over the place. Values and investments largely do not line up, and your Phys Stat appears to be going off old values. Additionally, you have claimed your Racial Boost on a 5 Point Hobby investment, however you are only able to apply it to at least 10 Points Hobby investments as mentioned on: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Racial_Boosts . Please go ahead and completely redo this section to be more comprehensible.

Please go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary changes and we can continue the review from there. Thank you for your patience!

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Does that work?

 

[Yurs]

Yep! That's perfect.

APPROVED

 

[YoitsKing]

Yep! That's perfect.

APPROVED

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Replaced Destined Body 3 with Honed Skill 1

 

[Yurs]

Remains approved!