╒═══════════════════════════════════════╕ ╔══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╗ ╚══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╝ ╘═════════════════════════════════════╛ Bronagh Ní Floinn 《Character Information》 Full Name: Bronagh Ní Floinn Uí Ceallaigh Nickname: Bron, Gingey Race: Hinterland Ailor (Aontaithe) Age: 24 Sex: Female Gender: Female Sexuality: Bisexual Eye Color: Green ╔══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╗ ╚══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╝ 《Core Concept》 Bronagh was raised and still wholeheartedly believes in the deities of her people, worshipping Uacht na Máthar. She reacts to the changes in the world around her as if these spirits are the ones causing change, not the natural world itself. Bronagh is a young sorcery acolyte who is trying to learn to both protect herself and use the powers for protecting others. 《Proficiency Information》 8 Caster Ranged Combat 5 Gardening Art 15 Pathfinding Art (10 Prof + 5 Racial Boost) 10 Horticulture 5 Mixology Art (+5 Hobby Points) 5 Vocal Art (+5 Hobby Points) 17 Unspent 15 Physical Stat ╔══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╗ ╚══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╝ 《Ability Information》 Ailor Racial Abilities Rogue Gift II Wall Climb I Omniaware I Sorcery (Exist) Spell Shot Beam Focus Ëlen Cahalism (12 Abilities) (Inactive) 《Languages》 Common (Free) Aontaithe (Parental) 《Appearance Information》 Bronagh has no mutations Bronagh stands at 5’6” with a thin, lean frame. Her face is freckled and her cheeks are noticeably rounder and often dusted pink from her own body heat coming through her pale skin. Her dirty-orange wavy locks are cut sharp at her chin and shorter curtain bangs frame her forehead. She tends to dress in neutral colors and plaids, primarily shirts and pants. Spoiler: Artwork By @Moahu by @space_lyft on Instagram ╔══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╗ ╚══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╝ 《Life Story》 Bronagh was born to Saoirse Ní Floinn and an unknown father out of wedlock in a small village on the Emerald Isles in 284 AC. Raised by her grandparents after her mother’s death, Bronagh spends most of her childhood and adolescence attending the local village school, exploring her homeland with fellow village children, and eventually aiding her grandfather on his farm and selling produce. As an adult, she works odd jobs and she ventures towards the capital, a mix of harvesting produce, guiding groups with her pathfinding skills, and bartending. In keeping with the Aontaither culture’s love for exploration, Bronagh decides to depart for Regalia in an effort to “see more of the world” at 24. 《Relationships》 Spoiler: Relationships Susanne (Sugar) of Havenreach | “The first person to show me kindness in this city and she continues to do so.” Terrowin Steeljack | “My boss, but also my friend. He may be strong-headed but he does what is right.” Milo Shinseki | “I thought once that we would be great friends but the path you seem to be taking makes me doubt this… " Xeniya Wyrann | “My thoughts on you are changing, but only slightly." Cadwyn Marth | “I appreciate finding another Aontaithe in this city.. Even if you are a bit odd..” Fen’nan Solaveira | “I think I may be falling for you but your actions push me away." Sibyllad Lykke | “Basically my mom. Glad to have someone looking out for me” ╔══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╗ ╚══════ ≪ °❈° ≫ ══════╝
@MayItSnow Hello there! I'll be taking this application for an Aspirant Review. Expect a response shortly!
Here's my review! @MayItSnow Basic Information All looks good here!Skill Information Please mark where each skill comes from in terms of point investment, just in brackets after each skill!Special Traits All good here!Visual Information All good here!Personality All good here!Life Story Please make additional mention of where she gained such skill with daggers; as the only mention of physical training in her life story is when she was a very young child. Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
Okay!~ I think I fixed everything you commented. I went ahead and dropped the dagger points remarkably because there wasn't anywhere I thought it would fit organically. That being said, I added Light Bow Combat and Hunting Art points and explained that in the life story to make up for the change in points!
Lovely! Please specify her Ailor Lineage as found here, and I'll be glad to mark this application as Approved! @MayItSnow
I've added the lineage and the associated special traits (sorry about forgetting that)! I've also changed to the preferred weapon to a hunting bow, and added a secondary weapon as a dagger in order to reflect the changes previously made to the proficiency points :) @Antimreoir
@Antimreoir hi! This needs a quick re-review, updates are as follows: Proficiency Points are completely redone (more emphasis on hunting, circus art just doesn't vibe well) Complete life story overhaul Aesthetics added
Hiya~ I have some updates/changes @Antimreoir Aged her up to be 24, felt like I've been playing her older/more mature Got rid of all dagger combat Added Vocal Singing, Horticulture, and Husbandry She now has a rescued Niñi Ridgeback Turtle that she affectionately calls Turtar (just Irish for turtle) Lessened Hunting prof to 10 instead of 15 Changed body totals to reflect these changes Updated to new Ailor racial (Woaden) Added line in life story to reflect her aging up All changes are in this color! Thank you!
@Antimreoir So I'm a dummy and did that post late last night and forgot two things: Added her Túath name Made her literate in common (mostly for more ease of roleplay on my end) and put a line in her backstory of when she learned to read and write These are once again marked in this color (please don't smite me <3)
@Antimreoir hello again, Updated to new proficiency system so all the points have been reworked Added to the art section Thank you!~
@Antimreoir Hi, small update, changes in this color as follows: New mundane familiar: Cidd the Squirrel [old mundane of Milo Shinseki] Change to Lawful Neutral Updated clothing description Added to relationship tab
@Antimreoir Small update! Changes made in green! Removed Husbandry Added Gardening art +5 Added Exist Sorcery after IC training for a few months, one spell [Magic Bolt I] has been added
Hi! I believe I need a new reviewer. The changes are as followers (most important highlighted in green): Added Ëlen Cahalism Infection (After IG events) Added Colossi Worhsip Updated Language to Innis per New Language Release A few tweaks to relationships Thanks!
Basic Information This is fine. Skill Information Your physical stat calculation is incorrect; it does not include Gardening Art, which would also contribute. Please correct this. Visual Information This is fine. Personality This is fine. Life Story This is fine. Mark your changes in GREEN and tag me when you're done. @MayItSnow
@Acosmism I totally glossed over that the last time I updated my proficiencies. Thank you for seeing it! I believe I've redone the calculations correctly.
@Acosmism She was cured in record time. (Will also be updating to new culture update sometime soon). Thank you!
@Acosmism Updated to new application template and new Aontaithe culture (changes from culture are quite minor)