Approved Sheet Bomani Chaths

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  1. Koyote

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    Basic information

    Full name: Bomani Chaths "Battle-Beast"
    Age
    : 43
    Race: Mew-Clade Rakhet
    Gender
    : Male
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Preferred Weapon: Mace, Claws, Fist
    Combat Theme


    Skill Information:

    Total Points: 50 Core Points

    Core Proficiency's

    One Hand Blunt + 15(Core)

    Fist Combat + 12(Core)

    Shielding Combat + 12(Core)

    Strength Training + 10(Core,+5 Racial Boost)
    - Great Force 1, -Gate smash 1

    Herculean +3(Core)

    Arcanology +3(Core)
    -Archblood Knowledge

    Points 50 - 15 - 12 - 12 - 10 - 3 - 3 = 0 remaining points.


    Hobby Proficiency

    +5 Writing Art.

    5 Hobby remaining unspent.
    Body Shape

    15+20+10, +5 Herculean =50

    40 (Racial Cap)

    Muscular Body Shape

    Low Body Fat

    Languages

    Common (First language learned. Fluent)
    Ibeth (Taught by Father. Fluent)

    Visual Information
    Eye Color: Purple
    Hair Color: Dark Brown
    Skin Color: Brown
    Height: 6'4
    Clothing Preference: Combat Clothes/Training Clothes/Open clothes. Casual.


    Personality ( The Core list )

    Alignment:

    Chaotic Good

    Personality Type:

    Commander

    Religion:

    None


    Abilities:

    Pure Body 2
    Body Claws 1
    Body Tail 1
    Asha Agility 1
    Living Metal 1
    Living Metal 2
    Living Metal 3
    Living Metal 4



    Primal Archbloodism:
    Archblood Arsenal
    Archblood Hearing
    Archblood Overchange
    Archblood Repairs
    Archblood Mindwall
    Archblood Landing





    Life story


    Bomani Chaths was an Asha bred to be a warrior. He had the face of a lion and an urge for battle like no other. Bomani and his parents were all slaves to combat and war. His parents mainly taught Bomani how to survive the ferocious combat, battlefields and arenas they were brought to. After reaching his teenager years, Bomani's parents were both slaughtered during battle leaving the lone Asha left in this world. At about the same time, Bomani started comparing himself to other Asha and realized he were special. His muscles seemed to have been growing unnaturally fast along with them being noticeably larger than the other Asha when fighting in battles. As his Herculean genetics came in, his reputation started to grow and pass in rumors. Bomani fought in war as a soldier, and as a gladiator. As time passed, Bomani was given the title "Battle-Beast" after taking on the longest streak of victories in the arena. He were given his freedom after many accomplishments and decided to head out right for Regalia hoping to face many more opponents. As Bomani only grew to know combat and battle, it was all he ever cared about and aimed to one day be defeated in a fierce battle.​
     
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  2. Antimreoir

    Antimreoir Refugee Supremium

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    I'll be claiming this application for review, expect a response within the day. @Koyote
     
  3. Antimreoir

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    All is in order here, Approved. @Koyote
     
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    @Antimreoir Completely reworked Imrilith. Changed every single thing to another race with other categories and etc. App is up for re-review.
     
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    Reapproved.
     
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    @Antimreoir Bomani has been infected with Archbloodism. App is up for re-review. Ill add in recent life soon.
     
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    That's fine, reapproved.
     
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    @Koyote

    After some reassessment I'm taking this under re-review, Archblood's eyes are purple at base, and you would require an Altalar to change the form of Archblood from Primal to Exist.

    Also, I would like you to clarify how his Archbloodism came about, as such seems like an incredibly recent change considering how new the application is.

    Furthermore, please elaborate on how Bomani learned Faraddi, as neither of their parents are Qadir, they cannot have it as a racial language, please change this or invest in linguistics.
     
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    @Antimreoir Made the requested changes. Removed Faraddi, Archbloodism is set to Primal and changed the eye color to Purple. Bomani after being taken to a deserted island with Therris rped by Caelmus. Had taken a ship and sailed outside of Regalia to a Dragon Temple where a ritual were performed on him for Archbloodism.
     
  10. Antimreoir

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    @Koyote Could you tell me the character's motivation for engaging in such a ritual? Thanks for making the other edits.
     
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    @Antimreoir Bomani is a character who was solely motivated by fighting as it were all he were interested in. Upon being put in a situation where he were alone with Therris having to survive, they approached what looked to be statues of snakes which have in fact represented Sea Serpents. Of course both him and Therris left before anything major could happen though the fear he saw in Therris started leaving himself feared for the unknown. As he walked into the Dragon Temple some time after sailing, the fear of the unknown and powerful beings never ceased from his memory. The thought of being infinitely more weaker than the creatures he has not even seen yet left him with a drive to change himself, in which he accepted the ritual.
     
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    Reapproved.

    Though as a small side-suggestion that isn't as important, investing in a few more diverse proficiencies will really flesh out the character.
     
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    @Antimreoir Was working with the character and changed a few things up. Removed points from Fist Combat, added in shielding combat and spent the rest of the points on Arcanology. App is up for re-review.
     
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    You have 5 skill points unspent, please dedicate these somewhere or mark them as unused. @Koyote
     
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    @Antimreoir If you are talking about hobby points, I have that set as unspent for now. The core points are all used up.
     
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    No they're not, you have a racial boost in Strength Training, meaning you have only spent 45.
     
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    @Antimreoir Made the requested changes, added points across shielding and fist combat, all of the points should now be used.
     

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