Character Information Full Name: Beryl Castion, or Berry. Race: Feka Asha, Non Asha parent is Cielothar. Age: 22 Sex: Female Gender: Female She/Her Sexuality: Bisexual. Eye Color: Green Spoiler: Appearance Core Concept A former Estel Worshiper, she is very eager upon being Dread Corrupted to follow and learn of the Void Gods having not picked one to follow yet. A former plucky and kind hearted Feka, she is slowly following the path of the Void and becoming a true Void worshipper. Proficiency Information 5 Magic Flesh, Space, Whimsy, Arcane, Glamour. 1 Cons Thread 2 Dex Disguise Pinning. 2 Char Pet Husbandry, West Linguist 4 Wisdom Common Alchemy, Healing Alchemy, Volacrum Wisdom Pack, Dimenthist Wisdom Pack. Languages Common (Free) West Linguist Pack Appearance Information Mutations Blue Skin, Crown of Horns, and Hair Altered to a Black with hints of Blue. Ears removed of Fur but keeping their Asha shape, only appears mutated when using her Mutation Amulet. Blond and Curly Haired Rabbit Based Feka. Life Story Born in Regalia to an Asha father (Farhet) and a Cielothar Mother (Nazetel). Her early life was spent helping around the home and playing with small animals, as a girl she and some friends and it fell on her crippling her and restricting her to crutches for a good portion of her life. In her early adult life she opened a pet shop and worked hard for a time, and a blessed event happened where a mage took pity on the Feka and healed her legs, leaving them still weak from years of limited use, but now healed. Currently Beryl is falling into the hands of the Void, slowly allowing a ritual that she undertook by force to taint her mind and soul from her original mind sets.
@Malir_Bromtor Hello, I am claiming this for review! >This is more for ease of reading and less of an actual requirement, but please bold section headers. For example "Basic Information", "Proficiency," etc. >Please expand on the life story. Another two to three paragraphs should do the trick. Make these changes and tag me when you're done!
@Athelois In light of the Cielothar update and the status of Half Varran biting the dust soon, I've decided it fit's the character best to convert her over to Cielothar, a few things have been retconned and changed but over all it's the same character.
@Athelois last changes i will be making for at least a month sorry for all the changes ive been doing trying to figure out how i want to do the character and am getting very close to my end goal
@Athelois Ready for rereview and changed profs up a bit as well as a sorcery school since i never used spirit sorcery
@Malir_Bromtor Everything looks good so far! I just need you to sort your spells by what school they're from and notate which are aesthetic and which are ability!
@Athelois added 5 points in husbandry so my event animal would require kill perms please see the description near the top of the calemberger beagle and msg carlito if you have any issues with the creature
@Athelois Returning this character to the fold with updated mentality races and skills. With magic to be determined at a later time.
Approved, but make sure this be your last change for awhile. You need to start getting out of the habit of inconsistently changing your character or making so many. We've had a long conversation about character design before. You need to really take your time designing your characters to be sustainable with more longevity and not just spaghetti concepts you've strung together because you like something or have a temporary interest at the time. Start writing and doing things with more permanence in mind.
@Caelamus Understood, after finishing the Dread Rebirth and adding mutations after I’ll be fully done for a good bit. Mutations will come with the advanced rebirth of it is approved.
Swapped out Pistol Pack for Pinning Pack Same exact ability but more aesthetically fitting for Beryl.
@microwavemmm Changed up my wisdom packs a smidge, added in Thread craft and took out The Hexe pack since disguise pack basicly did the same thing.
