Azrael Vel Yates A pacifist in a land of strife and struggle. Full Name: Azrael Vel Yates, (Sometimes Nicknamed Caeruleum) Age: 19 Gender: Male Race: Nefer Asha Sexuality: Homosexual Skill Information Proficiency Points: 33/50 - 10 Medical Training - 4 Shielding Combat - 3 Element Control 2 [Point Buy] - 3 Element Control 4 [Point Buy] - 3 Element Control 7 [Point Buy] - 3 Arcane Mastery 1 [Point Buy] - 3 Magic Bolt 1 [Point Buy] - 3 Olvomism [Point Buy] - 3 Engineering Golem [Point Buy] (Steamtek) Hobby Points: 10/10 - 5 Construction Art - 5 Gardening Art Body Shape Physical Stat: 7/15 -2.5 Gardening -4 Shielding Body Shape: Andro Body Fat: Low Body Fat Languages - Common (Default) - Skodje (Background) Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Point Buy Element Control 2 Element Control 4 Element Control 7 Arcane Mastery 1 Magic Bolt 1 Olvomism True Path Affliction Knowledge Skill Light Mend 1 Light Mend 2 Racial Body Claws 1 Body Tail 1 Asha Agility 1 Cahal Aphar Blood Eyes 5 Cahalic Form 2 Exist Gift 1 Cahalic Familiar Casting Light 1 True Path 1 Mind Wall 1 Dravinda Gift 2 Shrewd Insight 1 Memory Sense 1 Basic Information Azraels position in Regalia is nothing but a wanderer. They’ve arrived there through sheer luck (Or the opposite of luck). They hold no titles, but hope to gain some through their time here. Azraels upbringing was being adopted by a warlike group. Forced to be a healer for them, and learn magic, they’ve completely forgotten the Asha traditions, and instead have formed their own ideas of what to believe in. Azraels ambitions are to gather friends, and help as many people as they can in Regalia. Visual Information Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: White Hair Style: Asha Skin Color: White Clothing: Light blue mages robes Height: 4’5 Personality Option Two: The Core List Character Alignment Neutral Good Personality Type Meditator Choose your Character's Religion Azrael was never raised to learn of one religion, rather through their experiences, they began to believe there was something greater out there, albeit not knowing what. Thus leaving them freeform in their religious beliefs, believing in something above, but yet unaware of what that may be. If rated on a scale of religious beliefs they would be a 5 of 10. Albeit yet unaware of what to believe in.(Their beliefs could change in rp) Recently they've been taught of the collosi, And are starting to believe in them. 6/10 Weaknesses Prideful Azrael is Prideful in their belief of helping others, they strongly believe that they’re capable of bringing peace and order, even in times of great war, Leading themselves to enter situations they’re hardly capable of handling. Neutral Good to Extremes Azrael’s “good” alignment isn't simply just for helping good or neutral people. If there's someone who's evil, mortally injured or wounded. They’ll no doubt want to help them as well, as they believe everyone has a chance to become good. So they’ll be good to as many as they can. The only limitations to this good are mindless aberrations or monsters. Pacifist Azrael refuses to kill another living being, The very most they would ever do, if capable, would be knocking out and wounding. Killing is against their moral code, and they refuse to do such. Personality Extended Likes - Helping Others - Having Friends - Making New Friends - “Saving the Day” (Acts of heroism that succeed) - Peace Dislikes - War - Having to Harm Others - Losing Friends - Betrayal - Death - [EXTREME DISLIKE] Being forced to kill. Relationships (To be added) Life Story Azraels life story is one of strife, but takes a direction unlike most who struggle. Instead of embracing the ills and evils that occur in life, he has rejected such, and is ambitious to be bettered from his experience. Even being raised in a clan of raiders, they've made the best of it by healing, rather than harming. Starting at the beginning, as a child they were conceived in the Far North, their parents, being well off archeologists going on a trip there to see the Velheim cultures. Their parents despite traveling in the far north, were Asha. But as their Asha parents went to return from the Far North they had forgotten Azrael. Being but a baby, an old Ailor man with the last name Yates had adopted them, and taken them to their clan. Their clan was a warlike group, fighting to earn their keep, but as Azrael grew up with him, he found he could barely handle harming others. He only undertook learning healing. So that the clan would not simply throw them out. Through years and years of witnessing the battles, they become horrified with what they saw to the point of making them direly believe that, war, and fighting was wrong. They witnessed clan members dying before them, they witnessed people bleeding out in tents, screaming, whilst others of the clan caused death outside of the encampment. This solidified a belief in pacifism which became prevalent throughout their life, seeing such horrors at a young age. Sticking to books and occasionally healing/helping others who were wounded, rather than going out into the battlefields and raids. Eager to impress their clan, without partaking in the horrors they've gazed upon as a child such as the war and death, they learned more and more healing methods, using books and scrolls found from the clans loot, They wanted to find a way to help others, without having to take up a sword or shield, their beliefs guiding that which they learned through the looting and pillaging of libraries by their clan, the spoils being read by them, they even begun to learn magic, but instead of impressing their clan, they were disgusted. At the age of 13, he was cast out into the snow. Forced to trek through the snowy Far North, until eventually they became a stowaway aboard a ship. Much like their technical brother. But not all was well there either, for they were caught, but the Captain was Merciful. Azrael showing off his healing skills as his capabilities, caused the Captain to offer a proposal for work. Azrael accepted and healed the crew, In return the Captain paid them, and helped them along their journey, occasionally offering up spell books, and also giving guidance, Much alike Azrael the Captain believed in peace, not war, A simple trader upon the seas who happened upon a lost soul. As years past, and Azrael reached the age of 19, he decided he wanted to see the world for himself, rather than stay aboard a ship, venture onwards and help others of his own accord. When they asked to be set free of the crew, the grateful captain let them, dropping them off at Regalia, where they are now.
You have only spent 41 core points, not 43. Please adjust. Physical stat is rounded up; you have nine, not eight point five. Please adjust. Unless your character grew up in the Ashal Isles or somewhere where Ibeth is a main language, they cannot have it for free. As per the recent Linguistic update, free languages are not given via parentage, but by place of upbringing. I'd suggest you either adjust his place of upbringing or replace Ibeth with a different language that fits the North. See https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Linguistics for help if necessary. Please specify what race the character's parents are. This is mostly redundancy but it confirms the character's own race. Additionally, I'd like you to add a few more details to your life story to explain why the character is so against killing (given that he was raised in several violent environments) and what drove him to learn magic, combat, et cetera. I feel that this life story is too short, despite having a good, workable concept. Expand upon it a little. Please make the appropriate edits in a separate color and tag me when done.
@sonofthestars Needs Rereview Removed Warlash as i didnt feel it fit the character, and replaced it with Affliction Knowledge, Also tweaked the backstory slightly to fit this change by removing mention of a whip.
@sonofthestars Decided to remove a few abilities, that didnt seem like they fit the character, Affliction Knowledge would be nice to have, but ultimately curing is more other helping based and knowledge only helps the self, which doesnt fit as well as i'd like. I've also removed true path because theres already a levitation ability. Finally added light mend 1 and 2 that were added from medical to a skill category which i forgot originally.
Needing Rereview Decided to Remove Flux Shift, and Curing Knowledge. Curing Knowledge because I'd like the character to learn it through the RP. And flux shift as i could not justify a reason for having it, and in addition would like for the character to have more potential for growth in the future.
Added 1 shielding through training, as well as Engineering Golem through learning. Needs another rereview. Sorry to do it right after you got around to reviewing. @sonofthestars
