──────────────══════════ ‹ •◦ ✠ ◦• › ══════════────────────── THEME MUSIC. [ Playlist ] reformatting "Cogito ergo sum." [| The Remnant of Foul Stubbornness |] ━━━━━━━━━━┛ ♢ ┗━━━━━━━━━━ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ Spoiler: Misery More ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ━━━━━━━━━━┓ ♢ ┏━━━━━━━━━━ ╭────────────────────────────────────╮ "Sic semper tyrannis." ╰────────────────────────────────────╯ ──────────────══════════‹ •◦ ✠ ◦• ›══════════────────────── 《 ♟︎ || CHARACTER INFORMATION || to note one's identity. .ೃ࿐ 》 « CHOSEN NAME » | Kelemvor of Ellador. › Nicknames | Kel, Blackiron-Sovereign of Nothing, Iron Remnant. « RACE » | Once Bene Rexit Isldar. › 'Affliction (Race)' | Mystech. « AGE » | ??. › Birthday | February ??th. « GENDER » | N/A. › Pronouns | He/him. « Occult» | Ordial Unbound Spirit. 《 ♙ || CORE CONCEPT || to note one's personality. .ೃ࿐ 》 RELIGION. | Deceit, necromancy, violence. The Frozen Liege & Graven-Sire, followed by an unworshipping Omnist, working for a mostly unknown goal. IDENTITY. | Once an Upyr, and now 'more.' Self-proclaimed Spirit-Sovereign. Everything has a reason, be it just or unjust. 《 ♟︎ || VISUAL INFORMATION || to show one's self. .ೃ࿐ 》 ODDITIES | Kelemvor's interior holds a distorted space filled with spikes, resembling the inside of an iron maiden. Under his cape is a pair of folded blackiron wings, when unfurled growing in size and appearing skeletal and draconic. This Remnant is ice-cold to the touch. APPEARANCE | Kelemvor's true form is an icy spectral representation of Ayas, who he was in life. However, this appearance is eternally bound to a blackiron suit of armor. Portions of it are scaled to give wyvern-esc accents to it. Additionally, he wears a white cape. Wrapped around either forearm are [Chains of Misery], extendable blade-tipped chains that are used as weapons. ┎──────────────────────┒ ━━━━━━━━━━┛ ♟︎ ┗━━━━━━━━━━ "Oderint dum metuant." ━━━━━━━━━━┓ ♟︎ ┏━━━━━━━━━━ ┖───────────────────┚ 《 ♙ || PROFICIENCY INFORMATION || an Unholy Spellblade .ೃ࿐ 》 14/14 Points Spent. ♢ 0 STRENGTH. ♢ 1 CONSTITUTION. › Lancer ♢ 1 WISDOM. › Technique Parry ♢ 0 DEXTERITY. ♢ 7 SINISTRAL MAGIC. › Magic Feather / Magic Shove / Magic Smog / Magic Curse / Magic Resist / Magic Warp / Mimicry Pack ♢ 5 FAITH. › Hex Bloodlet / Hex Parasite / Hex Madness / Hex Guide / Hex Apocolypse 《 ♟︎ || ABILITY INFORMATION || to note one's powers. .ೃ࿐ « Unbound Spirit » Mystech Remnant. › 3 Mechanics [Magical Variant Mindcontrol], [Magical Variant Shapeshift], [Sinistral]. 《 ♙ || LANGUAGE INFORMATION || to note one's languages. .ೃ࿐ 》 › Common / Sulvaley / Hellas / d'Ithanie / Deathspeech. ┎──────────────────────┒ ━━━━━━━━━━━━┛ ♟︎ ┗━━━━━━━━━━━━ "Alea iacta est." ━━━━━━━━━━━━┓ ♟︎ ┏━━━━━━━━━━━━ ┖──────────────────────┚ 《 ♟︎ || LIFE STORY || to note one's history. .ೃ࿐ 》 CHILDHOOD: Kelemvor, Phyrllat Seltalan, later Ayas "Drulviirn"-Yelfina, was born in Ellador, originally an Isldar. After a raid on his home, he was sold as a slave... ADOLESCENCE: ... EARLY ADULTHOOD: ...infected with Vampirism for a long time... ADULTHOOD: ...Seeking to make a name for themselves they came to Regalia in hopes of growing in infamy, to gain the attention of... SEMI-PRESENT: ...but he died in an honor duel. Later returning as Kelemvor. art by alia format by row
@Beleiver I would say that it wouldn't be all too feasible for someone with a muscle god build and large frame to have stealth rogue skill as I'm of the opinion that it would take smaller, more nimble frames to pull off sneaking. Please substitute this proficiency point into something else. Other than that, I see no issues. Tag me when the change has been made.
@Anarchizm Alrighty! I put the points into perception instead. Thanks, Anarchizm! Oop. Also noted somethin' I did wrong on bodystat. Fixed.
@Anarchizm Due to the Vampirism update on Dorkarth, I've chosen to change Ayas' bloodline to Von Kërle. I've added the "Vampiric Form," new mutations and moved around prof as I no longer have Auld Cathesis (or however you spell it). The profs I kept/changed are in red, whilst some I just removed altogether (void ritualism). I /hope/ I got everything. Thanks!
@Anarchizm Updated to match new proficiency system. Heavily decorated, and added some minor details in the life story (grammar correction, and minor expansions). And of course edited proficiency, and added ritualism and the such. I hope I did everything right. Thanks!
@Anarchizm Thought I'd tag you just to let you know, updated the character sheet with Upyr Mutations and Upyr Abilities. Didn't change anything other than those, and a few aesthetic changes w/ the Upyr Mutations.
Heyhey! To whomever picks up this application to review, I've made a few changes. 1). I switched Ritualists Impliment to Ritualists Projection, as I have never used the Implement ability even once and thought I should switch it for something I might find use for. 2). Astral Infusion! Ayas has an altered mutation now, which I put on a document as to not clutter the application. I posted the link on an "X" on the application, though I'll post it here again. Astral Scales. Thank you! Have a great one. =)
Hey there @Beleiver! Claiming this app for review. However, before I do I would like to mention that point/ability changes should be run by your Permission Managers first for this character, just to make sure nothing happens that makes "broken" or unintended combinations. Do this by pinging Athelois or I in Permission Info, then re-tag me here after approval there!
@Mollymock Updated! - Changed up the Von Kerle form design (OOC retcon), changes to the eyes, lips, former "facial hair", back and ears. - Updated abilities! With the Von Kerle update, I just wrote those down. - Also updated proficiency spread out (to the approved list). Thank you!
@Mollymock Hiya! Added Undeadism to the document, and edited everything I'd need to (I think) in order to match the change. Left personality alone for now, though it'll probably alter soon due to IC situations. Also shuffled around prof a lil' bit. And also will do an aesthetic shift to the application soon, though only the aesthetics of it. Thanks!
@Caelamus Yo! I finally undead-ified the character app with the new name taken ICly. New aesthetics throughout the app. The only other changes are with proficiency; lightbow to heavybow, added husbandry, and arcaneology to follow IC changes and a minor rework. Added in the "fake" backstory as the main thingie, and the real one is in the spoiler with the only change being how husbandry fits in. Thanks!
Yo! Updated to match the new format- also shuffled around profs now that artifactism and essence knowledge changed and removed heavy bow to get Caster Ranged with an Ordial theme to it. Made the prog points all warrior. Everything else is pretty much the same. Thanks! @Caelamus
I'll approve it on a few stipulations. The character has a new physical cap that is 20. Remove racial bonus from fist and leave it at 10. You don't have to use the racial bonus. Don't go warrior 3 if you're going for a spellblade aesthetic. Go Warrior 2 Sorcerer 1.
@Caelamus Alrighty! Edits/changes made (I think I did it right), removed the racial bonus and updated phys stat accordingly (now 17). Also thanks for the tip, I'm going for a similar aesthetic, so I added sorcerer 1 as well. Thank you!!
Take off the things you get from Prof investments & Racial Abilities, makes things cluttered & confusing to decipher - follow the updated Character Template
Keep the Hollow abilities in Ability Section, also wouldn't hurt to state having the Vhaa'luk artifact since it's contributing to your prof points. Otherwise looks good, just tag me once you've done that & I'll stamp you with the funny approval button @Beleiver
GRAHGOH updated the app formatting update+addedmagic+swapped one strength point buy andcan i get a thread cleanup thanks
@Caelamus updated with the Undead Update (went Titan-Hollow, removed con stuff due to it) and added (in blue) artifact stuff
awrhaiuwn Updated w/ the bruiser update & removed a point of DEX to add to CHA instead (for mini ice shadedemons)
