Approved Sheet Avaineiral Rilynnlues

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    Savior, conqueror, hero, villain. You are all things… and yet you are nothing.
    In the end, you belong to neither the light nor the darkness. You will forever stand alone.”
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    [-- CHARACTER INFORMATION --]
    • Full Name: Avaineiral Asaril Rilynnlues Bel-Ant Solleria-Rivere-Ise
    • Race: Fin'ullen
    • Age: 37
    • Sex: Male
    • Gender: Male
      • Pronouns: He/Him
    • Sexuality: Bisexual
    • Original Eye Colour: Light Blue
    [-- CORE CONCEPT --]
    • Religion: Avaineiral is a follower of the Altalar Pantheon with the Patron God, Ulley. Frequently declaring himself as a devoted individual, his history in religious exploration and willingness to skirt around the moral upkeep necessary for true devotion has him teetering on the edge frequently with his personal acceptance in what is true or not. While acknowledging all the higher powers as immensely influential beings, he worships none bar the Pantheon itself. He gives a specific note of respect and fear to both Rhaakhr and Ruunh as a sense of acknowledgement for his once proud duty as an Archblood and what they had given him in chances to do. Pride and Justice hold the same, having been connected to one for far longer than the other and still holding a deep thankfulness to for the chance to break free from self brought bonds and the other a chance to fight for what he had believed in. Finally there is Morrlond, the Lord of the Deep. He pays homage in traditional methods of respect to keep the demon at bay on his near constant travels and livlihood around the seas. His spirtuality while split will forever belong to Ulley, the Patron God that he returns to no matter the situation or circumstance, sooner or later, he finds his way home.
    • Concept: A devoted Allorn supremacist and revanchist that seeks the return of the crown of the world to his people, Avaineiral is an experienced and talented commander with history in all things occult during his time spent as an Archblood which he has recently been freed from. He encompasses what it means to be a warrior-scholar, learning dark secrets and uncovering the mysteries of the world and those beyond to better fight for who and what he believes in, loyal to loved ones and a self-righteous dedication to the returning empire of the Altalar people, a place in which he truly calls home and will do whatever it takes to see his future cemented happily with his family.
    [-- PROFICIENCY INFORMATION --]
    • Strength: 3
      • Blades | Polearm | Flexible
    • Constitution: 0
    • Wisdom: 4
      • Affliction | Dimenthist | Volacrum | Amontaar
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Magic: 3
      • Water | Wind | Sand
    • Charisma: 4
      • State Commander | West Linguist | Ancient Speech | Mount Husbandry
    [ -- ABILITY INFORMATION --]
    • Fin'ullen: 4 Abilities | 6 Specials
    • Mount Husbandry: Horse
    • Magic Dimension: Exist
    • Cahal: 4 Commutable Points | 11 Specials
      • Light | Cosmic | Space | Sensor
    [-- LANGUAGES --]
    • Altalar
    • Common
    • West Linguist
    [-- APPEARANCE INFORMATION --]
    • Description: Holding defined features and a trained physique, Avaineiral stands at the full height of 6'8", holding himself high above most and looking down with disdain for what he considers the lower races. With little fat and lean muscle that has been built through constant years of exercise, his musculature is always on display through the use of form fitting clothing that typically are bodysuits made of elastan adorned with golden highlights and sashes. He frequently breaks the tradition of avoiding red clothing, incorporating reds often just as much as he fancies blue clothing. His features are strong with raven locks that can either go past his shoulders or be cut into an undercut, shifting between haircuts depending on mood and needs though often favors the longer looks which can flow freely or be done up into a half ponytail. What always remains however is the braid on the side of his head, holding one or two beads that are either gold, red or blue in colour depending which better suits his appearance for the day. His eyes are a magnificent ocean blue, fitting quite nicely with the pale skin. He has few scars, mostly due to a variety of demons which never truly healed, puncture and claw marks though these have recently been hidden with tattoos which have been a new addition to his body, full body coverage with a heavy emphasis on the blackout style while keeping true to Allorn imagery. Since his marriage he always holds his wedding ring close, a moonstone ring held onto a golden chain which is worn around his neck.
    • Cahalic Form: Growing to a towering and hulking size of 8', Avaineiral's body shifts into a humanoid wolf with digitrade legs, elongated arms, clawed hands and feet and the head of a wolf. His musculature increases rapidly to be combined with growing fat that is all hidden underneath pure white fur, unblemished and uncovered in any accents that would taint the purity of it all. Cracks in the flesh and fur travel over much of his body, molten light of icy blue energy pulsates as if veins carrying blood, lighting up a feint area by them that only prevents him from truly hiding in the dark and does not improve his own sight. His eyes are a burning icy blue with slitted pupils filled with a cosmic look into the galaxy itself, the stars above replicating in his eyes that when stared at, zoom through and make way for planet after planet to be seen. His body is continuously surrounded by charges of static electritcity and dripping starlight that follow every step he takes.
    [-- LIFE STORY --]
    • Born in the borders of the Regalian Archipelago in the province of Solleria, Avaineiral Rilynnlues was raised mostly amongst his own people, the Fin'ullen while being kept at a distance from the Ailor, at least in the sense of forming bonds with them, family being staunchly against seeing them as equals, despite living in their Empire. He was around many Solvaan just the same, though his views on them was much finer compared to how other Altalar may view them. His family was relatively well off, having a heritage of military service throughout the years in the principalities before moving to Solleria where they served the Sols. Being the eldest sibling, he had three younger siblings, one sister and two brothers.
    • Tutoring was set in stone for the boy, being extremely strict even if odd for the typical Fin'ullen education experience, as he was set to become a leader, at least in the eyes of his parents as the eldest child. While his race had barred him from many options with the Archipelago and the Ailor dominance they held in attendance, mostly due to racial preference for others of his own kind and the need his parents had felt to ensure his beliefs were always held with the Allorn, he was treated to multiple relatively high end tutors by his family which included but not limited to past military officers, Altalar warriors of some renown and even his own extended and immediate family that held experience in military conduct and leader expertise. Mistakes were met with harsh punishments and disobedience with even greater strikes, conditioned into the mindset that was destined for him.
    • Coming to age where he was physically capable to begin learning how to properly handle himself, his family set him on a ship with a family friend who was part of the Scarab Feet from Talant Amanra-Assalei that was passing to transport more Altalar to the Regalian Archipelago while also sending Altalar back to the homeland while given leave. The purpose was clear, he would be sent to the principality states where he could gather a better education that was befitting someone of his heritage so he may further the reputation of his family. There was no resistance or arguments, Avaineiral understanding this was the best chance for a proper tutelage and way of life befitting his people's status, and with the underlining hint of not wishing to defy his parents. Rather than arriving in Talant Amanra-Assalei as he expected, he was instead placed in Tanar Ivaëlle, being escorted to one of the many marble buildings in the capital. He was enrolled into one of the prestigious war academies at his young age where he would remain until the future where wars would drag him away. History, warfare, guardianship and a purpose was all taught and given to him, spending countless years training endlessly amongst his peers and elders.
    • Once his eductation was complete, there would be little time to truly have for himself, the world being set on a series of wars over the years that he could not escape from. First would be the Ranger Crisis and while he had no true connection or reason to join, he couldn't help but feel some sort of need to rejoin the fellow Sollarians that had come all this way for their Regalian Overlords. He had reunited with old friends and gained those that were new, including some of the local nobility, swearing his services to them should they ever have need of it. More education followed, never truly having enough and unable to really think for himself at this time, needing to preoccupy himself with duties that were expected of him, or to expand his horizons even further. It would only lead to more war, this time with the Regalians in the Elven War of 302AC. Fighting in multiple of the major conflicts and always forced to retreat as his people were beat back bit by bit, injured to the point where he couldn't truly aid in the final battle and instead ensuring the civilians of the city would be safe, or at least, safer until the prince had finally surrendered. For a moment there seemed to be a moment of peace, that he could finally rest and recover, helping where he could with evacuations and the safety of villagers and other groupings around. He allowed himself to begin properly feeling and thinking for himself, understanding what he would want in the future and to truly be who he wanted to be now that he was outside of his parents perview and the constant warefare.
    • Still, it would be foolosh to really consider the world a peaceful place where there was still so many agents of chaos and destruction at play. Where another war had begun between the Regalians and the Altalar, it would soon deteriotate into a full scale conflict with both sides coming together to face off against the encroaching Dread Empire that had pushed too far into the land and caused countless stories of suffering. He joined the military conflict once again, this time with the Regalians to ensure he would be in the front of the line and as the war had finished, he had contemplated where life would take him. In the end, travelling to Regalia itself won out in his head. There so much would happen, from willingly sacrificing his life in a ritual to join the draconic forces of the Archbloods out of a need to better protect his loved ones and the world around them against the rising demonic forces that kept knocking at the door without mercy. Service to the nobility as palests and house guard alike to even serving as one of the commanders of the guard force as the Arcanum. He allowed himself to be corrupted for the sake of helping countless innocents, surrendering his body to Pride to corrupt into a void tainted creature in exchange for revealing the clickers and breaking their invisibility in which started a downwards spiral of his well being, mentally and physically. Eventually cured and returned back to a primal state, his mind was still muddled of differing views and differing loyalties, struggling between each and every one and losing them in all the same manner. His sense of self would return however as he rejoins the military lifestyle, serving in the Sendrassian War and in conflicts ahead such as the Vampire Crisis and the first battle of the Invasion of the Void with Ifrit at its center. The ressurgence of the Allorn Empire brought him back to his senses further and revived his loyalties to the empire that he had considered home from the very beginning and has since married Camilla and started a family, having multiple children together and living a happy married life. Most recent of all has been the freedom from the one stiffling affliction that he had come to despise and after searching countless months for a cure, the dragons themselves would finally decide to free all of them. Embracing his second chance at life, free from control at all, he would be content seeing what lies ahead, having loved ones by his side to always keep him focused on what really matters.
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    Aged down to 35 for a continued co-joined backstory with another character. Lowered points in Sword Combat and completely removed Frontline Command but this change wasn't over ten points so shouldn't need a review but tagging just in case. @Birdsfoot_Violet
     
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    Made a few edits that need to be reviewed please:
    • Rewritten Proficiencies.
    • Added Fin'ullen powers.
    • Added the School of Aranartháï.
    • Added one paragraph to the end of the Life Story to explain he was in the Allorn Empire and will most likely eventually return to Regalia at some point. Probably.
    If I'd also be able to get the comments cleared up so this doesn't have two pages please and thank you.
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    Re-Approved, though this is somewhat still a shelved character, and information on the internal workings of the new Allorn Empire are likely to not be forthcoming for some time.
     
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    Updated to new proficiency system. Added in the four Altalar schools across various points to Life Story where there was time to learn. Needing re-review.
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    Updated a few things to keep up to date:
    • Changed gender to Non-Binary.
    • Altered proficiency points.
      • Lowered Swords from 18 to 15.
      • Removed Shielding.
      • Added 10 Perception Training.
      • Added 1 Instrument Art.
      • Added 1 Cooking Art.
      • Added Voluism.
    • Increased height to 7'6".
    Re-Review in order please. @HydraLana
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    Updated to latest version of Archblood. Avaineiral is still Exist-Corrupted however. Shouldn't require a re-review since it's mostly removing the old abilities and replacing with only 2, but tagging in case. @HydraLana
     
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    After a couple weeks of playing to get a feel for the proficiencies again and bouncing ideas off others, I've come to a conclusion that some proficiencies were ill-suited and didn't match the feel of the character or were simply stacked on with over expansion of the character's niche.
    • Removed two Schooling (Admiral and Riding) while keeping both Commands to hammer down on the fact that he is just meant to be a commander and not a captain/admiral.
    • Removed Roguery as climbing while really tall and having 10 strength training would most likely be rather difficult.
    • Removed 10 Perception. Didn't come much into use.
    • Added 9 into Arcanology. This is to show knowledge gained IC over the years playing him and to be reflected on the sheet again while also hammering in the anti-occult aspect of the Archbloods.
    • Added 4 Shielding. Shielding was used in the past.
    • Removed mentions of the two Schoolings lost with this update in the Life Story while adding on one dot point of what he was doing before returning to Regalia and the fact he got married.
    • Following the updated rules of Linguistics, added 6 points into it to unlock Allorn and Suvial which also unlocked Ancient Altalar due to having Altalar as a base language. Allorn supremacy moments.
    Giving the point changes, this does require a re-review please! @HydraLana
     
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    Well, uh, you're going to have to update those Languages again unfortunately. Tag me once you are done @Vegemiite
     
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    The update does include the addition of the latest rules. Common + Altalar (Born in Solleria) for free with 6 points to unlock Allorn (3 Points) and Suvial (3 Points), which unlocks the extra language Ancient Altalar (Unlocked for having all 3 in a category)! @HydraLana
     
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    Re-Approved.
     
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    Avaineiral has been turned to a Void Corrupted Archblood through Coren. Switched Manifest Will for Manifest Rage accordingly and updated eye and skin color. Shouldn't require a re-review. @HydraLana
     
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    Updated to fit the new format. Bye bye long life story.
    • Avaineiral has undergone Dread Rebirthing and has come out a Saivalathar.
    • To clarify for the Sex; they have Flux Shift 6 which allows them to shift at all so it is marked as 'Varies' to show this.
    • The two chosen racial powers from the Ability Pool that Kathar have access to are; Emotion Sense 1 and Flux Shift 6. All other racial abilities are from normal Saivalathar.
    • Points entirely updated. I didn't want to focus on combat any more and have only left a small trace of it in as a nod back to when he was Fin'ullen and all the wars he has been part of. The character is now a scholar/diplomat which I plan to keep.
    • Physical Stat calculation for the record since it didn't seem necessary to add to the sheet on the template examples. 4 Glaive + 5 Bodycare + 5 Sailing - 5 Voluism = 9.
    • Altalar and Common are the free languages. Every other language is gained through investment into Linguistics with Ancient Altalar and Samhal being unlocked through investment into the respective languages.
    • Depending on the Arcanology update, there is a possibility I may remove 5 points from Bodycare and 1 point from Glaive to invest into two more packs. But that is entirely dependant on the contents of the update once it is released.
    Requiring re-review. @HydraLana
     
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    Reapproved.
     
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    updated. retconned kathar stuff since it was dumb and brought him back to original concept cause it was better. aesthetics will probably be updated later. maybe
     
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    lil update before i get to playing him
    • removed 1 strength with unarmed
    • removed 1 charisma with pet husbandry
    • added 1 dexterity with brittle shot
    • added 1 magic with light magic
    • changed magic dimension to exist

    need re-review @Caelamus
     
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    Scooping this up. Approved.
     
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    awoooooo
    • it is cahal time
    • 4 commutable points are spent on wind, storm, cosmic, shadow. all of these are magic packs
    • cahal form added. werewolf grrrrr
    need review @Scribbe
     
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    Oh gawd
     
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    Approved.
     
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    changed shadow magic from commutable points to space magic. i dont know if this needs rereview but just in case i tag!
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    i wanted to have a different way to fight so i edited some stuff and there were also some changes lore wise to packs too obvs
    • Short Blade replaced for Flexible
    • Lunassul replaced for Amontaar (Same thing just different name now)
    • Brittle Shot removed to put Dexterity at 0
    • Removed Light and Sensor (These went to Commutable Points) from Magic, replaced with Water and Wind
    • Added Sand to Magic to put it at 3
    • Removed Wind (This went to Magic) and Storm from Commutable Points, replaced with Light and Sensor
    needs re-review pls @Caelamus
     
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