Augusta Of Galloy

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    Basic Information (Required)​

    • Full Name: Augusta of Galloy

    • Age: 28

    • Gender: Female

    • Race: Ailor

    • Main Ambition: No true ambitions besides serving the Howlester, and Unionism.
    Basic Information (Expansion)​
    • After finishing her training, she immediately began her journey to Regalia in order to serve the Noble House Howlester, the same house which funded her schooling. She intends to stay as long as needed, unless told otherwise.

    • Born of a Gallovian scrivener and a blacksmith, she was employed by the Howlester family as a squire. Due to the young age in which she was employed, she looked up to the head of the Howlesters, William Howlester, for guidance.

    • Whilst never being a typically romantic, the temptation of having a family of her own has always lingered in the back of her mind.

    Skill Information (Required)

    Proficiency points: 23​

    • +30 Greatswords (+ 20 School of Feer-Drakken +10 Free points))
    • +18 Battle command (+ 15 School of Feer-Drakken +3 Free Points)
    Culture points: 23​
    • +20 Smithing
    • +8 bodycare
    Languages​

    • Common- Fluent/(Not fully literate.)

      Alt-Regalisch- Fluent (Taught by Mother)
    Visual Information (Required)​

    • Eye Color: Deep greyish blue.

    • Hair Color: Medium brown

    • Hair Style: Very short. Usually slicked back.

    • Skin Color: Light, somewhat tan.

    • Clothing: Can generally be spotted wearing a heavy tunic, with chainmail beneath, and sturdy boots.

    • Height: 6'

    • Body Build: Muscular

    • Weapon of Choice: Greatsword
    Visual Information (Expansion)
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    • Her face is somewhat feminine, but with very sharp cheekbones, a strong nose. Her lips are naturally downturned, causing her to unintentionally sneer at times. Her eyebrows are unkempt and her left eyebrow is crossed with a small scar. She tries to hold an intimidating appearance, and it can often be pulled off with just a natural expression. Her eyes are hooded, and therefore make it look as if she is glaring.

    • She is a somewhat tall, and muscular woman. Her body fit and dashed with scars from years of intense training. She is dotted with freckles throughout her body. Her body hair is sparse, but light brown. She has visible female features, as well as hips, but they are violin shaped, but they are not as wide as her shoulders. Her hair is often kept short to avoid it getting in the way during battle. As soon as her hair even grazes her shoulders, she chops it all off.

    • She never really developed a sense of fashion, too busy within her studies and training to indulge. She is built to wear heavy armor, and wield bulky armaments, however, she is usually made to wear lighter armor. She enjoys heavier materials, and prefers her body to seem as manly as possible.

    • A natural, somewhat feminine tone. She often speaks to people in a serious voice, but she enjoys the occasional laugh as long as it’s warranted.
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    Personality and Abilities (Required)​


    • First Paragraph: Seen as a noble and temperate young woman, mature and prudent. Her attitude around others is commonly laid back but modest, and quiet. Around the family she guards, she tends to be very uptight and alert, of everything and everyone. Her calm demeanor has a certain charm to it, making her easy to get along with most of the time. She is good at cracking jokes and making others laugh. As long as you aren't trying to harm, annoy, or frustrate those whom she is guarding that day, expect her to be at the very least, pleasant to be around.

    • Second Paragraph: The biggest insecurity of Augusta is her face. While she never intended upon being beautiful, she often finds her face to scare men away, or find her intimidating. This is good in battle, but sometimes it makes her feel lonely, as very few have shown interest in her. She loves her scars, as she believes they are a sign of strength, but her strong features, such as her jaw, cheekbones, and browbones. She is in no way vain, but still hopes she can find someone even if her features aren't in any way conventionally attractive.

    • Third Paragraph: House Howlester, being the only “family” she could remember well, would be considered everything to her. She retains a serious, platonic relationship with the household, but deep inside, she feels very close to them. Even as a child, Augusta grew close to William, he reminded her a lot of her father, being strong without carelessness. In a lot of ways, during her schooling, she tried her absolute hardest at all times. She wants to come back and make him proud, and that would be good enough for her.

    • Fourth Paragraph: Augusta has decent morals, respect others, and serve the Empire. Color of skin rarely matters to her, as she usually focuses on how they treat others. She is a very strong worshipper of Unionism, and believes that all other religions are pure evil, besides a secret fascination with the Old God's faith. She seeks to help the less fortunate, and serve the more. Regals, and currency has never been a true necessity to her. She is provided with it, but rarely splurges, often giving all extra coin to Beggars.

    Personality and Abilities (Expansion)​

    • Augusta has a habit of gripping the handle of her sword for no real reason. This can put others on edge, but in honesty she probably isn’t thinking about it when it happens most of the time.
    Life Story (Required)​


    As a small child, Augusta lived within the confines of a small cottage within Gallovia. Her mother, a Scrivener for a man of higher wealth, and her father a brazened blacksmith. Augusta naturally learned common, and her father taught her Alt-Regalisch at a young age. But, she was not literate. This will affect her to this day, as she still seems to have the handwriting of a toddler, and most of her words are very misspelled. She lived a fairly plain commoner’s life. At the age of seven, her father was sent to war, and died shortly after. This caused her Mother to have to work more than usual, but to little avail. The stress even got to young Augusta, who began to try and find a job to help her mother.

    The family was left with little remaining money. In order to give Augusta the proper life, her mother gave her to House Howlester in hopes that she could become something greater. As her time being a squire, she often felt lonely, even if she was constantly surrounded by people. She couldn't quite make friends as she was always on duty, but the true pain was with missing her parents. So, eventually, she began to look up to William. Everything she did was to try and impress him, to get his approval. This would also come into play later.

    As a young squire, she often worked with the Howlester's horses. Nailing on horseshoes, or treating wounds of the steeds, and often making sure they were well-kept and healthy. She also was rather good at treating for other animals of the household, or random injured mice she would find in the shed. Augusta later began to work with the shields and swords that were broken from dueling or small battles. Some would say, she even got it from her father. While she was no top blacksmith, like him, she was good at patching up broken swords and shields.

    One day, many years later, she was approached by the head of the house, William Howlester. He proposed to her the option of becoming a great knight, at the price of serving his family until her death. She was so honored, that she accepted without much thought, yet she still agrees with the decision she made to this day.

    After long consideration within the household, the possibilities were all so great. In the end, the chosen school was that of Magnamere in Anglia. The school of Feer-Drakken was a bit overwhelming upon her first arrival. She found training to be more than difficult, and taxing on her body. She pushed through it all, however. Building lasting bonds with strong men and women of other races and cultures. At the school as she trained to become a worthy homage to the feathered dragons and their strength, but ultimately, her true goal was to become a worthy guard of the Howlester.

    Augusta had lived within Gallovia at the earliest years of her life, and then Anglia until recently. She now lives within the Howlester Castle, and frequents Regalia as a means of entertainment when she is not guarding them, or training.

    Augusta, after having lost her ways, chose to return to Feer-Drakken to revise her training and re-learn what morals she was taught there. She has since returned to Regalia to rejoin her employers.

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    • Talents should be beneath personality and abilities, please rectify this.
    • The first, second and third paragraphs of your personality are too short. Please expand on these by two sentences each.
    • I do not feel that Zeal or Bulwark are suitable talents. Please remove them both and add a talent covering her skill as a Jeannarc dame.
    • There should be more substance to the life story. Elaborate on the period of her squiring under House Howlester and also her training at Jeannarc Castle.

    Mark your edits in red and tag me when you have made the appropriate changes. @VanCeryneia
     
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    • Leadership as a talent is not permissible as it would fall under the Schools of Leadership or Bannership. If you want to effectively lead, you will need training in either.
    • It takes fifteen years to learn Alt-Regalian, ten for D'Ithanie and ten for Hemmelig. You cannot have all of these languages with your character's current age.
    Mark your edits in red and tag me when you have made the appropriate changes. @VanCeryneia
     
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    @AptlyRatley Are talents mandatory? I wish it were more simple to just pick a talent and go off it but.
     
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    As a Jeannarc knight, her weapon of choice should be a longsword. @VanCeryneia
     
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    Approved. Be aware that when the skill rework launches you will have to overhaul your application. Jeannarc will no longer exist as a school, though Bloodcast will be made open to females.
     
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    @AptlyRatley Since making this character, about a week ago, I've slowly settled into her. My whole concept of her was completely shattered when the rewrite took away the School of Jeannearc. A lot of people went to Bloodcaste, but after careful consideration I've found that it simply does not suit her. I've taken the time to rewrite her as a Feer-Drakken, and all changes are in Purple. Sorry I've been changing her around so much, but I just needed to get a feel, especially after the proficiency and school rewrite stuff.
     
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    Re-approved.
     
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    hmm, im a bit airheady. keep forgetting, but i messed around with her height and profs. please re-approve. @Bagley_
     
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    @Bagley_ I need the tag put back on. The prof points have been updated, as well as a small bit on where she has been /art change/ theme change
     
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