Basic Information Full Name: Audric Thomas Kraus Age: 41 Gender: Male Race: New Regalian Ailor Sexuality: Heterosexual Preferred Weapon: Sabre Skill InformationTotal Points: 42 (37 Age + 5) +20 Command Tactic Skill (Increased due to New-Regalian) + 18 Cavalry Combat Skill (+19 from Total Points) +4 Thin Blade Combat Skill (From Points) +10 Theatre Arts (+10 Hobby Points) Body Shape 17 Front Line Combat + 19 Cavalry Combat + ( 0 Athletic Training x 2) = 36 Physical Stat Body Shape: Ripped Body Fat: Extreme Low Body Fat Languages Alt-Regalisch (Learned from childhood) Common (Learned from childhood) Visual Information Eye Color: Dark Blue Hair Color: Dark Brown Hair Style: Swept back Skin Color: A very light tan, almost like a pinkish tan Clothing: Layered clothing; a white undershirt covered by a silver vest and a black jacket. He appears to be wearing dark gray slacks and black boots. Height: 5’11” Personality and Abilities Alignment Lawful Neutral Personality Type The Commander Religion Unionism Life Story Birth January 4th 268 AC was a very rushed day for the Kraus family as they had their third child, a son whom they named Audric Kraus. His father was running around cleaning up the house as Emilia lay upstairs in her bed. Eventually as she began to go into labor. She began to call for her husband Gerhard , screaming at him to come. As he came dashing up the stairs, he came to comfort his wife. Audric was then born. The Kraus family was a wealthy family located Calemberg, the family had been in the masonry business for generations and Gerhard as no different. He took up the family business as soon as he was able, learning the tricks and ins and outs of the trade. Youth From an early age, the Ailor boy had hopes of joining the Regalian army. Hearing stories from sailors and old-timers in the city that he grew up in as a child. When he reached the age of 10, his father had decided to put Audric through the School of Drixon, in order to learn the art of Cavalry. This would become the first real experience that the boy would have with any military training. Over his years there he became attached to the horse he’d been assigned during his training. He spent all of his time around the creature during his free time, often finding himself taking more comfort being around the horse than people. This caused him to behave in a cold manner towards strangers when he first meets them. By the end of his schooling, Audric would be the age of twenty-two and would now be entering his adulthood. Adulthood After his schooling, Audric moved to Regalia and enlisted himself in the Regalian army as a field officer. He served four years as a scout on horseback, and as a field officer for the troops in which he served with. When the Ailor turned twenty-six, he was chosen to join the school of command, in which he would serve the next eleven years of his adulthood studying, training, and leading soldiers. After his last commission, he returned to a life back in the capital. Recent After his last commission as a field officer, Audric moved back to Regalia by himself. He has since taken a liking to the city, and went back home to gather his family. He convinced his family to move to the city with him. During his time in Regalia, Audric has gained numerous military titles, along with joining the Violet Order, however after being demoted from his rank of Captain in the Order, he ended up resigning from the City Guard, turning to focus on his military career more intently. As of now, Audric works closely under the Field Marshal Dietrich von Drachenburg as his Cabinet Adviser, his Cavalry Commander, and just recently, has gained the rank of Master of Horses within his personal retinue.
Alright let's get cracking. @BananaForSale Personality and Abilities: Address in your third body paragraph how he might feel about family members or friends who don't come up to par with social standards on a regular basis, or fall from public grace. As a school of Drixon member, his horse is supposed to be his life long companion. Mention his relationship with his horse in your third body paragraph.
Added “If his family decides to break thsee high standards, he will get very frustrated and threaten to disown them. He takesHow his family acts very seriously.” “As a member of the School of Drixon, Audric spent a lot of time with his horse, so much that while he was in school, Audric would study and train in the presence of his horse. Due to this, the sailor sees horses as a mans best friend rather than dogs.”
@Caelamus My approved tag went missing. I’m currently updating the app and when it’s up to date I’ll set it to need re-review, but can you put its tag back?
Here is your review. You spent 44 points but your character is only 39 years old. The body stat is broken because of the above issue. Amend to the points and the body stat calculation. Make the changes in red and tag me when done
I changed the body stat to the correct points, as for the total points, I added the equation to explain that the +15 is included in the total points. https://forums.massivecraft.com/thr...t-boost-physical-stat-cap-combat-dices.77422/