Rejected Sheet Audrey D'ortonnaise

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    Adrienne d'Ortonnaise

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    Basic Information (Required)

    Full Name: Adrienne (Audrey) Marianne Renabeille Obraive Solaire d'Ortonnaise au Courteaux
    Age: 31
    Gender: Female
    Race: Ithanian Ailor
    Main Ambition: Fame & Political Power


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    Skill Information (Required)
    • Total of 31 proficiency points.
    • Skill proficiency:
      • +10 Statesman Knowledge (+20 from Points)
      • +10 Thin Blades (+10 from Points)
      • +6 Marshal Knowledge ( +6 from Points)
      • +5 Perception (+5 from Points)
      • +10 Bodycare (+10 from Cultural boost)
    • Languages spoken:
      • d'Ithanie (native)
      • Dressolini (native)
      • Imperial Standard Common (common)

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    Visual Information (Required)

    Eye Color: Forest Green
    Hair Color: Ginger, usually dyed ruby-red
    Hair Style: Styled in long waves or medium curls
    Skin Color: Aristocratic pale
    Clothing: A wardrobe of gowns from almost all Archipelago fashion tastes dyed Tyrian purple or pastel colours.
    Height: 5’6”
    Body Build: Curvaceous
    Weapon of Choice: An elaborately decorated, thin-bladed rapier that she carries on her side, next to a smaller but deadlier Ithanian dagger. When pressed into formation in uniform, she's usually seen with the untrained soldier's spear.


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    Visual Information (Expansion)


    Face

    Adrienne has a slightly angular face, with wider-than-average eyes. Her nose is short and perhaps a bit bigger than it should be (something she doesn’t like much). Her lips are often found curled in a thin smile, though only showing her teeth in a grin. Audrey carries a golden ring in both her right brow and the left side of her lower lip.

    Hair

    She colours her hair actively: born a natural redhead, Adrienne regularly applies dyes to darken and enhance the colour while also oiling her hair for a metallic gloss. It's rare to find her in her natural colour in Regalia. She prefers a darker shade of red for usual wear, though isn't afraid to sometimes go for purple, magenta or pastel colours.

    Her hair, when not performing or in public, tends to hang loose or remain tied up in a braid or pony-tail. When dressed proper, she uses a pair of hot tongs to twist the locks into hanging waves that reach below her scapulas, or curls that frame her head and dip right to her shoulders.

    Make-up

    Her face often carries make-up, enough to cover her freckles and to enlarge her eyes for the perceiver though within the bounds of refined taste. She uses Pureza’s Powder to keep unnaturally whitened teeth, though also to purge the stench of opium, tobacco or alcohol that would radiate from it too. The most defining feature people usually notice about her is the purple eye-shadows framing her eyes. Accompanying this is her usual bright-red lipstick leaving marks on everything her lips touch.

    Body

    Audrey keeps a curvaceous body shape through wearing corsets and maintaining a ridiculous diet of almost solely fish and vegetables (and the occasional mayonnaise). The woman weighs a healthy 130 pounds and also maintains some small amounts of muscles from regular swimming exercises. Overall, her body can be described as something thriving to achieve Ithanian ideals.

    Skin

    Her skin is pale and plastered with some freckles. Some may remark a sickly pale complexion, though it's merely Ithanian expectation and fashion in defiance to the perceived "low class" tan peasant tend to have. Audrey has a fair amount of scars littered around her body, most notably a set of dueling scars along her right forearm and a scarred cut across her left hip.

    Misc

    She has thin, ginger body hair around her body though trimmed where visible (intentionally no mention of the parts envisioned by the less ruly readers) and otherwise kept clean. Audrey keeps her nails polished in various colours, usually to suit her clothes.

    Voice

    Adrienne's a contralto, with a deeper-than average voice. In everyday conversation, she carries a faint Ithanian accent in an overly calm speech maintaining a strict speed and diction. She tends to keep her voice down and speak articulated, organised and without pause.


    Voice Claim: Debbie Harry

    Armour claim: WoW transmog assembled by yours truly


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    Personality and Abilities (Required)


    Perception by others: Adrienne is mostly perceived as an outgoing and extroverted person. She shows a face of adventurous curiosity to the outside, though both her academic training and background in acting reveal a more cautious, calculated persona. To a stranger that is recently meeting her, she seems energetic, curious and ever-optimistic. This may be marginally different to Nelfin and Varran, who will meet a zealous and prejudiced woman dedicated to put a slave collar on them.

    Perception by self: Audrey's self-perception is riddled with some confusion, though it does not lack confidence. Her main concern is a lack of belonging, though in the strict sense she belongs exactly where she is: to Regalia. Bearing the cultural heritages and traditions of the numerous cultures and the sub-cultures may often seem confusing to both others and herself. She is self-conscious about her intelligence and talents, though also prefers a humble approach towards each.

    Actions towards friends & family: To family and friends (as well as benefactors and supporters) Audrey acts with dedication and loyalty perhaps unusual in the world. She does not act much different around them, though holds a strict lift-me-lift-you attitude where she seems to find the most beneficial ways to live and co-exist. To strangers, she may seem distrustful or avoiding.

    Character's morality: Audrey's alignment is neutral good. In matters of military and organization, she leans towards the lawful-good Dressolini ancestry, whereas in matters of social and political questions she prefers a more lax and progressive approach similar to her Homeland's. In terms of rebelliousness, Adrienne can be defined as "docile" towards nobility and men, and "content" with the Empire's politics. She is an avid supported of slavery within the Empire, holding herself word-by-word to the teachings of the 3rd creed.

    Character's worldviews: Audrey followed the Sancella faith in a somewhat-relaxed and very pragmatic way, though converted to Priscelle Unionism in early 306AC. She considers acts to be of far more importance than words and tends to try and show this herself. She perceives the Priscelle sect as a simple manifestation of the Priscilla Themai and would gladly see the Sancella open up negotiations with the Revered Princess for adaptations and re-union between the churches. Of the Empire itself, Audrey prefers a neo-conservative Ithanian view seeking the militarisation of her homeland in the wake of the 303AC crisis, though in general she would also prefer less jingoistic external politics and more attention dedicated to internal development. Audrey is an Ithanian nationalist and supremacist.

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    Weaknesses

    Addiction(s)

    Living the life of an artist, Audrey has been on-and-off the opium addiction since as early as her teenage years. During the diplomatic tenure in Calemberg she exchanged most of her opium intake to binge-drinking as well. She can be clumsy if she has not had her drink for a while and tends to go to disturbing lengths in order to obtain various drugs and enhancements that exist in Regalia. The easiest way to gain her trust and loyalty is to provide that one exotic fix.

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    Personality and Abilities (Expansion)

    Quirks

    Audrey's main quirk is a theatrical way of communication. She uses numerous gestures and hand motions and tends to accentuate her words with movements as well. Some other quirks are always crossing her legs when sitting and to generally gravitate towards the centre of rooms & spaces.

    Minor Skills

    Singing
    Though not the most talented, Audrey sang in some roles over her short acting career. She is a contralto of above-than-average but below-excellent quality, though lacking any formal training.

    Painting & Calligraphy
    Adrienne started her performing career helping the design of backdrops and costumes. She is talented with a brush, though she never made it further than that. According to her Ithanian painter peers, her works "lack substance", "are mediocre" and "belong on a restaurant's walls". Never the less, she is fairly good with Calligraphy as well and has a beautiful handwriting.

    Writing
    Next to acting, Audrey regularly adopts and writes plays as well. Her writing is critically acclaimed though it has never been the main beacon of her fame. It is rumoured that many proclamations and announcements in the court of Castellajoux were ghost-written by her at the demand of her superiors.

    Swimming
    Her preferred method of keeping herself fit and her muscles toned is regular swimming, be it in a pool or the sea. Audrey can be counted as a surprisingly good swimmer.

    Likes

    Necklaces & Chokers
    Adrienne always wears something around her neck and has a soft heart for medallions, amulets and necklaces as well as silken chokers.

    Clothes with tight collars
    She has a preference for Ithanian clothes with high collars that divide emphasis between her face and cleavage when in a court dress, covering her neck.

    Diving & Swimming Underwater
    Though she doesn't quite have the endurance much, Audrey still loves underwater diving and swimming. A favourite hobby of hers is bare-breath diving for clams on the Ithanian coasts.

    A firm hand
    Perhaps it's her fencer background, perhaps a more insidious meaning, though the first thing Adrienne aims to find out about a man is their grip. She believes one's grip can tell a lot about one's personality, class, background and devotion.

    Pickled Fish
    Audrey is in a strange love with pickled fish. These pieces of raw seafood floating in vinegar, onion and sugar sauce can bring her mood to a better light any time of the day. It's a frequent event within the d'Ortonnaise estate for a servant to take her anger as a clue to bring a platter of the dish. She especially likes it coated in mayonnaise.

    Dislikes

    Mixing of drinks
    Perhaps it's because she doesn't quite handle alcohol well, but Audrey heavily dislikes any mixed drink, be it watered wine or a cocktail.

    Baseless Pride
    The only thing that can trigger and turn Adrienne against her friends or beloved almost instantaneously is prideful behaviour, especially if there is nothing tangible behind it.

    Varran, Nelfin, Lampar & Qadir
    Audrey's outright racist towards most non-human or non-human-looking races. If possible and when in private, she tends to express her views with passion. In public, however, her tendencies are often simply limited to obvious displays of discomfort and hostility. She is outright hateful towards Varran, dislikes Lampar and Qadir and prefers any Nelfin with a slave collar around the neck (and also maintains a household of Cielothar and Varran slaves herself). She is surprisingly open to orcs and Allar, though. The former because of their hostility towards the elves and some persona preferences, the latter due to the woman's simple adoration of Mu Allar and their feathers.

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    Life Story (Required)


    Childhood:
    • Audrey was born in 275 AC to Ithanian nobility in Hivre Castellajoux.
    • Her mother, Ethanie d'Ortonnaise, is still alive and resides in Courteaux to govern the family lands.
    • Her father, Battista d'Ortonnaise, fell in the Battle of Curag Field in 303 AC and had been a prominent Dressolini field commander of cavalry.
    • She has two sisters, Camille and Caleana, as well as a brother.
    • Audrey spent her early childhood in Castellajoux, in luxury and pomp, with little to be spared from her.
    • From the age of four, she was educated by private tutours in Ithania, with focus on literacy, arithmetics and etiquette.
    Teenage & Early Adult Years:
    • At the age of eleven, she entered a college for performing artists and began her studies of acting & play-writing.
    • She first appeared only as a simple painter of backdrops and designers, though was soon given background roles in major performances as an extra.
    • At the age of 16, her acting career was interrupted by the appearance of a sudden opportunity. Through connections in the court of Hivre Castellajoux and her shown merit, Audrey was offered patronage towards studying diplomacy in the Hivre courts.
    • During her studies, she travelled to Calemberg and was swallowed up by the New-Regalian culture within a fortnight, life turned upside-down and the Ithanian woman subjected to the far more militaristic, strict and patriarchal culture present. This left a permanent mark on her.
    • She completed her Sacrament of Entry in Calemberg, and spent most of her diplomatic studies in a limbo between Calemberg and Ithania, quenching flames and fires that remained after the Ithanian pessimism and the Chrysant war.
    Tenure in the Castellajoux Royal Guard:
    • In 295AC, she travelled to Regalia and began her further studies under the Grenwald academy to truly mould herself into an Ithanian politician.
    • Parallel to this, she jumped back to her acting career and began appearing in some fairly decent supporting and main roles to further her artistic pursuits within Regalia and the Ithanian homeland.
    • After two years of studies in Regalia, Audrey was appointed to be Char-Martel of the Castellajoux court, assuming the position of a semi-spymaster in charge of preventing and organising espionage and joining the Princess' royal guard, continuing her studies "on the field".
    • She formally graduated from the academy in 301AC, after six years of studies shared between the academy and a relevant position in the Hivre court. She returned to Ithania and entered service full-time.
    • After the publishing of the 11th creed in 303AC, Audrey participated as an officer and aide in the spontaneously-established Ithanian defence force and participated in the war against the Daendroquean intrusion into southern-Ithania. She finished the war in the position of a reconnaissance officer when the crisis ended an the volunteer-army was disbanded. She also participated in most peace talks that re-established relations between the southern states and Ithania in Daen's Regalian-controlled northern half.
    • She returned to service as Chart-Martel and Royal Guard in Hivre Castellajoux. Though with the advent of the Ithanian Austerity and the Militarisation Movement, she engaged in political disputes that had her lose favour in the court and started flirting with the idea of entering court in Regalia proper.
    • Despite these, she took a last role in the Ithanian Home Defense during the Bone Horror Crisis and returned to her role as a commissioned officer serving the Grand Sovereign and the Princess of Castellajoux against the undead incursion.
    Move to the Regalian Archipelago & Becoming a Matriarch:
    • After the crisis itself, Audrey left Ithania to live in Loiree and manage her family lands there, her mother willingly giving up both the title of Matriarch and Baroness to retire into peaceful living in a Castellajoux chateau.
    • With some reforms in place, Audrey was quick to establish a court of her own and re-gather the allies and supporters of her father under her banner, including her uncles and some old family friends. In 305AC, the woman moved permanently to Regalia with hopes of breaching Crown City politics and lifting her family from obscurity into relevance.
    • Within the Holy City, Audrey found herself re-employed as reconnaissance general under commission of the consuls Ruyter and Krupp to conduct scouting and counter-intelligence on the front, to which she re-organised her 1st Reconnaissance.
    • In late November, 305AC, her uncle was raised into the rank of High Exarch of the Sancella, which reinvigorated her passion to handle the status quo around Ithania, Priscelle Unionism and homeland militarisation.
    • In the December of 305AC, Audrey was admitted into the Sancella as a Holy Dame in service.
    • Later the same month, she was appointed Principal Secretary of the Black Hand. She re-organised the service and dove straight into in-court counter-espionage.
    • In January 306AC, Audrey was appointed as one of five members in the Emperor's new Privy Council in order to form a new government. The same body made her State Minister charged with handling foreign diplomacy for the Regalian Empire.
    • Audrey was attacked by Hengest Harhold with a pack of dogs in March, 306AC. The attack left her clinically dead, only "saved" by the Alchimia order, from which she descended onto the way of turning into a witchblood the following month.

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    @Rochelle_

    I was suggested to condense the life story into bullet points and to mark the paragraphs at the personality. I did those changes, hope it's not much of an issue. Now there's five bullet points instead of all the paragraphs.
     
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    Just a little nitpick from me since I think its a great application all in all: Did you mean to say that it is an Ithanian styled Spadi, as a Spadi is Dressolini in origin.
     
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    https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Leutz_Épée

    "The Dressolini will typically refer to it as an Ithani Spadi, ..."

    Thought it'd be fitting for someone between the two cultures.
     
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    Review time!
    • Warrior level griffer is not a special permission and should be removed.
    • It's easier for us if you could list the ithanian spadi as a dressolini spadi in your application, as that is its most common name.
    • You need to list the years attended, entry age, graduate age and possibly some details about her schooling in griffer for the life story.
    • Overall, I would like to see a little more in her life story. Why exactly she became a griffer, what is she doing now.
    • Condense your griffer talents into one single talent.
    Make these changes in a different color and tag me once done!
     
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    Thank you for the review!

    All changes done, coloured magenta.
    - Removed special permission thingy
    - Listed the weapon as its wiki-page name with a link
    - Expanded information on schooling into a paragraph
    - Expanded life story to three times what it was
    - Condensed griffer guile & grace into one talent

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    And with that, updated the sheet with the optimal parts & some extensions, as well as art and music.
     
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    Updated some parts of the application, including a clarification-added school of acting since I saw other artist characters noting an intellectual school as well.

    All changes since the last review are highlighted in purple, whereas the extensions have been hidden proper.

    @Staff Roleplay @Rochelle_
     
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    Re-Approved!
     
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    @Rochelle_ Re-formatted to original, needs a tag.
     
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    @Rochelle_

    Saw your clarification on the non-wiki intellect schools and removed the school of acting from the skills section.

    While reading up on the intellect schools, though, I also noticed Audrey quite literally and perfectly fits bannership (both her backstory already written and her current role in the Regalian Army), something I completely ignored and overlooked so far.

    I added that on student level, as well as the relevant officer command disciple from the leadership page.

    I did not find any tangible guide to the levels of bannership, and there has only ever been three characters with it, so I used some "logic":

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    Figured since a bannership-school character can't be expert, and since expert leadership requires the same amount of time defined as bannership, then it'll take the same amount of time to reach student in bannership as it does to reach learned in leadership.
     
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    Bannership is Scholar level strictly with 20 years. There is no breaking down as the school is quite literally combat experience. That being said Audrey is too young to have Bannership.
     
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    What's the point of pre-scholar and pre-warrior levels if 70% the schools demand the character absent while ascending from those levels, and 20% the schools don't even have those levels?
     
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    Bannership isn't a traditional school. It is comparable to Leadership at Scholar level at a fixed learn time of 20 years. It allows you to act as a military level of Commander when commissioned. For example, a Viridian Knight graduates at 22 years roughly. At the age of 42 they could in theory be trained in Bannership. Unless I am misunderstanding your question then perhaps directing this to PM would be more beneficial.
     
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    Will do. I'll cut the bannership from the app for the while.
     
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    Well I'll just throw your Approved tag back up, thank you for the correction.
     
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    @Rochelle_ Big-big update on a lot of things. Highlighted everything in magenta. I refrained from spoilering some of the extensions, since I made quite a few changes there as well.

    Basically:

    - Added Husbandry/Cavalry since I only recently learned it's an actual thing that has to be added
    - Toned down on the "actress / songstress" parts of her character & backstory since it has had very little RP value
    - Increased emphasis on Audrey's past in the Ithanian paramilitary during past crises and the Royal Guard since it's been a focal point of roleplaying her
    - Updated backstory with now-approved nobility and related information, as well as extended family
    - Updated talents with actual talents and not personality-related strengths, talents that I have been roleplaying proper that weren't actually on her page previously.
    - Generally updated looks / personality with shoe polish.
     
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    (Holy smokes this is a pretty app,) Approved!
     
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    @Rochelle_ Impromptu update due to the release of intellect schools & discussion with lore staff.

    - Culled Audrey's combat side / aspect
    - Re-focused on her espionage and diplomacy side
    - Aged her to 30 proper, probably fixing it for the good while
    - Removed griffer & equestrian schools,
    - Added subterfuge & diplomacy school
    - Character background was corrected to reflect this. Though no major changes were needed. Technically, I played Audrey with having experience in subterfuge before.
    - Added some less-important details
     
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    With the source in her skills section, none of these are mentioned in the life story and seem more befitting to a combat school. Could you clarify this some for me?
     
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    Pah, apologies. Forgot to even edit those parts, though I already added it to her life-story. Should be alright now.
     
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    Perfect, Approved!
     
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    @Rochelle_ Fixed colours in text and added her full name under pressure from d'Ortonnaise chat. Need a re-tag.
     
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    @Rochelle_ Updated the page here and there to keep it recent. Only major change is the added languages section.
     
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    Review time!
    • Remove the special permission
    • Remove talents
     
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    Done and done. @Rochelle_
     
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    Approved!
     
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    @Rochelle_

    Updated with witchblood status now that the transformation has been complete, along with a point of explanation for it at the very end of the life story.
     
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    @Rochelle_ Boopity boop. Don't want to do anything more than the initial transformation until the app's approved proper.
     
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    @Rochelle_ Updated with the new proficiency system.
     
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    Approved.

    Main Ambition, Body Type and Weapon of Choice from the old system is no longer necessary to be part of an application.
     
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  38. Altalar

    Altalar has Rabies

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    Doomsday draws near.
     
  39. Reaganism

    Reaganism 40th President of the United States

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    @Suicidium

    Updated.

    Aged her a year because it's been a bloody year.

    Re-distributed 10 points from statesman to marshal & perception because I prefer pre-BH Audrey over post-BH Audrey. Returned her life story to Griffer / royal guard as it used to be.

    Also ditched witchbloodism b/c it made the character unplayable.
     
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    #39 Reaganism, Jan 7, 2019
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  40. Eccetra

    Eccetra Rat Mumther

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