Preserved Sheet Atticus Faulkner

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That indeed there was. I believe the overhaul has been sticky-threaded on the application page! It's more of a new skill system ;p
 
My Review:
  • Kalmarra as a culture does not exist anymore, Velheim(er) is the collective Northern culture that now exists and can be read about here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Velheim
  • Sadly, you have not figured out Proficiency points. The only major issue at this time is that you have a Cultural Proficiency in the normal Proficiencies section. Specifically, Instrumental Music. See here for a list of the Cultural Proficiencies: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Culture_Points The full list is also on the Cultural Proficiencies page itself: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Cultural
  • I also ask that you follow the format of the example character application as well as others with the parenthesis and +[number].
  • Languages don't need the aesthetics or the rating you've given them since now we employ a flat "Every ten years, 1 language and Common is free" but that is overall up to you to choose if you so wish.
  • Talents are no longer a part of the character application template, please remove this section.
Please tag me once the edits have been made in green @Jovee
 
I need to update his relationships. /Bad/.

Workin on getting this boy lore-compliant again! A few more tweaks with the life story should do it. <:
 
@HydraLana
Sorry! I don't seem to be getting notifications for this bad boy.

I think I've managed rehauling this app. <: Thanks for stopping in!
 
Re-Approved.
 
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