Asïroch

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    Character Information
    • Full Name - Asïroch ket Rabath Mut'rajohiirn Dar-Kedos Raz-Rävakar
    • Race - Cult of Power Kathar
    • Age - Nineteen, November 2nd 290 AC
    • Sex - Male
    • Sexuality - anything feminine
    • Eye Color - Gold with dark scleras
    Core Concept
    • The tribe Asïroch belonged to worshiped a mix of Abbaghellon and Pride, as well as a mix of animal and soul worship. They went to great lengths to mutate themselves to appear more beast-like and ravenous and he experienced the extreme lengths they went to to achieve maximum brutality. The tribesmen were fanatical in their worship, and Asïroch was no different. But after losing his sense of purpose and leaving the tribe, he stopped actively worshiping. He still believes everything he was raised with, but he’s nowhere near as zealous about it as he was in his younger days.
    • Asïroch is an ex warlord-to-be doing his best to get by with what little skills he possesses outside of combat. He’s inherently violent, but recently has done his best not to be. His heavy use of drugs and the extreme conditions he experienced with his tribe as a child and teen has left him with a wavering grip on reality. But despite his appearance and past, and everything that’s expected of a Kathar of his Cult, he’s a quiet and relatively polite man that just wants to make a life for himself, in any way he can.
    Proficiency Information
    • +20 Fist Combat - Base Points (15 points, 5 Racial Boost)
    • +10 Strength Training - Base Points
    • +10 Sword Combat - Base Points
    • + 5 Perception Training - Base Points
    • +4 Light Ranged Combat - Magic Dagger
    • +3 Rougery - Base Points
    • +1 Sailing Art - Base Points
    • +5 Hunting Art - Hobby Points
    • +5 Instrument Art - Hobby Points

    • 6 Points free for language learning
    • 35 Physical Stat
    Ability Information
    • Strength Training -
      • Great Force 1
      • Gate Smash 1
    • Roguery -
      • Wall Climb 3
    • Kathar Racials -
      • 6 Abilities
    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Katharic (Parent)
    Appearance Information
    • Asïroch’s body is covered in scars, some intentional for religious purposes that appear like scales almost, but others mostly from general combat. He has large grotesque hands and long ape-like arms covered in fur that reaches all the way up to his shoulders. His eyes are a reflective gold and his pupils are slitted. He has a scar going through each eye, another intentional body modification made to him when he was a child, and golden tattoo ink lining his eyes. Finally, he has a pair of horns on his head, one of which being broken, and a long furred tail.
    • His frame is muscular and appearing almost dehydrated, and he stands at a crisp 6’9”. He has curly black hair kept relatively short and parted at the middle somewhat, long eyelashes, and some scruffy unkempt stubble on his face. Despite how his body looks, he has a relatively youthful face, partially tainted by the wear and tear his lifestyle caused it, most notably the dark circles under his eyes and the small crook in his nose from having it broken so many times.
    Life Story
    Childhood -
    • Asïroch was bought at a slave auction when he was five only to be sold again to a relatively large nomadic warrior/mercenary tribe shortly after. He was adopted by a man named Nybbas, a Kathar who was only about ten or eleven years older than him. Asïroch would quickly come to view him as a brother and parental figure, with Nybbas seeing the boy as his own son.
    • Shortly after arriving, he began his training, learning how to use a shotel but being praised for his heavy reliance and preference for his claws.
    • His relationship with Nybbas began to grow strained the older the boy got.
    Adolescence -
    • At fifteen, he would kill his first man. It was in an honor duel for leadership, though Asïroch was simply elected to fight as by the tribe standards, he was a late bloomer and viewed as weak for having never killed someone before. Afterward, he was considered a proper adult in the eyes of the tribe and was celebrated for his achievement.
    • At sixteen, he would kill Nybbas in the climax of a heated feud between the two over another tribe member. This was the unfortunate result of Asïroch being a young and emotional boy in an environment that glorified and praised murder. He would regret this almost immediately, and his love and motivation for the tribe died, leading to him leaving.
    • He didn’t feel the sense of justice he thought he would, and opted to distract himself from these emotions by joining the military to fight in the Dread War. He didn’t see much action outside of a simple skirmish, though, and spent most of his time brawling with other soldiers for coin and other gambley shenanigans.
    • He remained a soldier shortly after the war ended, but was soon discharged after receiving an injury to his shoulder during one of those brawls that left him to be deemed unfit for service.
    • At seventeen he moved to Paärthalaär as a mercenary slaver, using most of his money for opium to help with the chronic pain he now felt in his shoulder. He learned healing magic to use on himself, and also how to operate a small ship as part of a crew.
    Recent Times -
    • After enslaving the wrong group of people, he and his crew were attacked and arrested by a paramilitary group, and he was sentenced to be used in a sacrifice. He was put on a ship to be transported, but managed to escape his cage and get himself onto another ship. He did not know where it was going, but he knew it was probably better than where he was meant to be.
    • After hiding away for nearly a month, the ship finally docked at Regalia, where he was now free to do as he wished.

    Progression Information
    • Warrior Level 2, Rogue Level 1
     
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    Looks good for the most part, only thing I'm going to ask you is to remove Light Mend 1. Perhaps it'd be different if you had other sorcery abilities as well or other medical investments, but considering this character seems to be combat heavy, and doesn't use much magic or have any medical knowledge, it feels out of place and too convenient. Generally, it's a good idea to rely on other people to fix you up. Change that and you're good to go.
     
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    @Acosmism fixed. idk what to do with the extra points so im just gonna save em for ic learning
     
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