Basic Information Full Name: Aryat son of Jolaw Age: 37 Gender: Male Race: Senef Asha / Url Sexuality: Straight Total Points: 47/50 20 Fist Combat (Points Racial Boost) 12 Two Hand Blunt (Points) 10 Sailing Art (Hobby) 9 Clockwork (Points) (Clockwork Biotics, Clockwork Control, Clockwork Technik) 3 Sorcery (Points) (Clockwork) (Dark Curse 2) 3 Roguery (Points) (Wall Climb 3) 6 Metallurgy (Points) (Bronze, Clockwork) 3 Voluism (Points) 3 Admiral Schooling (Points) (Zarmanh College) Body Shape 20 Fist, 5 Sailing, 12 Two Hand Blunt -5 Voluism=32 Physical Stat Muscle God Body Shape Low Body Fat Languages Common [Fluent] Ibeth [Fluent] Oortal Modern Altalar [Fluent] Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Url Racials (To many to list) Clockwork Control Clockwork Biotics Clockwork Technik Wall Climb 3 Dark Curse 2 Body Tail 1 (Kept due to Bested Url) Body Claws 1 (Maintained with Bested Url) (Always activated on feet) Visual Information Eye Color: Orange with specks of red and yellow, with dark-gray eye-whites. Head Style: Bull Skin Color: Dark Brown Fur Clothing: Traditional Elastican Wear Height:8’2 Personality Choose your Character Alignment True Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type Consul Choose your Character's Religion Baskarr Devout Life Story: Born on the Minoorish Isle to his mother Kuri and Father Jolaw descending from a former slave line of Asha who left with the Minoor centuries ago. Aryat grew up respecting his father and following in his trade beginning with small fishing trips as a child. He was also shown by his father how to use his claws quite early, proving to be quite the little scrapper Aryat would commonly get into small fights in rough housing with the other Asha and Url children. He took interest in the Url’s increased strength but realized he had the speed to match that strength so thought little of it. Aryat continued helping his father Jolaw on the ships learning to sail and maintain them himself. Now a young man at the age of fourteen was sent to learn for a few years at the Zarmanh College. After completing his learning he returned home. Around this time that some new crew members were hired, one who was a Bested Url named Kelmus quickly became a friend to Aryat who saw the Url as a rival and a mentor, commonly sparring and working together. It was Kelmus who would teach Aryat about the Url’s philosophy and views on things. Aryat picked up the sledge as a new weapon and tool as he began to become a dependent for repairs to the family ship. At the age of twenty Aryat decided to accept Urldom from Kelmus and underwent Symbiosis. He decided he wanted to maintain parts of his past life with his new life, and much remained the same for the now Bested Aryat. Becoming an Url he lost his affinity with living metal but gained a new view on life and more. A few years passed and Aryat met a Qadir who was passing through with Clockwork and how the Biotics he had for his missing arm were similar to living metal. Aryat sought to learn this craft so he could once again have some form of connection to the living metal once again. The Qadir, interested in such an odd student, agreed and taught him how to make clockwork and other oddities with it. Aryat around the age of 32 got his own ship and began to do trade routes with it. At the age of 37 Aryat decided to head to Regalia to continue his trade and find more work.
Right, overall this application seems fine, but I'm going to ask that you change the Sorcery Spells you've picked up via Clockwork. The combination of Url Race, Clockwork, Roguery and Combat Proficiencies is far too stacked for my liking. Please remove these spells and feel free to reinvest the points elsewhere. @Malir_Bromtor
@Antimreoir Removed Dark Curse 1 and Bola skill from character, added in place 5 fists. Please see if the stats are a bit more to your liking now Also added Voluism and Admiral Schooling cause boats
You don't maintain the abilities, you do maintain the aesthetic. I'm disallowing technik on an Url. It would be permitted if this character has a clear engineer focus, but they don't. Engineers don't punch people.
@Caelamus Was shelving the character. Not looking to redo the points for a chat that won’t be played for a long time
