Arwen Tordove

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    Q U O T E
    "One word love: Curiosity. You long for Freedom.
    You long to do what you want to do Because you Want it. To act on Selfish Impulse.
    You want to see what it's Like. One Day you won't be able to Resist."
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    ⋅ Basic Information
    • Full Name: Arwen Tordove.
      • Previously Known Aliases: Om’brose Tordove, Om’i, ‘Bro.
      • Current Known Aliases: Drulvaar, Will, Willie Beckett, William, Ar.[​IMG]
    • Age: Twenty-Two.
    • Gender: Male
    • Race: Solvaan Altalar. [​IMG]
      • Previously Cardinal Manathar.
      • Previously Shenath Kathar.
    • Sexuality: Without preference.
    Skill Information ⋅ 〙
    +50 Proficiency Points.
    • Core Group Proficiencies:
      • Fist Combat: 3.
      • Sword Combat :10.
    • Talent Group Proficiencies:
      • Sorcery: 18.
      • Roguery: 15.
    • Hobby Group Proficiencies:
      • Theatre Art: 10 [Free Points]
      • Sailing Art: 2.
      • Musical Art Category: 2.
        • [A red ribbon wrapped pan-flute made of hardened bamboo].
    • Body Shape:
      • Fist Combat [3] + Sword Combat [10] + Theatre Art [5] + Sailing Art [2] = Capped at 20 Body Stat.
      • Athletic Body Shape.
      • Average Body Fat.
    • Languages:
      • Common.
      • Kathar Altalar.
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    〘 ⋅ Special Traits / Spells / Mutations ⋅ 〙
    • Sorcery {Aesthetics Lava & Magma}: [​IMG]
      • ♢ True Path I
      • ♢ Magic Bolt I
      • ♢ Dark Curse I
      • ♢ Darkness I
      • ♢ Element Brand IV
      • ♢ Super Self I
    • Mutations:
      • ♢ Void Sight
        • A darkening of the whites of one’s eyes and the skin surrounding their eyes.
      • ♢ Void Ocular
        • Iris of the eyes can be colored any shade of Gold, Red, or Purple.
    • Roguery:
      • ♢ Packs: Guard Forgery Pack, Sleight of Hand Pack, Burglary Pack [Reserved points for release].
      • ♢ Abilities: Rogue Gift IV, Wall Climb 3.
    • Racial Abilities:
      • Sollerian Mist 1
      • Peace Reign 1
      • Weapon Song 1
      • Battle Dress 1
      • Arcane Mastery 1
      • Arken Sense 1
      • Age Control 1
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    Anything you say Can and Will be held Against you.
    So only say my Name, it will be held against You."
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    〘 ⋅ Visual Information ⋅ 〙
    • Eye Colour: Gold.
    • Hair Colour: Auburn.
    • Hair Style: Shoulder length with two large braids than run down the top of his head.
    • Skin Color: White.
    • Clothing: Stolen clothing.
    • Height: 6’5.
    〘 ⋅ Personality ⋅ 〙
    • Character Alignment || Chaotic Neutral [​IMG]
      • A chaotic neutral character is an individualist who follows their own heart and generally shirks rules and traditions. Although chaotic neutral characters promote the ideals of freedom, it is their own freedom that comes first; good and evil come second to their need to be free.
    • Personality Type || ENTJ-A / ENTJ-T / Commander
      • "Your time is limited, so don’t waste it living someone else’s life. Don’t be trapped by dogma — which is living with the results of other people’s thinking. Don’t let the noise of others’ opinions drown out your own inner voice. And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary."
    • Religion || The Xenophane [4/10]
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    With a slanted smile and a charismatic tone of voice, Arwen can be deemed as an approachable and captivating individual. He holds a congenial atmosphere about him when giving a first impression, aiming to give strangers a reason to believe that he is a trustworthy person despite being a traitor to his own race. At all times the Voidling appears to be alert and keen on those who he speaks to, as though absorbing every word they have to say. Upon further inspection of the Voidling’s character, Arwen’s true feelings often will bleed out into his outwardly behavior. Within a lengthier time of meeting her, he may portray herself with a sense of arrogance and entitlement. One can describe his as patronizing and condescending, bold with his opinions and his actions.
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    After becoming an Altalar after living most of his life as a Kathar, Arwen's personality changed very little. He believes herself to unable to do any wrong and that he is indefinitely right. He is confident in his decisions, especially those made on impulse or out of yearning for thrill in his life. The Voidling is undoubtedly proud of his success and is certain that he will always be triumphant with any choice he may take into action, even irrational thoughts. Arwen is also a passionate person, especially towards those who may betray his or his kin, ironically. He harbours little to no remorse to those who he has hurt, justifying his malicious actions as he goes.
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    Arwen’s loyalty and devotion is placed in the hands of those that think alike to her. Arwen’s family and friends are who he feels most relaxed around and compassionate towards. Around his own kind, Arwen opens up and often cracks teasing jokes. He often treats anyone of his like minded thoughts as though they’re his brother and sister, vowing to protect and care for them despite knowing them for either a long or short period of time. However, it is not rare to discover that Arwen has either bluffed, hurt, or betrayed those who he holds dearly for the sake of kicks.
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    Arwen still lacks most morals, as any Kathar would. Even though he no longer is obligated serve the Dread Empire, he still thrives on chaos due to years kept in line as a Dread soldier for as long as he was. Arwen feels little regret for his malicious tendencies since he was raised to believe that those who are weak do not have place in Aloria; Ailors especially so. Even though he may seek to change so that he may adapt to the world around her, the mentality that he was raised in clings to her, mayhem following each footstep.[​IMG]
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    "Letting people Down is my Thing, find Yourself a new Gig.
    This town aint Big enough for Two of Us."
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    Valarosta Baal'ial || Eldest Sister || ♪♫♬
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    Gwelurin Venphyra || Closest Friend || ♪♫♬
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ || Trust
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Affection
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ || Bond
    Lau’rella Vanema || Close Friend || ♪♫♬
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    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Affection
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ || Bond
    Tullion Kearney || Close Friend || ♪♫♬
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    Cephaelia Thallassen || Friend || ♪♫♬
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    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Bond
    Merilya Jouhari || Friend || ♪♫♬
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Trust
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    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Bond
    Andrathath Vaell'aer || Friend || ♪♫♬
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Trust
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    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Bond
    Kaze Takenaka || Friend || ♪♫♬
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Trust
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Affection
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Bond
    Sophie Perrot || Friend || ♪♫♬
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ || Trust
    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Affection
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    Hagmer || Foe || ♪♫♬
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    ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬢ ⬡ ⬡ ⬡ || Hatred
    〘 ⋅ Life Story ⋅ 〙
    Birth - Childhood〙
    ♢ Om’brose was conceived between Erran Drulvaar and Ylsirra Drulvaar.
    ♢ Om'brose was to be taken away from his family to be raised in a militaristic temple in the city of Paärthalaär to be raised as a soldier.
    ♢ The young Kathar was raised without ties to his blood-kin, leading his to yearn for companionship within the Temple, however this thirst was never quenched due to the brutal and competitive conditions.

    Early Adolescents- Adulthood〙
    ♢ Bred to only seek out destruction and chaos, Om’brose enthusiastically accepted his purpose and that he was meant for nothing more than malicious intent. He devoted his time and emotions to fulfill his birthright, accepting many deceitful personality traits such as arrogance, betrayal, manipulating; any means that may bring his on top.
    ♢ The Kathar found that manipulation and scheming was simply nature to her, soon to depend on such tactics.
    ♢ After Om’brose’s time in the temple, he returned to his family home with a bitter taste in his mouth and an aching need to spark chaos within Alora. After being reacquainted with his kin, his eldest sister Tavyani agreed to take off down their own warpath.
    ♢ Om’brose and Tayvani spent many years traveling from the Shadow Isles, the Kathar Steppes, and back to Paärthalaär. They enjoyed the time spent away from any major attachments that would keep them in one place for too long. On their adventure they created many friendships along the way, such as Irvan Draylas, Zai Calajar, Lorith and his brother Kel’raneth, and many others that Om’brose soon would view as his new family unit.
    ♢ Around the age of fifty-five, the sisters decided to break away from the Dread Empire to somewhere peaceful, settling on the Yang Tzu Isles. Despite their small enjoyment in such a quiet led life, the sisters itched for the satisfaction of their previous crime filled life.
    ♢ With word of Arken active in Regalia, the sisters immediately bounded off to the archipelago. They wrote to the friends that they made along the way in their travels to reunite in the Unionist-led city, promising chaos in return for the treatment of Kathar by the Ailor in Regalia.

    Present - Role-Play Influenced〙
    ♢ The sisters and the band of Kathars arrived in Regalia to see first hand the abuse that the Kathars inflict on their kin. As a group, they vowed to make a change and avenge those who were abused at the hands of the Ailors in the archipelago.
    ♢ Om’brose grew to take leadership of their ragtag group by the name of The Disciples. However unable to stand on their own in a city such as Regalia Om’brose created an alliance with A’eollaja Ello’janna to create a Kathar community within the sewers to hide away from prying eyes.
    ♢ The group of Kathar were challenged with many obstacles while performing the task of chaotic Dread Loyalists. Om’brose and the community created many foes, including Uwell who he expected to stand in line with which led his to doubt his own self.
    ♢ Later on, Om’brose forced an Exist Silven by the name of Wesley Crawford to care for his wellbeing. Due to being forced to spend time with one another, the two found a middle ground of appreciation for one another’s differences and he soon became more accepting towards those outside of his race. Along with the influences of Wesley Crawford, Tullion Kearney, Sophie Perrot, and Charle Perrin, Om’brose seeked out other friendships with Non-Kathar that would soon lead his to question the task he was given as a Dread Soldier
    ♢ After an unfortunate loss during a high-stake raid within Regalia, Om’brose was captured by the Regalian guards and then held captive. During his time within the cellblock of Greygate, the Kathar would begin to doubt his quest and found that he no longer wished to be a martyr for the Dread Empire. He discovered startling passions and kindness in Regalia that he would and could have never pictured whilst in the Temple of Paärthalaär. The Kathar soon committed herself to his decision to abandon the Dread Empire after being offered a chance to be reborn by Griffin, the Pride Arken.
    ♢ The Kathar soon abandoned his ties to the Dread Empire, vowing to serve only herself and transformed into a Manathar via baptism in the Black Temple. He soon would pick up a name to signify his reborn mentality and appearance, Arwen.
    ♢ Arwen, shortly after accession, married Astaroth Crawford and became Arwen Tordove-Crawford.
    ♢ To gain his rights, whether or not he was happy with the position, Arwen became a Gilded Templar Violet, serving Greygate and the Regalian Empire as a guard.
    ♢ Hiz work within the Gilded Templars came to an abrupt end when he was caught working with the Sanguine of the sewers to take over the districts of Regalia. Soon, he fled to the sewers herself to join them in an alliance that was purely made due to the boredom that swept over her.
    ♢ Cut short due to a failed assassination of a noble as well as execution warrants that flew about for the heads of herself and Merith Wyrmwood, Arwen soon took off to Daenshore to take refuge away from the law that sought his for his crimes. During these times, his marriage unfortunately fell to bits after Wesley Crawford took off.
    ♢Without ties to a marriage nor the responsibilities to be loyal to the vow, the Solvaan soon took to the Daen sea. Preoccupying his time on a less than legal abiding ship, Arwen would become introduced to many different new skills including that of forgery, smuggling, as well as rookie tier experience at sailing. It was here as well that he picked up the practice of the pan-flute.
    ♢Due to the rumours of war between the Regalian Archipelago and the Allorn Empire, Arwen soon found herself returning to Regalia.[​IMG]
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    "I want to Teach you a Lesson in the Worst kind of Way,
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    〘 ⋅ In-Character Inventory ⋅ 〙
    Items on Arwen at all Times.

    Leather Satchel's Inventory
    • Two fist sized orbs of metal a blue piece of fabric, a couple of matches [stolen].
    • A Medical Kit from the Morbus Imperium
      • Tourniquets x4.
      • Rubyflower Intensoid x2.
      • Rolls of Fabric Bandages x4.
    Leather Coin Pouch
    • [12/14/2021] 300 Regals.
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    Hi, I'm claiming your app for review.
     
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    Hello, sunshine! ♥
    • Remove Kayth from her race and simply replace it with Shenath.
    • You only have 10 points invested in the Light Bow Combat. Please adjust both the count and the subsequent total for your Body score.
    • Ritualistic She'llaq is not a spoken language or one she would have access to without the investment of Kathar Ritualism. Either invest six points or remove this please!
    Make these changes in blue and tag me when you're done!
     
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    Changes were made, however nothing was truly added but instead removed. Nothing to change to blue.
     
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    I updated the proficiency points accordingly for Om'brosa's new magic!
     
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    @Athelois Updated age, Silven permissions added, and adjusted life story accordingly.
     
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    Update:
    • Switched first muter to Divine Bond and removed Valeia.
    • Updated proficiency points to copy +10 proficiency points from Wesley Crawford.
     
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    Still approved!
     
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    I swear this is the last update.

    Update:
    • Proficiency Points: Added +10 unarmed combat from Great Gang status.
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    HRNNG NO. NEVER.
     
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    MrNoot1 Let there be Noot

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    Oh, btw. Your +10 Heavy Bow would be +20 to Body Stat instead of +10, given that it is a heavy type weapon. Your overall total for the Body Stat would be 40 instead of 30.
     
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    studsonsc the only son.

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    studsonsc the only son.

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    @Athelois

    Complete template/character update.
     
  19. Arendan

    Arendan didn't see graphite

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    Approved.
     
  20. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Switched Silven muter from Voidborn to Charmborn @Arendan
     
  21. Arendan

    Arendan didn't see graphite

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    I'm going to need a 5-page essay on how this change has influenced your character's worldviews, philosophies and life.
     
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  22. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Gonna create conflict with guards and push antag story lines duh.
     
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    studsonsc the only son.

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    I decided to adjust Arwen's age to be younger due to her personality/behavior, so more than ten points were tossed around!

    @Arendan
     
  24. Arendan

    Arendan didn't see graphite

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    Hello Katiesc, here is my review for your character:

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    The right side is longer than the left, this puts your middle symbols off centre, which is a crime against humanity, and honestly should be grounds for rejection.
     
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  25. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    STOP BULLYING MEEEEE
     
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  26. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Doesn't rlly need approval, but I added her magic back @Arendan
     
  27. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    I added some awesome art given to me by @alianon, praise
     
  28. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Adjusted prof points.
     
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    Athelois visceral bitch

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    Fix your proficiencies, turd.
     
  30. Winterless

    Winterless The MVP of Romance RP

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    Fix your proficiencies, turd.
     
  31. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    THERESOTHERAPPSTOBEAPPROVEDI'LLDOITLATER
     
  32. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Bump bump buckaroo.
     
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    abberants hater of men

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    hey 'BRO
     
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    JokerLupus <insert something here>

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    WHEREJOAHUH?? @Katiesc
     
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  35. booette

    booette liar and milf lover Staff Member Lore1

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    Well done, approved!
     
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  36. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Big ol' overhaul of character.

    Updates:
    • Basic Information: Name, age, and race changes.
    • Prof Points: I tossed them around some (I added points to linguistics and magic).
    • Personality: Additional / optional personality was updated to reflect development.
    • Life Story: Some recent developmental RP was added.
    @apath
     
  37. booette

    booette liar and milf lover Staff Member Lore1

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    re-approved, pardner
     
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  38. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    just gonna request an official reject @apath
     
  39. studsonsc

    studsonsc the only son.

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    Bumping for a new reviewer.

    Over All Changes:
    • Updated to new proficiency system.
    • Removed mentions of Silvenism and Mage abilities.
    • Updated life story.
     
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  40. fantuinn

    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for review.​
     
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