╔ † Spoiler: Music † Spoiler: Art @Lumiess @Ignorantus @WaterDruppel 《✿ ♛ Basic Information ›Full Name: Araidith Madeleine Alysanne Amalao-Deceres ›Age: 21 (3rd November, 282AC) ›Gender: Female ›Zodiac: Scorpio ›Race: Avanthar/Other mix-descent -- child of a halfbreed and a thirdbreed. ›Main Ambition: Popularity ›Special Permission: N/A † ♛ Skill Information ›School: Griffer ›Level: Fighter ›Source: School of Griffer 《✿ ♛ Visual Information ›Eye Color: Dull blue. ›Hair Color: Jet black. ›Hair Style: Left down, straight ›Skin Color: Fair. ›Clothing: A corseted, long sleeved maroon shirt with a greyish green scarf wrapped around her waist. A maroon short skirt over greying pants, and high-thigh steel toed leather boots. ›Height: 6’0 ›Body Build: Toned ›Weapon of Choice: A simple dagger or a Griff blade if she gets her hands on one. † ♛ Personality and Abilities ›Others: Strangers may see Araidith as being emotionless, even if she'll try and smile and be generally nice to those she hasn't met before, it seems a little forced. Others may perceive her as standoffish, maybe scowling at someone for coming up to her, or blatantly asking who they are. In other cases, she seems to be challenging, especially towards guards and inquisitors, possibly asking too many questions in a way that may seem like she's refusing coperation. As well as forced, Araidith could also be described as abrasive and she usually changes sadness to anger, snapping at whoever has upset her. ›Herself: Araidith thinks she's kind of useless. She feels worthless a lot, especially in her appearance. If she were to explain her facial appearance, she'd call herself generic, and boring, since most people in Regalia have black hair, blue eyes. She finds it hard to take compliments, usually flushing red and/or stutters but forcing a not-so-genuine thank you out of her. In terms of her form and body, she's not too bothered by it; in fact, she's quite proud of it as she worked hard to learn to fight. ›Friends & Family: Around friends and family, she's a lot less forced. She's caring towards her friends and most of her family, and will try her best to redeem herself if something happens between herself and someone else. If she were to do any of her family or friends wrong, it wouldn't take her long to apologise or pretend it never happened. She has a soft spot for anyone crying or anyone in distress, automatically feeling empathy and the need to comfort them, however she only does so if she has some form of positive relation to them, such as friends or family. ›Morality: Araidith could be described as a chaotic neutral character. She has a major fear of abandonment, which is why she tries her best to redeem herself after an argument with someone she cares about. When she's angry or stressed, she usually resorts to either smoking or alcohol, but she does usually try not to and to deal with it properly. She had been raised not to cry, feeling it would show weakness; she aspired to be like her father, strong and fearless. 《✿ ♛ Talents ›Sewing Taught by her mother, Araidith took a create interest in sewing and creating clothing. She spent most of her free time when she wasn’t at school practicing sewing with her mother and improving her skills. The clothing she’s able to make is decent enough and she prefers to design and create her own clothing, trusting no one to make them except her mother. ›Designing/sketching As well as sewing, Araidith would doodle on any spare paper or parchment she’d find around the house, sometimes even on school work. While around Regalia, she has a tendency to look at people’s clothing, taking colour choices and designs and then tried to draw them later on when she could. As well as that, she would sketch faces and figures. ›Fighting Preferably wanting to be a Blackmark, but stuck with Griffer. Firstly taking an interest in her father’s training, Araidith was also keen on fighting and being like her father. During the four years she spent at School of Griffer, she worked her hardest to achieve warrior level, though only achieved fighter which she’s still proud of. † ♛ Life Story 《 Birth-Adolescence Born to Alraesonynn Deceres and Madeleine Amalao on 3rd November, 282AC Up until she was about three, Madeleine left her with Alraesonynn most of the time. When she was almost four, Alraesonynn and Madeleine got ‘married’, because Madeleine had fallen pregnant again. Her brother, Lillon, was born in 286AC as a legitimate child, who later became one of her best friends. Her father never allowed her to do much, only allowing her to wander the city with him or her mother. When she was of age, Araidith started going to school, as it was paid for by Erfaron Draylas, her step-grandfather and godfather. Ara never liked school, finding it boring and useless. While she was at school, she never really had any friends and her parents couldn't afford Lillon to attend. In her free time, she would spend her time sketching the buildings of Regalia, dresses she'd seen of Noble women and practicing figures with her brother as well as learning to sew and create clothing by her mother. 《 Teenage years-Today Became very interested in fighting and her dad’s training, though Nyn always refused to teach her or let her go to school for fighting. At sixteen, Araidith managed to persuade Nyn to allow her to become a Griffer and so she stopped going to school. She also got a septum and eyebrow piercing and her parents gave the last of the money to Lillon for a few years education. During the four years at Griffer, she was taught herself that she mustn't cry, because it would show signs of weakness. Spent 4 years at School of Griffer, achieving fighter level, and pierced her helix. Found out she had more than two siblings; Alistair and Jessamyn Auylie, bastard children of her dad. Started working for her mother at her tailor shop as an assistant. Allowed her half brother, Alistair, to live with her. 《✿ ╝
Personality: Add two more sentences to the first paragraph. Within the second paragraph, you state that she would consider herself ugly. If so many others had the same facial features as her, wouldn't she be considered normal or average? Make the above edits in a different colour and tag me afterwards! @Ignorantus
Edits done! Removed 'ugly' from her second paragraph, and added two more sentences to the first. Not sure if it's enough, so say so if it's not! @Vegemiite
You only made the two sentences in the first paragraph longer. You still need to add two more for a minimum of four sentences.
