Approved Sheet Anyechka Byuakov

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    Basic Information (Required)

    • Full Name: Anyechka Natalya Byuakovora
      • Call Me: Annya
        • Nickname: Anna, Annya, Ani
    • Age: 37
    • Gender: Female
    • Race: Kathar
      • Subrace: Oscithar
        • Affliction: Crimson Witch
    • Sexuality: Pansexual
    • Preferred Weapon: Fists
    Skill Information (Required)

    Total Points: 50

    • +15 Fist Combat Skill [ 15 Invested ]
    • +6 Alchemy Science [ 5 Invested ]
      • Common Alchemy
      • Healing Alchemy
    • +5 Medical Science [5 Invested ]
    • +3 Linguistics:
      • Kathar Altalar
    • +9 Arcanology:
      • Artifactism
      • Archblood Knowledge
      • Arken Knowledge
    • +6 Volacorum:
      • Void Pack
      • Monster Pack
    • +3 Sorcery:
      • Magic Bolt I
      • Dark Curse I
    • +3 Roguery:
      • Rogue Gift IV
    • +10 Cooking Art [ 10 Hobby Points ]

    Body Stat:

    • Body Stat: 15 Body Stat
    • Body Shape: Ripped Body Shape
    • Body Fat: Low Body Fat
    Languages:
    • Ibeth - Mother Tongue
    • Modern Altalar - Father Tongue
    • Common - Free
    • Kathar Altalar - Linguistics
    Special Abilities:
    • Serve the Void
    • Exist Nonexist
    • Arken Sense I
    • Arcane Mastery I
    • Inth Gift III
    • Mind Wall II
    • Magic Sight III
    • Mind Surge IV
    • Sorcery Skill I
    • Darkness IV
    • Darkness V
    • Darkness VI
    • Abyssal Body I
    • Abyssal Body II: Annya's abyssal transformation is a female Feka, half Asha, half Fin'ullen Altalar, with fair skin, blue eyes, and jet black hair. Standing at 5'7 with a ripped body shape,
    Visual Information (Required)
    • Eye Color: Starlight solid black with shining crimson flecks.
    • Hair Color: Jet black with ombre hues.
    • Hair Style: Tucked into a bun
    • Skin Color: Grey with blackened stripes
    • Clothing: Simple dock garbs
    • Height: 6'2

    Personality and Abilities (Required with Choice)

    Option Two: The Core List

    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Chaotic Neutral
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • INFJ-A The Advocate
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Odella Worship [ 9 / 10 ]

    Life Story (Required)

    • Anyechka Natalya Byuakov, was born to an Altalar Father and an Asha mother in the Spring of 288 A.C. in Mirnoye's city of Talon.
    • Anyechka grew up her city and well her smaller towns laughing stock. She was highly criticized for her halfling race among the Ailor civilization, and didn't attend school like most wealthy slavers children did. Instead she was put to work by her own father, in order to assist in production form a young age of ten, Anyechka learned discipline and participated in hard farm work and labor.
    • As Anyechka grew into her teenage years she was lightened up from her work with her father and found alot of freetime. In the interim she would go to the wild moshpit fights of Vladno wrestling and streetfights. Consistently betting away her coin which her fathers job paid her.
    • In this time, Anyechka also began to work within the sphere of the fight world, and took up a trainer which taught her how to fight herself. As she moved under tutorage of a mentor in unarmed arts, as she became a mix of speed and strength in the street fighting community in Talon.
    • During this time, Anyechka would abandon her position in her fathers laborforce for militia, as she was very much scrutinized for her race and role as a woman. She picked up skills in the blade and healing skills as a medic for light injuries, as she learned how to become a more proficient fighter, the young half-Varran's focus seemed to be the best in combat she could be.
    • Later, the teenage halfling continued to work her way up, staying relatively at the bottom for more proficient male fighters in her league, none the less. The teenage halfling moved from her parents home and became a full time militant, as she continued to enhance her skills as a fighter and soldier. Whilst in the militia however, the halfling became close with a member, and learned of the their vampiric secrets, and became interested in acquiring the powers herself. As she was given the guaranteed shot at becoming one, she ingested blood of a vampire.
    • Eventually, the halfling grew tired and yearned for more yet she weren't getting it in the militia. She seemed stuck in a rut in her position and suck out more freedom, and had no plans staying back in the hellhole of home. She packed what little belongings she had, and moved to sail herself to Regalia. Where she's discovered her rocky common and terrible communication is an issue as she seeks to continue to improve herself.
    • Anneke having stayed with the Crimson Witches of crookback for extended periods of time, eventually began to adopt their culture, their customs and eventually even their faith. Having over the course of months grown to be accepted and become one of them, after her dread rebirthing into a Kathar, Annya found herself rebirthed as an Abyssal Crimson Witch.
     
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    Claimed for Aspirant review.
     
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    I've found only a few issues, all of which are an easy fix
    1. Combat Proficiciencies is totalled as 20 when you only have 15.
    2. Your body stat should only be 17.5, not 20, as Athletic training only grants half a point per proficiency invested.
    3. I'd like for you to expand upon when exactly 'INFJ-A The Advocate' is so that we can have a better understanding on your character's personality beyond a mere technical term.
    Once these changes are made I'll gladly mark your character sheet as approved!
     
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    I believe I made the necessary changes, went in depth on that personality as you wished. Made the easy edits of stat miscalculations my b! Everything should be in order now!
     
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    catgirl go uwu nya!!
     
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    babebeeyyy!!!! Cat girl meetings are at 5 PM EST, i hope to see you there!!! c:
     
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    @Arhbi I shuffled 5 of my hobby points back into culinary for that sweet cooking rp. Just noting here!
     
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    Did a slight age up on this one, as well as some adding of vampire mutations, requesting re-review!
     
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    Reapproved.
     
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    @Arhbi Criminal Revitalization for Anna, went through and did some point switchin'. Requesting re-review.
     
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    app up 2 date chief
     
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    A reminder that you have 10 hobby and 10 talent points that you can also use. Make sure to mention where your points come from in parenthesis. Approved.
     
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    bit of an update. Changed out Karmark Howl for Karmark Steel.
    Changed race/subrace to reflect with the new Asha update.
    General proficiency update.
    Need a re-review.
     
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    Massive update including the following: Racial shift to Kathar via Dread Rebirthing Ritual from Asha/Altalar mix, affliction shift to crimson witch, proficiency update to correspond to the new update, body stat updates, language updates, and finally abilities are rehashed in a neat section including Annya's Abyssal Body II shift.
    Need a re-review.
     
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    @Staff Roleplay need a new reviewer, as my previous reviewer for this application is no longer staff.
     
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    @nath_n Hello I have claimed this app for review, expect a response within 36 hours.
     
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    @nath_n Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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