Basic Information: Full Name: Anthonin Dorien Valeur; Anthony Dorien Valeur Nickname: "Fletcher" Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Ithanian Ailor Main Ambition: To become known as a great musician and orchestrator throughout Regalia, and to travel beyond Regalia Skill Information: + 20 Proficiency Points: +15 Common Shortbow (+5 from Points, +10 from School of Huntverk +10 Trapping (+10 from School of Huntverk) +10 Tracking (+10 from School of Huntverk) +5 Acrobatics (+5 from Points) + 20 Culture Points +2 Vocal Music (+2 from Points) +2 Stage Performance (+2 from Points) +11 Instrumental Music (+11 from Points) +5 Musical Theory (+5 from Points) Languages: 10/10 Common 10/10 D’Ithanie 7/10 Dressolini Dialect Visual Information: Eye Color: Rich Emerald Green (Example.) Hair Color: Chocolate Brown (Example) Hair Style: Short flow, well kemp Skin Color: A deep tan (Example) Clothing: A blue tunic with silver lining and borders, black pants Height: 6’ 3’’ Body Build: Athletic Weapon of Choice: Common Shortbow Personality and Abilities: First Paragraph: Anthonin was born the youngest of his parent's, and was able to easily see all the flaws of his older siblings. Watching all their mistakes when around other people got him to be careful to avoid their same mistakes. Anthonin always tries to be on the goodside of people, tending to do whatever the person wants of him, so long as it seems rational. Anthonin is also very gracious, and does not enjoy accepting gifts from others as it makes him feel as though he owes them something. He always tries his best to make others happy, as it makes him happy himself. When it comes to woman, though, Anthonin's flirtatious side gets the best of him. When around woman that Anthonin could be "interested" in, he can't help but try to win them over. This is satisfactory to him, as it makes him feel content in a way. Along with this, Antonin usually proves successful in this way. He Despite him being sociable in these ways, Anthonin is very susceptible to manipulation. Second Paragraph: Anthonin sees himself as a very well-off person with many skills and talents. He believes he is very capable of handling himself with his many talents. Despite this, Anthonin needs encouragement form others to perform certain tasks in public. He feels that he needs other's approval in order to be 'good' at something. This has affected him in a way that he tends to refrain from doing certain activities, or he may even try to get others to notice him. Along with this, Anthonin has extreme anxiety issues. Whenever he is told to do something that is out of his power or knowledge, he gets a mental breakdown. Sometimes Anothonin's head actually begins to physically ache with the pressure. When he was younger, his father, Nicodeme Valeur, thought that Anthonin had acquired a phobia of sorts. Despite the drastic reactions from his anxieties, the doctors never confirmed any mental disorder within Anthonin. He also has quite a few fears, and much like the anxieties, these can cause him to break instantly and get terrified easily. Spoiler: Fears Fears: Open Spaces - Open bland spaces make Anthonin feel vulnerble in such a way, this is his greatest fear. Dogs - Dogs or any wolf-like creature terrifies Anthonin. Because dogs are often domesticated, Anthonin gets embarrassed when admitting this aspect of him. Vampires and Bats - Ever since the time when his brothers Rodrigue and Christophe played a prank on him involving dressing up as a Vampire, Anthonin has feared Vampires and bats ever since. Third Paragraph: Anthony is surprisingly open with his family. He tends to pour out whole secrets to his family with complete trust that they will keep them. As for friends, he loves to talk. Some of Anthony’s favorite things are debates. Like his family, he enjoys to share brief gossip and truths with his friends, but not as much as his family. Fourth Paragraph: Anthonin often feels guilty whenever someone else is in pain. This has caused him to work hard to improve the lives of those around him, however this may be. This is why he is often seen as a very warm-hearted person. Anthonin cannot say no to anyone or anything unless it is the laws or rules of those superior to him. He has always been the one to follow the rules, as it makes Anthonin feel vulnerable and guilty. When it comes to law, this is even more so. Anthonin has very little knowledge of the law, so this has caused him to beware it to some extent. He has never considered breaking the law in any major way, and most likely never will. Spoiler: Relationships Relationships: Family: Friends: Associates: Life Story: Born 287 AC: Anthonin was born to Nicodeme and Celestin Valeur on the twenty-first of April. He was born the youngest of his siblings. Childhood (1-12): Anthonin, when growing up, was a very energetic and photogenic child. He was always smiling. At age eight Anthonin was hired a tutor to gain a career in the musical industry. There, he began to study musical theory and how to play basic string instruments. By age nine, Anthonin had found his niches in instrumental music, being the violin and viola, as well as musical theory. At this time, Anthonin had become quite fond of music, and he dreamed of becoming one of the greatest orchestrators in the Regalian Archipelago. By age eleven, Anthonin was capable of composing minor pieces of art. He could easily play any string instrument you gave him, and when it came to the violin and viola, the two instruments worked like extensions of his body, as Anthonin could easily sight read complex pieces with them. Teenage-hood (13-19): Anthonin, while continuing his studies in the musical arts, finds a deep enjoyment in hunting. At age thirteen, his father hires a tutor to teach him how to handle a bow, Most days, after completing his studies, Anthonin goes out into the woods to hunt. He finds a niche in climbing trees, and from up high he strikes down on the wild prey below. By age seventeen, Anthonin has grown quite skilled in archery, and even more so in music. After turning eighteen, Anthonin ended up joining a well-known orchestra within Regalia. Present Day (20): Now, Anthonin has left his spot in the orchestra, only to join the Gilde de la Teatrali, a fast-growing music organization within Regalia.
Adjust to saying (+2 from Points). Understand he is completely unable to use this really at all as a weapon of choice with 0 proficiency in it. Sure he can fire it, but would be useless with it. This paragraph probably needs a complete redo. This tells me nothing about the character than he: 1. Isn't spoiled. 2. Is flirtatious. You're going to need to talk more about how this character is around strangers, how he is perceived and how he carries himself publicly. This needs more expansion. You didn't go into any detail about his confidences at all. How he feels about himself and his abilities, etc. You got really off-topic here. Try doubling back and talking about his morals, as well as his opinion on law and order in the world he lives in. This is far too skimpy. You really need to expand on this a bit. I also have no idea why his wealthy parents would send him to Silverwind, alone, then let a Shendar teach him about how the Void and Exist works. Also, do not try to sneak this in without having any proficiency points in Planar knowledge. Make changes in purple and @ me when done.
Understand while being athletic he likely couldn't even pull the bow back. You didn't include anything about fears or anxieties, please do so. This doesn't exist, remove this. State his learning music as simply a tutor. This doesn't exist in lore. Simply say he joined an orchestral group. Make these changes in purple please.
@Mooffins, okay, I think I finally got it right. I corrected myself in the color you gave me, which was purple, not purple. Purple is the third one down in the main purple column. Purple is the fourth one down in the main purple column.
