»»————- ➴ ————-«« ╔═══════════════════════════════╗ ╚═══════════════════════════════╝ ➼Full Name: Anne Elizabeth von Falkenreich née de Piedmont ➼Age: 22 (May 16th, 287) ➼Gender: Female ➼Race: Ailor ➼Lineage: Nautilaan ➼Culture: Imperialized ➼Sexuality: Heterosexual ➼Preferred Weapon: Rapier ➼Total Points: 50 + 10 hobby points + 3 honed skill ➼Alchemy Sciences: 20 ➼Linguistic Sciences: 12 ➸Rapier Combat: 2 ➸Imperial Regalian Naval Academy: 3 (honed skill - nautilaan) ➼ Writing Skills: 5 ➼ Husbandry Art: 5 Spoiler: Wolfram ➼Musical Arts: 5 (5 hobby points) ➼Sailing: 15 (5 hobby + 5 age + 5 racial passive) 1 unused for in game development ➼Physical Stat: 2 (Rapier Combat) ➼Body Shape: Slim ➼Body Fat: Average ➼Common (learned in late childhood) ➼D’Ithanie (first language) ➼Alt Regalian (learned in childhood) ➸Leutz-Vixe (linguistic science) ➼Daendroquin (linguistic science) ➸Genevaud (linguistic science) ➸Modern Altalar (linguistic science) ➸ Old Ceardian (linguistic science - free) »»————- ➴ ————-«« ╔═══════════════════════════════╗ Spoiler: Anne Art by Audianna Spoiler: Anne Art by Faunfire ╚═══════════════════════════════╝ ➼Eye Color: Blue ➼Hair Color: Brown ➼Hair Style: Worn up in a bun, though occasionally worn down. ➼Skin Color: Pale skin with pink undertones and rosy cheeks. ➼Clothing: Silk dresses, normally blue. ➼Height: 5’4 ➼Alignment: Lawful Neutral ➼Personality Type: Campaigner The campaigner is a free-spirited social butterfly, and is very creative. They spend a lot of time and energy on their relationships with others, and are often known as “people pleasers”. Despite this, the campaigner is very independent, and knows how to relax. ➼Religion: Unionism 8/10 »»————- ➴ ————-«« ╔═══════════════════════════════╗ ╚═══════════════════════════════╝ 【Childhood】 Anne de Piedmont was born in Ithania to a wealthy, unionist family. From a young age, Anne was provided with many educational opportunities, ranging from etiquette to mathematical studies. While she was well taught in many subjects, she took a particular interest in both alchemy and linguistic sciences. Anne excelled in all of her studies and frequently immersed herself in both literary and musical arts, showing a distinct talent for the pianoforte. However, her constant studying consequently led to strained relationships with her siblings, as she did not spend very much time with them. Anne’s parents, on the other hand, were very prominent during her childhood. Her mother was strict on etiquette and a proper education, and frequently monitored her academic progression. In addition, Anne was encouraged from a young age to dress in a proper and acceptable fashion. This confused her, as she often saw her neighbors gallivanting around in more revealing articles of clothing, but nevertheless, she abided by her mother’s rules. Anne’s father taught her alongside her siblings in the practice of sailing, as well as the commanding of a ship. While this did not particularly interest Anne, she was a quick learner and retained the information she needed in order to perform well. Around nine years old, Anne made acquaintances with the next door neighbors whom she had neglected to introduce herself to in previous years. It didn’t take long for Anne to pity the poor children; not only were they Altalar, but they were also incapable of speaking d’Ithanie. In an attempt to help the children, Anne began to teach them a few simple d’Ithanie words, though her tutoring would be cut short by her father, who insisted she keep her distance from the elvish children. While she heeded his warning, she continued to harbor a need to help others throughout her childhood and into adulthood. At age eleven, the de Piedmont family moved to Ostiermark. It was here that Anne would learn the Leutz-Vixe dialect. 【 Adolescents 】 When Anne was fourteen years of age, her mother passed away unexpectedly. Wanting to make her mother proud after her passing, Anne threw herself into her studies and clung to her mother’s values. However, while the death of her mother was tragic, it ultimately brought her closer to her siblings, specifically the eldest, Violetta. Not long after, the de Piedmont Trading Company expanded to the City of Regalia, and the family moved with it. Moving to Regalia proved to be a cultural shock for the young and impressionable Anne. She was both curious and frightened about the vast array of cultures that roamed about the streets. Luckily, Anne met a New-Regalian boy around her age by the name of Till. Although Till first met Anne with a rather condescending and arrogant attitude, the two became fast friends after trading ideologies. However, while they agreed on most everything, their opinions differed on the topic of abberants. Anne was rather forgiving towards the crimes of criminals, believing that they would be saved by the Spirit if they repented for their sins, but Till believed that all abberants were unearthly scum who deserved to suffer for simply being born. Despite their disagreement on this matter, Till and Anne remained close friends for the next five years, during which Anne delved into her linguistic and alchemic interests. She was quick to learn the language of Daendroquin, and was talented at creating concoctions capable of healing small wounds. However, her advancements in alchemy were limited by her access to a proper education in the city. Her father decided it would be best for her to return to Ithania to gain an advanced education at L'Académie de Bouteil de Mordealé, which she found herself both excited and nervous to attend. At L'Académie de Bouteil de Mordealé, Anne discovered herself to be a black sheep among a white herd. She had little to nothing in common with the other girls, so she often kept to her bedroom and books. Anne found comfort in the Spirit at this time too, often visiting the chapel for prayer and reflection. Although she was often alone, Anne was rather content in her solitude, left to practice the pianoforte and study in peace. During the time she spent with her classmates, she was able to pick up on the Modern Altalar dialect, eventually deciding to teach the language to herself. { Adulthood } Anne continued to excel in her studies at the academy for five years, receiving top marks up until graduation. Once she had completed her schooling, she decided to move back to Regalia to be with her family. Upon her return, she was reminded of her love and curiosity for the city, and she quickly became a vibrant social butterfly. As a Unionist, Anne believed it was her duty to help others in following the Spirit, regardless of race. She often pitied those less fortunate than her and wished to help them, however, a certain incident would sway her opinions in the opposite direction. After that event, Anne no longer pitied those of lower class, but began to feel rather disturbed in their presence. Although her opinions had changed, she was still aware of when to hold her tongue. Anne continued to be fascinated by both alchemic and linguistic sciences. She became involved in the Morbus Imperium, and later learned the Genevaud dialect from a friend. Wherever her skills were found useful, she was eager to help. When the de Piedmont family reached nobility, Anne felt it was time to express her familial pride and personal opinions in a stronger manner. She renewed her skills in sailing and began to help in the efforts against the Sendrassians as Captain..She picked up a rapier around this time as well, acknowledging her duty to protect herself and her family against possible threats. While she wasn’t incredibly skilled with the weapon, she gained enough experience to understand a few basic moves. Anne continued to be a kind-hearted woman, though she grew to be firmer in her beliefs, always standing up for what she believed to be right. In April of 309, Anne married Reginald von Falkenreich and became known as Anne von Falkenreich.
Hi! I recommend choosing an Ailor Culture and Lineage, I see you've chosen her to be Ithanian in your Lifestory, but you didn't state this in your Basic Information. https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Ailor#Ailor_Lineages
Age changed from 18 to 19, skill points redistributed, religion change from 6/10 to 7/10, hobby points changed and talent points added. Thanks! :)
Sorry to tag you again! Added Admiral Command, 5 hobby and 5 racial boost. Last update for a while, I promise ;)
Hey hawty- I did the same mistake not too long ago. Alchemy points are capped at 20. You also have a racial passive which gives you a plus five in sailing.
@Carlit0o Completely reworked the entire sheet, aged up, points moved around, complete backstory rewrite. Thanks!
So the only hang up is on your linguistics. Your formatting I don't understand so I'll be breaking it down from the total of languages you have and the points you have in Linguistics. You get Common for free and then your two Parent languages. With your four investments into Linguistics that totals you out to six languages besides Common, plus Old Ceardian, since you do have the proper Ailor language investments. So from that right now you have one extra language which you are free to choose which one you remove. Once you complete that go ahead and tag me and I can approve mark your character. @LilBeast_24
